2012届高考英语 书面表达(文字提纲式作文)练习讲评三课件

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•注意:1.对所给要点,逐一陈述,适当发挥,但不要简单翻译;•2.词数150左右。开头和结尾以及提示句已经写好,不计入总词数;•3.信中不得提及考生所在班级及本人姓名。•Goodafternoon,everyone!•Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“MyAttitudetoPursuitofFashioninSchool”….•最近你发现你们学校有些同学追求时髦和高档消费。请你根据下表中所提供的信息,写一篇题为“MyAttitudetoPursuitofFashioninSchool”的英文演讲稿。一、认真审题,确立话题,归纳要点通过审题,我们知道本文的话题为“MyAttitudetoPursuitofFashioninSchool”。围绕这个话题,列出有关现象和原因方面的要点:①我们学校有些同学追求时髦和高档消费;②发型明星式的;③衣服鞋子名牌的;④手机、电脑高档的;⑤追求美;⑥爱面子;⑦感觉很酷;⑧我的看法……二、理顺要点,增加细节,连贯表达本篇书面表达的文字提纲实际上就是按照表达顺序提供的,所以不存在理顺要点的环节。至于所要增加的要点实际上就是“我的看法”。“追求时髦”实际是价值观的的问题,围绕这个问题来谈谈自己的看法。如:①作为学生应该有正确的价值观;②根据穿的用的我们可以这样来谈谈看法:外表酷不等于行为美;是什么才能赢得别人的尊重:作为学生当然是成绩而不是穿的用的是名牌;③我们应该怎么做……三、化解难点,灵活表达,词能达意本篇所给要点和增加的细节比较多,有些要点和细节表达起来还比较棘手。1.化解难点①高档消费liveaveryexpensivelifespendmuchmoremoneyonwhattheywearluxuryconsumption②发型明星式的havehairstyleslikethoseoffamousstarsimitatefilmstarstomakethemselvesupwiththesimilarhairstyles③衣服鞋子名牌的weartopbrandofclothesandshoes•④手机、电脑高档的•useexpensivemobilephonesandcomputers•“高档”不可以用“highquality”来表达•⑤追求美•thepursuitofbeauty•seekbeauty•⑥爱面子•tobesensitiveaboutone'sreputation•tobekeenonface-saving2.变点为句•①我们学校有些同学追求时髦和高档消费•Inourschooltherearesomestudentswhoarekeenonfashionandliveaveryexpensivelife.•Inourschoolthereisahotpursuitoffashion.Somestudentsliveaveryexpensivelife.•Inourschoolthereisahotpursuitoffashionandluxuryconsumption.•②发型明星式的;•Theyimitatefilmstarstomakethemselvesupwiththesimilarhairstyles.•Theyhavehairstyleslikethoseoffamousstars.•③衣服鞋子名牌的•Wearingtopbrandofclothesandshoesistheirfavorite.•Theyweartopbrandofclothesandshoes.•④手机、电脑高档的•Theyhaveveryexpensivemobilephonesand•computers.•Theyuseexpensivemobilephonesandcomputers.•⑤追求美•Theyarefondofseekingbeauty.•Theyhopetolooksmartandspecial.•⑥爱面子•Theyaresensitiveabouttheirreputation.•Theyhighlyvalueothers’respectandrecognition.•⑦感觉很酷•Theyfeelcool.•Itmakesthemfeelcool.•⑧作为学生应该有正确的价值观•Westudentsshouldholdtherightvalues.•⑨外表酷不等于行为美;作为学生当然是成绩而不是穿的用的是名牌;•Ourcoolappearancedoesnotmeanthatwebehavewell.Asforusstudents,whatachievementswehavemaderatherthanwhatbrandwearewearingmakesusrespectable.四、错落有致,连接恰当,发挥有度连接恰当,整理成文Goodafternoon,everyone!Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“MyAttitudetoPursuitofFashioninSchool”.Nowinourschooltherearesomestudentswhoarekeenonfashionandliveaveryexpensivelife.Theynotonlyimitatefilmstarstomakethemselvesupwiththesimilarhairstylesbutalsoweartopbrandofclothesandshoesistheirfavorite.Besides,theyhaveveryexpensivemobilephonesandcomputers.Inmyopinion,thereasonwhytheydosoisthattheywanttoseekbeautyandwouldliketobesensitiveabouttheirreputation.Inaddition,theyfeelverycooltodoso.AsfarAsI’mconcerned,Westudentsshouldholdtherightvalues.Ourcoolappearancedoesnotmeanthatwebehavewell.Asforusstudents,itiswhatachievementswehavemaderatherthanwhatbrandwearewearingthatmakesusrespectable.Ithinkweshouldn’tspendsomuchmoneyonwhatwewearbutshouldsavethemoneytohelpthosewhostillcan’tmakeendsmeet.Thankyouforlistening!参考范文Goodafternoon,everyone!Thetopicofmyspeechtodayis“MyAttitudetoPursuitofFashioninSchool”.Nowinourschoolthereisahotpursuitoffashion.Somestudentsliveaveryexpensivelife.Theyhavehairstyleslikethoseoffamousstarsandweartopbrandofclothesandshoes.Someuseexpensivemobilephonesandcomputers.Personally,Iunderstandwhytheydoso.Firstly,theyhopetolooksmartandspecial.Secondly,theyhighlyvalueothers’respectandrecognition.Inaddition,itmakesthemfeelcool.Inmyopinion,westudentsshouldholdtherightvalues.Itishowwebehaveratherthanhowweappearthatmakesuscool.Itiswhatachievementswehavemaderatherthanwhatbrandwearewearingthatmakesusrespectable.Itishowmuchwecareforothersratherthanhowmuchwespendongiftsandluxuriesthatmakeuscharming.Ithinkitwillmakegreatsensetosavethemoneytohelpthosewhostillcan’tmakeendsmeet.Thankyouforlistening!同步练习高中生在成长的过程中会碰到一些烦恼。就这一话题你班正积极筹备召开一次主题班会。请你依据下表进行必要的思考,并用英语准备一篇到会发言的材料。词数150左右。注意:1.开头已写好,不计入总词数。2.语言通顺,结构严谨。Boysandgirls:Wehighschoolstudentsdohavesomegrowingpains,butwecangetridofthemcorrectlyandwisely.…参考范文•Boys_and_girls:•Wehighschoolstudentsdohavesomegrowingpains,butwecangetridofthemcorrectlyandwisely.First,someofusareupsetabouttheirbodystylesandlooks.It’sunnecessaryandit’snotimportantatall.Weneedn’tcareaboutit.Itisone’sinnerbeautythatmatters.Second,wesometimesseemtobemisunderstoodbyourteachers,parentsandclassmates.Facingthis,wecanfindapropertimetohaveaheartto-hearttalkwiththem,tryingtoremovethemisunderstanding.Someofushavefewerfriends.Ithinkbeingopenmindedandfriendlywilldoyougood.Third,wemayfallbehindothers,whichmakesusstressed.Actuallywecanencourageourselvestoworkefficiently,fullofdetermination.Last,someofusdon’thavemuchpocketmoney,sotheyfeelunhappy.Isn’titstrange?Solongaswehavesome,that’senough.Andwecanlearntospendmoneywisely!•That’sall.Thankyou.

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