By作者Introduceaplacetoyourfriends2014.6CET4Supposeaforeignfriendofyoursisgoingtovisityourhometown/yourcampus/China,whatisthemostinterestingplaceyouwouldliketotakehim/hertoseeandwhy?Whatisthefocusofyourcomposition?IamthrilledtoknowthatyouaregoingtovisitmyhometownandIcan’twaittoseeyouagain.ImisseverythingthathappenedwhenIwasinyourcity,andyourparentsandyouweresokindtomethatIwilltrymybestthistimetomakeyourstayanenjoyableandmemorableone.samplepassagesIamgladtoshowyouaroundmyuniversity.Asweknow,manypeoplefavourtheideathatbeinginthecollegecanberegardedasthebesttimeoflifefortheyoung.Thecampuslifeisenjoyable,precious,andalsocolourful.TodayIwilltellyousomethingaboutinterestingplaceinthiscampus.mypassagesCompoundSentenceIamthrilledtoknowthatyouaregoingtovisitmyhometownandIcan’twaittoseeyouagain.ImisseverythingthathappenedwhenIwasinyourcity,andyourparentsandyouweresokindtomethatIwilltrymybestthistimetomakeyourstayanenjoyableandmemorableone.samplepassagesTheAttributiveClause(定语从句)TheAdverbialClause(状语从句)Iamgladtoshowyouaroundmyuniversity.Asweknow,manypeoplefavourtheideathatbeinginthecollegecanberegardedasthebesttimeoflifefortheyoung.Thecampuslifeisenjoyable,precious,andalsocolourful.TodayIwilltellyousomethingaboutinterestingplaceinthiscampus.mypassagesTheAttributiveClause(定语从句)Therearedifferentopinionsamongpeopleasto…Astheproverbsays…Itgoeswithoutsayingthat…There'snodenyingthefactthat…Nothingismoreimportantthanthefactthat…Myhometown,Changsha,isthecapitalofHunanprovinceandbestknownasthestarcityforitswelldevelopedentertainmentindustryandtourism.Thereareplacesandattractionsworthrecommending,andYueluMountainisthefirstonethatI’dliketointroducetoyou.Firstly,atthefootofYueluMountainistheYueluAcademy.IthasanlonghistoryanditsarchitectureischaracteristicofSongDynasty.Then,afterahalfhourtour,wewillreachtheBirdForest.Therearevariousrarebirdsthere,andtheycansing,perform,andinteractwithus.Afteraboutanhour,wewillarriveatthepeak,BaiyunSummit.Thescenerythereisandwecanhaveawonderfulofthewholecity.THEPHRASES:1.Beknownas(被认为是….)2.Worthdoing(值得去做….)3.Atthefootof(在….的下部)4.Interactwith(与….相互作用)5.Arriveat(到达…..)numerousmanyprominentfamousexceedinglyverybeautifulspectacularpanoramasceneADEVANCEDVOCABULARY:1.ManyNumerous2.FamousProminent3.VeryExceedingly4.BeautifulSpectacular5.ScenePanorama1.Firstly,atthefootofYueluMountainistheprominentYueluAcademy.2.Then,afterahalfhourtour,wewillreachtheBirdForest.3.Afteraboutanhour,wewillarriveatthepeak,BaiyunSummitNARRATIVE:TIMESEQUENCEDISADVANTAGES:THESENTENCEPATTERN1.YueluAcademy’sarchitectureischaracteristicofSongDynasty.ItischaracteristicofSongDynastythattheYueluAcademy’sarchitectureis.2.Afteraboutanhour,wewillarriveatthepeak,BaiyunSummit.Wewillnotarriveatthepeak,BaiYunSummituntilwewalkaboutanhour.NingbouniversityNingbo,ZhejiangProvince.Ithasdevelopedforabout30years.Andafter30,Ningbouniversityhasbecomeattractive.Themainteachingbuildingwhichisbuiltonthenorthsideoftheuniversitylookslike.Itlooksvery.And,ouruniversity’sacademicatmosphereisverygood.Ifyouwanttoexercise,youhavevariouskindsofsportstochoose,suchasbasketball,football,tennisandsoon.Andouruniversityalsohavethecorrespondingfields.Ifyouwantsomethingtoeat,Irecommendyoutogotothediningroomwhosenameisthefirstcanteen.Itisdeliciousthatthefoodinthefirstcanteen.Ouruniversityalsohasalawn,youcanrelaxonitwheneveryouwant.,therearesomanythingsyoucanenjoyinouruniversity.AndIamsurethatyouwillhaveagoodtime.THEPHRASES:1.Belocatedin(位于….)2.Inone’sview(在某人看来)3.Anumberof(大量….)4.Beyondthat(除了….)WORDS:1.Anniversary(周年庆)2.Increasingly(越来越多的)3.Theworse(南天门)4.Majestical(高贵的,庄严的)5.tremendous(巨大的,极好的)islocatedininourstudents’viewanumberofBeyondthatanniversaryincreasinglytheworsemajesticaltremendousSublimationthememodelessay:Ibetyoumustbeveryexcitedaboutalltheseactivities,andtheYueluMountainiswaitingforustoexplore.Allyouneedistopackupandgo,andIassureyouthatthistripwillbeagreatfun.Shouldyouhaveanyquestionandsuggestion,pleaseletmeknow.Iamlookingforwardtoyourarrival.Own:Inshort,ningbouniversityisanewcomprehensiveuniversity,it'sbeautifulandvigorous,itisnowknownbymorepeople,wearelookingforwardtoseeningbouniversitymorebeautifultomorrow.FeatureModel:introducehometownForexample:IbetyoumustbeveryexcitedaboutalltheseactivitiesandtheYueluMountainiswaitingforustoexplore.Own:introducecampusForexample:ningbouniversityisanewcomprehensiveuniversity,it'sbeautifulandvigorous.Common1Wishforplace2InviteothersForexample:andIassureyouthatthistripwillbeagreatfun.wearelookingforwardtoseeningbouniversitymorebeautifultomorrow.Thankyou玩转大学PPT素材更多好素材请访问