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横岗高级中学2019-2020下学期概要写作学案第1页改结构概要写作SummaryWriting学习目标：1.进一步了解句子改写的方法，积极参与练习。2.通过学习，运用句子改写方法进行概要写作的句子改写，提升改写能力。3.灵活选择方法，使得自己的句子改写能准确表达原句意思。Step1：再认识概要写作概要是一篇较长文章本质思想的简洁重述，它要求用尽量少的语言对原文的主旨进行复述。概要不是简单的换句话说，更不是评论，而是作者思想中最基本部分的准确再现。怎样的概要才是一篇好的概要写作？试着完成下面的思维导图。Step2：如何改写？试一试下面的方法！改写Step3：积极练习吧！一、使用近义词或反义词1.Smokingisbadforyourhealth,soyou'dbetterquititassoonaspossible._______________________________________________________________________________2.Withoutusefulmeasures,thisproblemcan'tbesolved._______________________________________________________________________________agoodsummary改单词改词序简单句词序变化近\反义词替换改词性主从句词序变化改语态句式变换固定结构简单句变复合句横岗高级中学2019-2020下学期概要写作学案第2页二、改词性小技巧：be+of+名词=对应的形容词use____________importance____________value____________interest____________benefit____________necessity____________3.Agoodlearningenvironmentwillbeveryvaluabletoeverystudentinourclass._____________________________________________________________________________三、简单句词序变化4.Thefatherisveryproudtohaveanintelligentandprettydaughter.Theintelligenceandbeautyofthedaughter__________________________________________5.YoucanobtainalargeamountofinformationontheInternetnowadays._____________________________________________________________________________四、主从句词序变化6.Thoughtheresulthasbeenpublished,theystilldon’tknowthedetailedinformation._____________________________________________________________________________五、改结构之改变语态7.People'ssatisfactionislargelyincreasedbyasenseofresponsibility._____________________________________________________________________________六、改结构之句式变换8.People'sopinionsaboutthesourceofthenovelcoronavirusareverydifferent._____________________________________________________________________________9.Childrenaregivenmorepraise.Theywillachievemoresuccess.(when引导的状语从句)_____________________________________________________________________________10.Coldandwethavenothingtodowithcatchingcolds.Noonehasyetfoundthereason.(why引导的定语从句)_____________________________________________________________________________Homework:运用今天所学的方法改写下面的主旨句。1.TheOrkneyIslandsareoffthenortherncoastofScotland.2.Buttheislandshavebeenseverelyaffectedbyrisingsealevels,heavyrainfallandsevereweathereventsinrecentyears.3.Now,theseahaseatenawaymuchofthesite’swesternarea.4.Climaterecordsshowthatsince1970,someOrkneybeacheshavenarrowedbyanaverageof40centimetersayearduetoglobalwarming.