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基础写作评讲总结StudyingGoalsLearntocombinesentencesandwritecomplexsentencesinwriting:I.巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：1)借助名词短语做同位语2)借助介词短语做定语3)借助介词短语做状语4)借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语II.巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句III.用好从句(定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句）和引导词写出规范的复合句：Combinethetwosentencesintoone1.Myhistoryteacherisabeautifulwoman.2.Shehastwobigeyesandlonghair.名词短语做同位语→Myhistoryteacher,abeautifulwoman,hastwobigeyesandlonghair.with介词短语做定语→Myhistoryteacherisabeautifulwomanwithtwobigeyesandlonghair.定语从句→Myhistoryteacherisabeautifulwomanwhohastwobigeyesandlonghair.Combinethetwosentencesintoone1.Australiaislocatedinthesmallestcontinent—Oceania.2.Australiaisthesixthlargestcountryintheworld.名词性短语做同位语→Australia,thesixthlargestcountryintheworld,islocatedinthesmallestcontinent.非谓语动词做状语→Locatedinthesmallestcontinent—Oceania,Australiaisthesixthlargestcountryintheworld.Combinethetwosentencesintoone1.Australiaismadeupof6states.2.MelbourneandSydneyarethelargestcitiesinthesixstates.定语从句Australiaismadeupof6states,inwhichMelbourneandSydneyarethelargestcities.Combinethetwosentencesintoone1.Australiacoversanareaof7,686,850squarekilometers.2.Australiahasapopulationof20million.用withAustraliacoversatotalareaof7,686,850squarekilometerswithapopulationofabout20million.and引导的并列句Australiacoversanareaof7,686,850squarekilometersandithasapopulationof20million.定语从句Australiacoversanareaof7,686,850squarekilometerswhosepopulationis20million.Combinethetwosentencesintoone1.Australiaisfamousforitsbrightsunshine,countlesssheepandcattleanditsuniquewildlife.2.Thetouristsfromallovertheworldcometoenjoyitsscenery.状语从句BecauseAustraliaisfamousforitsbrightsunshine,countlesssheepandcattleanditsuniquewildlife,thetouristsfromallovertheworldcometoenjoyitsscenery.背景：草原上狼群和羊群之间的故事主要角色喜羊羊:聪明伶俐，乐观勇敢，是羊族的小英雄主要角色灰太狼：带着一顶带补丁的黄帽子，它贪婪但无论怎样总抓不住羊评价：童趣但不幼稚，启智却不枯燥成绩：迄今推出了玩偶，图书，游戏等相关产品；获得很多奖项[写作要求]1.使用5个句子表达全部的内容。2.句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。写作内容：Let’smakepreparations.Ⅰ.Usefulwordsandexpressions:•以…为背景•草原•主要角色•羊族•乐观•童趣•启智•迄今•推出•奖项•相关的besetin/on…grasslandsmain/leadingcharactergoatfamilyoptimistic/holdapositiveattitudetowardlifefunnyinspiringuptonowputforwardawardrelevantLet’stranslatethesimplesentences!.Ⅱ.Translatethefollowingsentences:•这个动画片以生活在草原上的羊群和狼群为背景。•故事童趣但不幼稚，启智却不枯燥。•喜羊羊是主要角色之一。•喜羊羊是羊族的小英雄。•喜羊羊聪明伶俐，乐观勇敢。•贪婪的灰太狼总是带着一顶带补丁的黄帽子。•无论怎样，它总是抓不住羊。•由于取得巨大成功，迄今卡通公司获得很多奖项，并推出了玩偶，图书，游戏等相关产品。这个动画片以生活在草原上的羊群和狼群为背景。1.Thiscartoonseriesissetonthegrasslandswherethegoatsandwolveslive.故事童趣但不幼稚，启智却不枯燥。2.Thestoriesarefunnybutnotchildish,inspiringbutnotboring.喜羊羊是主要角色之一。OneofthemaincharactersisPleasantGoat.喜羊羊是羊族的小英雄。PleasantGoatisalittleherointhegoatfamily.喜羊羊聪明伶俐，乐观勇敢。PleasantGoatisclever,braveandholdsapositiveattitudetowardhislife.合并句子（同位语，定语从句）3.OneofthemaincharactersisPleasantGoat,alittleherointhegoatfamily,whoisclever,braveandholdsapositiveattitudetowardhislife.贪婪的灰太狼总是带着一顶带补丁的黄帽子。（with介词短语做定语）ThegreedyBigBigWolfalwayswearsayellowhatwithpatches.无论怎样，它总是抓不住羊。（状语从句）Nomatterhowhardhetries,hecannevercatchanygoats.合并句子（非谓语动词做定语）4.ThegreedyBigBigWolf,alwayswearingayellowhatwithpatches,cannevercatchanygoats,nomatterhowhardhetries.由于取得巨大成功，迄今卡通公司获得很多奖项，并推出了玩偶，图书，游戏等相关产品。（状语从句）5.Becauseithasmadeagreatsuccess,uptillnowthecartooncompanyhaswonalotofawardsandputforwardrelevantproductsliketoys,booksandcomputergames.介词短语做状语(becauseof…)BecauseofthegreatsuccessofPleasantGoatandBigBigwolf,uptillnowthecartooncompanyhaswonalotofawardsandputforwardrelevantproductsliketoys,booksandcomputergames.Thiscartoonseriesissetonthegrasslandswherethegoatsandwolveslive.Thestoriesarefunnybutnotchildish,inspiringbutnotboring.OneofthemaincharactersisPleasantGoat,alittleherointhegoatfamily,whoisclever,braveandholdsapositiveattitudetowardhislife.Bycontrast,thegreedyBigBigWolf，alwayswearingayellowhatwithpatches,cannevercatchanygoats,nomatterhowhardhetries.BecauseofthegreatsuccessofPleasantGoatandBigBigwolf,uptillnowthecartooncompanyhaswonalotofawardsandputforwardrelevantproductsliketoys,booksandcomputergames.AppreciationAppreciatesomecompositionsofyourclassmates,andtrytofindoutsomecomplexsentences.•.巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句：•1)借助名词短语做同位语•2)借助介词短语做定语•3)借助介词短语做状语•4)借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语•II.巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句•III.用好从句(定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句）和引导词，写出规范的复合句：Homework用5个规范的句子写一则日记，内容如下：•我又一次考试不及格，回家遭到父亲的责骂。他说我过度沉溺于电脑游戏.我心情很沮丧，不知道该干什么，独自一人在外边漫无目的地闲逛。突然抬起头，看见树上有一个鸟巢，鸟妈妈正在给小鸟喂食。只有在这时候我才意识到，父亲所做的一切都是为了我好。我知道我以后我该怎么做了。①我又一次考试不及格。②回家③遭到父亲的责骂（scold）。④他说我沉溺于(beaddictedto)电脑游戏。⑤我心情很沮丧。(depressed)⑥不知道该干什么。⑦独自一人在外边漫无目的地闲逛(wander)。⑧突然抬起头，看见树上有一个鸟巢(nest)。⑨鸟妈妈正在给小鸟喂食。⑩只有在这时候我才意识到，父亲所做的一切都是为了我好。⑾我知道我以后我该怎么做了。1.Ifailedintheexamagain.2.Icamebackhome.3.Myfatherscoldedme.4.becauseIwasaddictedtoplayingcomputergames.5.Iwasdepressed.6.Ididn’tknowwhattodo.7.Iwanderedoutaimlessly.8.Ilookedupandsawanestinthetree.9.Themotherbirdwasfeedingherbaby10.AtthistimeIrealizedthatwhatmyfatherdidwasforme.11.IknewwhatIshoulddoinfuture.Havingfailedintheexamagain,IwasscoldedbymyfatherwhenIcamebackhome.HesaidthatitwasjustbecauseIwasaddictedtoplayingthecomputergamesthatIfailedagainandagain.Notknowingwhattodo,Iwanderedoutaimlessly.JustatthattimeIcaughtsightofatree,w