Yyrmvo新东方大学英语四级强化班――书面表达

生命是永恒不断的创造，因为在它内部蕴含着过剩的精力，它不断流溢，越出时间和空间的界限，它不停地追求，以形形色色的自我表现的形式表现出来。－－泰戈尔新东方大学英语四级强化班——书面表达四级作文评分方法五级评分制：2、5、8、11、14分注意字数适中用不同单词表达不同意思如何打动评卷人文章的整体脉络清晰段落的衔接畅顺用词造句经典书写美观英文写作的基本常识清晰的结构1)观点鲜明的开头2)紧扣主题的结尾3)由主题句引导的衔接自然的中间段落统一的中心自然的衔接：逻辑关系显性化1)重复词：概括；直接；齐头2)序数词3)关联词：递进；转折；因果平时如何提高写作阅读四级阅读理解文章等等背诵18篇优秀四级作文看电影——阿甘正传、狮子王、老友记30遍图表类特点：有图——趋势透，字数少段落安排：第一段：趋势（变化）第二段：分析变化的原因第三段：自己的看法和感想正文：第一段：1.如图所示a)Aswecanseefromthechart/graph/table/diagram,……b)The…displaythatstandingthe……carefully,wecansee.c)Thechart/graphshows/displaysthat……d)Ascanbeshowninthetable……,e)Itisclear/apparentfromthechart/tablethat2.比例a)Bhasthelargestpercentage/proportionof…….b)……account(s)for/take(s)up10%.c)Onthetopofthelistis……,whichaccountsfor60%.d)Atthebottomis……,whichaccountsfor10%.e)Aisranked/ratedfirst,followedbyBat30%andCat25%.3.增长与下降a)Thenumberof……increased/rosesuddenly/rapidly/dramatically（戏剧地）/substantially（实质的）/considerably/sharply/steeply（险峻地）from1990to2000.b)Therewasasudden/rapid/dramatic/substantial/considerable/sharp/steepincrease/riseinthenumberof……from1990to2000.c)Thenumberof……increased/rosesteadily（稳定地）/gradually（逐渐地）/slowly/slightlyfrom1990to2000.d)Therewasasteady/gradual/slow/slightincrease/riseinthenumberof……from1990to2000.e)下降：decrease/fall/drop；adecrease/drop/reduction/declineinthenumberof……4.达到某点a)Thesituation/figuresreached/hitapeak/highat60%in…….Thesituation/figurespeakedat60%in…….b)Thesituation/figuresbottomedoutat20%in…….Thesituation/figureshitatroughat20%in…….5.倍数a)Aistwice/three/fourtimeswhatitwasin1990.Aistwice/three/fourtimestheamountin1990.Aistwice/three/fourtimesasmuch/manyas……in1990.b)Thefigurewasroughlydoubled/tripled/quintupledbetween1990and2000.c).percent15bypercent15tototaltheofpercent10to5fromupshotjumpedroseincreasedit2002,Ind).percent15bypercent15topercent5to10fromfelldroppeddecreasedit1990,withcomparisonBye)year.lastofthatagainstaswithcomparedaswithcomparedtripleddoubledthanmorealmostnearbyhaspopulationnumberpercentagefigureThef).withcompared,sixtimestwicetimeshalfaandtwoaboutthanmorealmostdecreasedincreaseddroppedhasItg)1990.ofthatasmuchashalftimes4twiceispercentagenumberTheh).1990yearsfewpasttheyears5recenttheinpercentage50ofaverageanpercentage50plateauaofsomethingrisentoapproachedreachedhasIt第二段：As…thenumberof…动词+副词during…As…earlyas数字，thenumberwas……,then……itbecauseforeresponsiblbecauseinresulttocontributecleadchangesSuchWhatfactorsSeveral……列举1.First……,second……,last（inaddition）2.Foronething,……,foranotherthing,……,what’smore……Ononehand,……,ontheotherhand,moreover,……Thereforeallthesereasons……thechanges.第三段：总结：Hencefromthe……坏：终止好：发扬喊口号：①Itishightimethat+一般过去时②Onlythrough……canwe……只有……我们才能……③mindinsayingfollowingthebearshouldWeremarkpersongreatOnegoessayingtheAs+名人名言操辞：上升：rise,increase,goup,boon,rocket下降：decrease,reduce,comedown,onthedecline快速：rapidly,dramatically,sharply（锐）慢：slowly,gradually二选一类特点：给出两个观点段落安排：第一段：1)引出将要评论的事物或者观点；2)提出第一种观点；3)本观点支持性分论点。第二段：1)承上启下；2)提出第二种观点；3)本观点支持性分论点。第三段：我的观点正文：第一段：1)引言：i.Inrecentyears,withfasteconomicgrowth,……haveappearedinmanyfamiliesinChina..onnswerspectives/aviews/persdifferenthave/offerwillpeopleDifferent.......whethertoasquestiononthedividedarePeoplewidely.varies......thetowardsattitudesPeople'近年来，伴随着经济的快速发展，……在中国很多的家庭中出现了。人们对……有着不同的观点。ii.Withtheincreaseinthegeneralstandardofliving,someordinaryChinesefamiliesbegintoafforda…….Yet,sharply.differscontrary.theofquiteisdelygreatly/wivariesittowardattitudepublicperson.persontofromvaryofopinionsspeople'伴随着人们生活水平的提高，一些中国家庭开始能够买……。但是，人们对……的观点是不同的。iii.非常有兴趣热情巨大的需求有越来越对越来越多的关注普遍的信条普遍的信条越来越大的趋势ininterestdeep/keen//sth.sb.sb.amongsth.forhusiasmdemand/enteatgrowing/grof/thatawarenessneralgrowing/geof/thatnrecognitiowide-tiongrowing/nain/thatbeliefseated-epgeneral/deto/in/thattendencygrowingaisthereRecentlyCurrentlyNowadaysiv.Eversinceearlythiscentury,……hasbecomeanessential（本质的）partofourmodernlife.……isthedrivingforcebehindtheswift（迅速的）progressofindustry,agriculture,scienceandtechnology.Nobodycandenythatthedevelopmentofourcivilizationdependson…….自从本世纪初夜，……已经成为现代生活的一个重要部分。……是工业、农业和科技飞速发展的动力。没有人能够否认人类文明的发展依赖于……。v.Theissueof……hasbeenwidelyargued/debated（争论）currently.关于是否……的问题，如今公众已经展开了广泛的讨论。vi.……hasbecomeahot/populartopicamongpeoplerecently.Opinionsvaryfrompersontoperson.……已经成为人们谈论的热门话题，不同的人对此有不同的看法。vii.Thereisapublic/general/muchdebate/discussion/controversy（论战）today/nowadaysabout/on/upon/over/astotheproblem/issueof…….关于……的问题，公众已经展开了讨论。viii.Thereisanargument/muchdisagreement/noconsensusofopinionsamongpeopleconcerning/over/asto/on…….关于……，人们的看法不尽相同。2)Thereisnoconsensusofopinionamongpeopleastotheviewof……i.Somepeoplebelieve/argue/say/maintain/advocate（提倡）/advise/hold/claim/thinkthat…….一些人认为……ii.Itiswidely/generally/commonly/universallythought/believed/accepted/heldthat…….Tothegener