上课课件 高三英语写作教学李平梅

productive:高产的多产的Easyreadingisdamnhardwriting.~NathanielHawthorne纳撒尼尔·霍桑1、用汉语拼音代替不会写的词或短语。2、从阅读理解的语篇中抄袭。0分Honestyisthebestpolicy!有写就有可能得分没写一定是零分Nosweetwithoutsweat!不劳无获Reapasyousow!一份耕耘一份收获0分2分Problems?...Suggestions!...Learntowriteeffectively&efficiently“有话可说，废话少说”话英语写作一、拓展句子1.因广告过多，影片放映晚点；2.影片播放音量过大；3.安全出口标识不明。例（一）：假设你是李华，在出国交流学习期间，到当地一家电影院看了一场精彩的电影，但在观影过程中发现了一些问题。请你根据下列提示用英语给影院经理写一封信。话说了半句,就打住1.因广告过多，影片放映晚点；（拓展结果）Becauseoftoomanyadsatthebeginning,thefilmwasdelayed,________________________________________________________1.因广告过多，影片放映晚点；2.影片播放音量过大；3.安全出口标识不明2.影片播放音量过大；（拓展结果）Thesoundofthefilmwasveryloud,____________________________________________________________________________________3.安全出口标识不明；（拓展结果）Theexitisnotclearenough,so___________________________________________________________________________________________whichmadetheaudienceimpatientandevenannoyed.whichmadetheaudiencefeeluncomfortableandcouldevencausedamagetotheirhearing.thereispotentialdanger.Iftherewereafire,theaudiencewouldhavetroublefindingthewayout.除了拓展因果，还可以拓展条件目的其他相关的信息(定语等）例如(二)：假设你是泰宁一中学生会主席李华。你校将于6月26日接待来自于美国某中学的学生访问团。你受学校委托，负责安排在泰宁的一日活动。请根据以下提示，用英语给该团的领队Smith先生写一封电子邮件，介绍活动计划并简要说明理由，最后征求对方意见。1.上午与我校学生座谈；2.中午与我校学生共同进餐；3.下午与我校学生游金湖。Q1:AmericanstudentswillhaveatalkwithChinesestudents.________________________？Q2.Americanstudentswillhavelunchintheschoolcanteen.____________________________________________?Q3:Intheafternoon,AmericanstudentswillvisittheGoldenLake.______________________________________?What’sitspurposeWhattraditionalChinesefoodwillbeservedWhatisspecialaboutthelakeInordertohaveabetterunderstandingofeachother,we’llhaveatalkinthemorning.Wewillhavelunchtogetherintheschooldininghall,wherethetraditionalChinesefoodssuchasdumplings(jiaozi)willbeserved.Intheafternoon,wewillvisittheGoldenLake,whichisoneoftheworldgeoparkswithfantasticscenery.上午与我校学生座谈中午与我校学生共同进餐下午与我校学生游金湖。还可以添加点缀文章,使文章显得有深度、有智慧。例如（三）：如何利用课间10分钟？有些高中学生课间依旧在教室认真学习，也有些高中学生走出教室积极活动。请用英文写一篇短文，结合自身实际，谈谈你的感想，你更喜欢哪一种方式？简述理由。….Weshouldlearntoachieveabalancebetweenworkandrest.Justasasayinggoes,_____________________________________________________allworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.名言警句二、避免重复2012年高考全国卷II作文题：假定你是李华。你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教Susan参加，要点包括：⒈时间：周五晚8点至9点⒉地点：学生俱乐部⒊内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等⒋要求：备小礼物…We’rethrowingasurprisepartyforXiaoming’sbirthday.We’dliketoinviteyoutotheparty.Wewanttogivehimasurprise,sopleasekeepquietaboutit.We’llgatherattheStudents’Clubat8p.m.thisFriday,aftertheeveningclasses.Andit’sgoingtolastaboutanhour.Weeachwillpreparealittlepresent.Whenhecomes,we’lllightthecandlesandsing“HappyBirthday”togetherforhim.Thenwewillcutthecakeandwe’llsingsongsandplaygames.Wewillbegladtoseehowexcitedhewillbe.I’msureyou’llhaveagoodtimeattheparty,too….受中文影响，我们总喜欢用___________做主语。人…①We’rethrowingasurprisepartyforXiaoming’sbirthday.②We’dliketoinviteyoutotheparty.③Wewanttogivehimasurprise,sopleasekeepquietaboutit.We’llgatherattheStudents’Clubat8p.m.thisFridayaftertheeveningclasses.Andit’sgoingtolastaboutanhour.④Weeachwillpreparealittlepresent.Whenhecomes,we’lllightthecandlesandsing“HappyBirthday”togetherforhim.⑤Thenwewillcutthecakeandwe’llsingsongsandplaygames.⑥Wewillbegladtoseehowexcitedhewillbe.⑦I’msureyou’llhaveagoodtimeattheparty,too…._______________________________________________等也可以充当句子的主语。表示物的名词、不定式、动名词、形式主语it、从句…①We’rethrowingasurprisepartyforXiaoming’sbirthday.AsurprisepartywillbethrownforXiaoming’sbirthday.②We’dliketoinviteyoutotheparty.It’sourgreathonortoinviteyoutotheparty.③Wewanttogivehimasurprise,sopleasekeepquietaboutit.Inordertogivehimasurprise,everyoneshouldkeepquietaboutit.④Weeachwillpreparealittlepresent.Alittlepresentwillbeprepared.⑤Thenwewillcutthecakeandwe’llsingsongsandplaygames.Thecakewillbecutandwe’llsingsongsandplaygames.⑦I’msureyou’llhaveagoodtimeattheparty,too….（We）Hopeyouwillhaveagoodtimeattheparty,too.⑥Wewillbegladtoseehowexcitedhewillbe.It’snicetoseehowexcitedhewillbe.…AsurprisepartywillbethrownforXiaoming’sbirthday.It’sourgreathonortoinviteyoutotheparty.Inordertogivehimasurprise,everyoneshouldkeepquietaboutit.We’llgatherattheStudents’Clubat8p.m.thisFridayaftertheeveningclasses.Andit’sgoingtolastaboutanhour.Alittlepresentwillbeprepared.Whenhecomes,we’lllightthecandlesandsing“HappyBirthday”togetherforhim.Thecakewillbecutandwe’llsingsongsandplaygames.It’snicetoseehowexcitedhewillbe.WeHopeyouwillhaveagoodtimeattheparty,too.除了改变句子的主语之外，我们还可以怎样改变一个句子的开头呢？1.Theeconomyisdevelopingfast,andmoreandmorepeoplecanaffordprivatecars.________________________________________,moreandmorepeoplecanaffordprivatecars.2.Weshouldn’tblameeachother.Weshouldcommunicatemoreandputourselvesinothers’shoes.____________________________,weshouldcommunicatemoreandputourselvesinothers’shoes.3.Iaminterestedinthisprogram.Iwritethislettertoaskformoreinformation._____________________________,Iwritethislettertoaskformoreinformation.4.Ihopemysuggestionswillhelpyousolvetheproblems.WiththerapiddevelopmentoftheeconomyInsteadofblamingeachotherMuchinterestedintheprogram___________,mysuggestionswillhelpyousolvet