1.雅思写作介绍

一、系统的认识二、大作文---审题三、大作文---立意四、大作文---谋篇初探五、大作文---文章结构六、词汇用法七、句子用法八、小作文5.235.51各科均分（中国大陆A类考生）5.535.805.395.47writingreadingspeakinglistening中国考生的雅思考试成绩资料提供:雅思写作中中国考生所存在的主要问题：1.词汇匮乏，表达单一，词不达意2.语法基础差，文章多语法错误3.中国式的英语。4.Ifyoudonotthinkclearly,youwillnotwriteclearly.知识面窄，思路不开阔5.缺乏必要的英文写作技巧，如段落的展开方式以及作文的组织结构等。HOW?WHAT?GenarlIntroduction时间字数题型考查能力分数比重A类G类Task120mins/15mins150wordsChart(line,pie,bar,flow)Table,mapLetter（complaint,request,apology…)客观描述信息和数据Task240mins/45mins250words议论文说理和论证雅思议论文考查什么能力？根据题目要求做出描述、进行论述或表明态度。不仅考查写作能力，同时也考查考生的思维和论证能力。IELTSWRITING：TASKIITaskII:lessthanorequalsto40minutesandmorethan250words一.TR（TaskResponse任务反应情况）二.CC（Coherence&Cohension连贯和衔接）三.LR（LexicalResources词汇资源）四.GR&A（GrammaticalRange&Accuracy语法范围和精确度）英文写作的特点：(第一条评分标准）pointsandsupportingpointsInwriting,anyideathatyouadvancemustbesupportedwithspecificreasonsordetails.WRITING中英文修辞大不同circular迂迴ChineseRhetoric枝状线状EnglishRhetoric具体讲：英语的布局谋篇原则通常为：从一般到具体、从概括到举例，从观点到案例再到数据支持。雅思写作得分攻略①必须有清晰的文章脉络Ⅰ文章的“整体脉络”：一篇雅思作文分为三个部分：开头（introduction）主体（mainbody）结尾（conclusion）Ⅱ文章“主体的脉络”：每一个论点都要有一个论据；每一个论据都要有一个例子；每一个例子都要有一个细节；Externalappearancesalwaysleadtomistakesaboutaperson‘struecharacterorabilities.Aplain-lookingpersoncanmakegreatachievements.TakeNapoleonBonaparte,oneofthegreatestmilitaryleadersandstatesmeninFrance,forexample.ItiswellknownthatNapoleonwasveryshort.Hewasoftenlaughedatbypeoplearoundhimforhissmallstature.However,aftermanyyears’struggle,hefinallybecametheEmperoroftheFrenchEmpireandconqueredlargerpartsoftheEurope.Napoleonisnotararecase.Actuallyinnumerablefamoushistoricalfigureswerenotgoodlooking.Thereforewesurelyshouldnotjudgethembyexternalappearance.（论点）：Externalappearancesalwaysleadtomistakeaboutaperson‘struecharacterorabilities.（论据）：Aplain-lookingpersoncanmakegreatachievement.（例子）：TakeNapoleonBonaparte,oneofthegreatestmilitaryleadersandstatesmeninFrance,forexample.（细节）：ItiswellknownthatNapoleonwasveryshort.Becauseofhissmallstature,hewasoftenlaughedatbypeoplearoundhim.However,aftermanyyears’struggle,hefinallybecametheEmperoroftheFrenchEmpireandconqueredlargerpartsoftheEurope.（总结）：Napoleonisnotararecase.Actuallyinnumerablefamoushistoricalfigureswerenotgoodlooking.Thereforewesurelyshouldnotjudgethembyexternalappearance.论点↓论据↓例子↓细节②必须有自然的段落间衔接首先:firstandforemost,tobegin/startwith,inthefirstplace,foronething,其次:furthermore,moreover,inaddition,whatismore段落间连词最后：ultimately;intheend;atlast;③必须要注意语言的选用我们写作时，依然在大量重复使用俗烂的词汇！！！Wearegrowingold,butwearenotgrowingup.杜绝写作词汇贫乏攻略：升级---我们的表达应该是深厚的、成熟的！六大恶心词汇形容词：bigimportant连词：butand动词：thinkmake绝不能在文中过度重复使用一个词！(会最直接地告诉阅卷官，你的词汇极其贫乏)Attention!!!意大利的卫生医疗在地震之后正面临巨大的挑战。HealthservicesinItalyarefacingenormouschallengeafterearthquake.中国的对外开放带来了巨大的经济变化。China‘sopeningtotheworldhasfacilitatedmassiveeconomictransformations.==…对…很重要…playa(an)vital(critical,essential)rolein…平凡人们的献身精神对于社会的发展很重要。•Devotionofcommonpeopleplaysa(an)vital(critical,essential)roleinthedevelopmentofsociety.单词：though，althoughdespite,whereas,whileconversely,nevertheless词组：inspiteofregardlessofincontrastonthecontrary→→Although/Despite/Inspiteof+n.酒对我们的经济发展有好处,但是过量饮酒对健康有害。Alcoholisgoodforoureconomy,butdrinkingheavilyisbadforourhealth.Althoughalcoholbenefitsoureconomygreatly,drinkingheavilydoestremendousharmtoourhealth.Despitethegreateconomicbenefitsofalcohol,drinkingheavilydoestremendousharmtoourhealth.Inspiteofthegreateconomicbenefitsofalcohol,drinkingheavilydoestremendousharmtoourhealth.可替换的词/词组：•aswellas•togetherwith•alongwith..Acountryoperatesbymakinguseofpowerandmoney.Acountryoperatesbymakinguseofpoweraswellasmoney.奥巴马和米歇尔赢得了最后的胜利。奥巴马和米歇尔赢得了最后的胜利。ObamaandMichelleachievedtheultimatevictory.Obama,togetherwithMichelle,achievedtheultimatevictory.Obama,alongwithMichelle,achievedtheultimatevictory.(Ithink)AsIseeitFrommypointofviewWhenitcomestomeAsfarasIamconcernedAsIseeit,exploringt