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写作素养提升练人教版八年级下Unit1What’sthematter?人教版八年级下每个人都渴望拥有健康的身心，都希望享受美好的生活。但是身体不舒服的时候，你该怎么办？当遇到突发事件时，你会急救吗？你对健康的生活有什么好的建议呢？写作任务假如你是李华，得知你的朋友李明患感冒了。请你根据以下要点给他发一封电子邮件，并给他提出一些建议。要点：1.测量一下体温，看看医生,好好休息，按时服药；2.多锻炼，远离垃圾食品，吃健康食物；3.养成健康的生活习惯，早睡早起。思路点拨1.谋篇布局：理清文章要素，构建文章结构。思路点拨2.遣词造句：就结构图中的要点和词语写出句子。(1)你应该马上量一下体温并去看医生。Youshould_____________________rightawayand_________________.(2)你应该好好休息，并按时服药。Youshould_________________and___________________________.takeyourtemperatureseeadoctorhaveagoodresttake(some)medicineontime思路点拨(3)你应该多锻炼，最好坚持每天运动一小时。Youshould_________________,andyou’dbetter_________________________________.(4)你应该远离垃圾食品，多吃水果和蔬菜。Youshould_________________________and___________________________.(5)你应该每天早睡早起。Youshould______________and______________everyday.takemoreexercisekeepexercisingonehoureverydaykeepawayfromjunkfoodeatmorefruitandvegetablesgotobedearlygetupearly思路点拨3.巧妙衔接：利用连词，使句子意思连贯。本文中，可以使用first,second,finally等表顺序的词来介绍保持健康的几个方面的内容，使文章显得有层次性。思路点拨4.佳句妙用：添加谚语、名言等精彩句子。Nosports,nolife.没有运动就没有生命。Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.一天一个苹果，医生不找我。Healthisbetterthanwealth.健康胜于财富。Earlytobedandearlytorisemakesamanhealthy,wealthyandwise.早睡早起，使人健康、富有而聪明。思路点拨►连句成篇：______________________________________________________________________________________________思路点拨【品读范文】DearLiMing,I’msorrytohearthatyouhaveacold.Areyoufeelingbetternow?Ifnot,youshouldtakeyourtemperaturerightawayandseeadoctor.Aslongasyouhaveagoodrestandtakemedicineontime,youwillgetbettersoon.思路点拨Hereissomeadviceforyoutokeephealthy.First,nosports,nolife.Youshouldtakemoreexerciseafterschool.Second,stayawayfromjunkfood.Youshouldeatmorefruitandvegetables.Finally,getintoahealthylivinghabit.Youshouldgotobedearlyandgetupearly.Ihopeyou’llgetbettersoon.Yours,LiHua课后实践假如你是Alice的好朋友刘梅，你听说最近她因为准备考试而忙碌，并且患了感冒，头疼发烧、睡不好觉。请你给她发一封电子邮件安慰一下她，并给她一些建议。要求：80词左右。DearAlice,____________________________________________________Yours,LiuMei课后实践____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________DearAlice,I'msorrytohearthatyoudon'tfeelwell.Youhaveabadcoldandaheadache.Youhaveafever.Andyoucan'tsleepwell.Ithinkitisbecauseyouarebusypreparingforyourexam.Maybeyouaretootired.Ithinkyoushouldseeadoctorandtakesomemedicine.Youshouldgotobedearlyandhaveagoodrest.课后实践____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Youshoulddrinkmorewater.Ithinkit'simportanttokeephealthy.Ifyouwanttobehealthy,youalsoneedtotakemoreexercise.Ihopeyou'llfeelbettersoon.Yours,LiuMei