初中英语写作指导课Let’sgoforit!basicstructure(基本结构的安排)DearMr.Know,I’mpleasedtowritetoaskforsomehelp.IwanttotellyousomeproblemswemeetinEnglishstudy.First,someofusaren’tinterestedinEnglish.WethinkstudyingEnglishissuchaboringthing.Andthenit’ssodifficultforustorememberallthewordsinthetexts.Solotsofusdon’thaveenoughconfidencetokeepupEnglishstudy.Andwearealwaysafraidtojointhegroupdiscussion.What’smore,therearesomanynewwordswehaven’tmeetbeforeinthepassage.Idon’tknowwhattodo.Sometimeswecan’tunderstandthemainidea,letalone(更不用说)answerthequestionsaboutthem.Butthemostdifficultthingistowrite.Weoftenusewrongwordsandsentences.Canyouhelpus?HowcanweimproveourEnglish?Pleasegiveussomeusefuladvice.Thankyouverymuch.Writetomesoon.Let’sgoforit!Mary(thebeginning)(theending)thebody(正文)basicrules(写作考试规则)search(审)list(列)add(加:开头和结尾)connect(连)beautiful(美:谚语/例子)牛刀小试健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天,会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢?国际健康组织对此作了一次调查,右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息,请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。审(search)travelstayathomevisitfriendsorparentswork•如何度假•调查报告•倡议假日休闲stayathomeworkvisitfriendsorparentstravel列(list)根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点。•Alotofpeopletravel.•Somepeoplestayathome.•Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.•Afewpeoplework.•Enjoyyourvacation.列(list)•Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.(thebeginning)•Alotofpeopletravel.Somepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheinternet.Someotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.Afewpeoplework.•Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.(theending)加(add)•加首尾,使结构完整。•可以采取总分总结构,开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮。•Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.•Accordingtoit,alotofpeopletravel.Andsomepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.Alsosomeotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.However,afewpeoplework.•Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.连(connect)Writingskills(“写”的技巧)方法一:善用词汇甚至善用高级词汇Whichisbetter?他们在海滩上听音乐。ATheylistenedtothemusiconthebeach.BTheyenjoyedthemusiconthebeach.Whichisbetter?我希望你能帮助我。AIwishyoucanhelpme.BI’mlookingforwardtoyourhelp.Whichisbetter?他们很早就到了。ATheyarrivedearly.BTheyarrivedasearlyastheycould.Whichisbetter?最后,他的狗得救了,他感到很惊讶。AHisdogwassavedatlast.Hewasverysurprised.BTohissurprise,hisdogwassavedatlast.AIthinklearningEnglishisinteresting.BIfinditreallyfuntolearnEnglish.我认为学英语很有趣。我们应该保护环境。AWeshouldprotecttheenvironment.BIt’sourdutytoprotecttheenvironment.方法二:活用多种句型Writingskills(“写”的技巧)她还小,搬不动这么重的箱子。ASheisveryyoung.Shecan’tcarrytheheavybox.BSheistooyoungtocarrytheheavybox.CSheissoyoungthatshecan’tcarrythe…DSheisnotoldenoughtocarrythe…方法三:妙用关联词Writingskills(“写”的技巧)1.表示并列或递进:and,aswellas,both…and,what’smorenotonly…butalso,neither…nor2.表示选择:or,either…or3.表示转折:but,however,although\though,afterall,anyway4.表示因果:because,so,therefore,since,for,asaresult5.表示条件:if,unless6.表示对比:instead,not…but,while,inthesameway,ontheonehand…ontheotherhand7.表示解释:forexample,forinstance,suchas,thatistosay,inotherwords,totellthetruth8.表示顺序:tobeginwith,firstly,first(ofall),second(ly),next,later,sincethen,fromthenon,finally,intheend9.表示强调:also,besides,especially,actually,infact10.表示结论:allinall,altogether,inaword,generallyspeaking,inshort关联词(connectionwords)Let’stry•_____________Iamtired,Ikeeponworkingtillmidnight.•Hedidn’tgotomovies,hewenttotheconcert______.•Welikedoingkindsofsports_____swimming,runningandhiking.•_____,hestoodup.Thenhegotout._____,hewentback.____________,hesmiled.Though\AlthoughinsteadlikeFirstNextFinally\Atlast初中英语中考作文指导(共45张PPT)初中英语中考作文指导(共45张PPT)Ilikemanysports,suchasswim,fishandsoon.Butofallthesports,basketballismyfavoritesport.Ilikebasketballbestbecauseitcanhelpmekeephealth.Iplaybasketballwithmyclassmatesatschooltwiceaweek.ImakealotofgoodfriendswhenIplaybasketball.Anditbringmealotofhappy.What’smore,itcanmakemetogrownotonlytallerbutalsostrong.Iloveplaybasketball.Ihopebeabasketballplayerinthefuture.Myfavoritesportswimming,fishinghealthybringsstrongertobe/Iwillbehappinessplayinggrow初中英语中考作文指导(共45张PPT)初中英语中考作文指导(共45张PPT)Checklistspellingcapitalization(A/a)punctuation(.,?!)subject-verbagreementpartofspeech(n/v/adj/adv…)tenseusageofphrases词组固定搭配(惯用法)初中英语中考作文指导(共45张PPT)初中英语中考作文指导(共45张PPT)•Howdopeoplespendtheirvacation?Wemadeasurveyandhereisourreport.•Accordingtoit,alotofpeopletravel.Andsomepeoplestayathome.TheywatchTVorsurftheInternet.Alsosomeotherpeoplevisitfriendsorparents.However,afewpeoplework.•Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.连(connect)美(beautify)初中英语中考作文指导(共45张PPT)初中英语中考作文指导(共45张PPT)Weinterviewedpeopleaboutthewaystospendthevacationandhereisourreport.Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.Andtovisitfriendsorparentsalsomakesthemrelaxed.However,afewpeoplehavetowork.Comeandenjoyyourvacation.Peoplewhorelaxwellworkwell.美(beautify)初中英语中考作文指导(共45张PPT)初中英语中考作文指导(共45张PPT)Accordingtoit,mostpeoplechoosetotraveltogetawayfromthebusyworldduringtheholidays.Thensomepeopleliketostayathome,watchingTVorsurfingtheInternettohaveagoodrest.However,afewpeoplehaveto