高二英语作文专题训练

1高二英语作文专题训练一、图表类：（一）2010年央视春晚的广告收入创新高，但节目中的植入广告引发了热议。最近，某网站举行了一次题为“对今年春晚植入广告的态度”的调查，请根据以下饼图（piechart）所示信息用英语写一篇短文，并提出你自己的看法。注意：1．对所给提示，不要简单翻译，可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。2．词数150左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。3．植入广告：productplacement满分文展示1：The2010SpringFestivalGalahassetrecordsforTVcommercialrates,whichaccordinglyhascausedheateddiscussionsduetoproductplacementintheprogrammes.Theopinionsonthistopicvaryfrompersontoperson.Oneinfourthinkthereissomuchofproductplacementthatlotsofpeoplefeelunsatisfiedwhentheywatchtheprogrammes.And10%ofthepeoplethinkproductplacementintheprogrammesgreatlyruinstheimageofCCTV,beauseitwillleaveabadimpressiononaudienceinandoutsideChina.Besides,nearlyonethirdofthepeopleholdtheopinionthatit’shardtorelatetheproductplacementtotheprogrammes,makingtheaudiencefeeluncomfortable.However,thereare15%ofthepeoplewhothinkitishelpfulforthedevelopmentofCCTV.Andtherestthinkthereisnoneedforustobesostrictwithproductplacement.Afterall,it’sverynatural.Personally,theproductplacementisreallydisgustingandCCTVshouldtrytoavoidit.本文总体结构非常清晰，作者通过整合拼图，谈论对待广告的两大观点，最后陈述自己的观点，除此之外，作者在选词造句上也下了一番工夫。在开头，中间以及最后的结尾处，优美、地道的句式层出不穷，一些高级词汇相互响应，熠熠生辉，值得其他学生借鉴。满分文展示2：2The2010SpringFestivalGalahassetrecordsforTVcommercialrates,whichaccordinglyhascausedheateddiscussionsduetoproductplacementintheprogrammes.Accordingtothepiechart,wecansee15%ofthesurveyedpeoplethinkit’sdifficulttodevelopCCTVwithouttheproductplacement,becauseitcanprovideenoughmoney.Atthesametime,20%ofthemthinktheproductplacementispresentedintheprogammeinanaturalway.Ontheotherhand,therestofthepeopleareagainstthemoveandtheyhavetheirownreasons.Nearlyonethirdofthemsaytheproductplacementhaslittletodowiththeprogrammes,whichreducestheirinterestsintheprogrammes.And10%ofthepeopleholdtheideathatthedisadvantagethatitruinstheimageofCCTVoutweighsitsadvantage.Besides,aquartercomplaintherearetoomuchproductplacementintheprogrammes.AsfarasI’mconcerned,evenifit’scommontoseeproductplacement,Idon’tthinkitshouldappearinsomeprogrammesofartandculture.本文反映出作者对英文写作极强的驾驭能力，首先作者能够很好地审题，通过图表找准信息，并且将文章结构安排地很合理，让读者一目了然，再次，作者在语言方面极具天赋，从开始的一个without的强调句，到非限制性定语从句，及后来的同位语从句，让读者目不暇接，一些高级词汇及过渡词的使用让文章更加完美。标准范文：The2010SpringFestivalGalahassetrecordsforTVcommercialrates,whichaccordinglyhascausedheateddiscussionsduetoproductplacementintheprogrammes.Asisshowninthepiechart,20%ofthepeoplesurveyedthinkitacceptable,fortheproductplacementappearsintheprogrammesnaturally.And15%ofthemconsideritnecessaryforCCTVtomakemoneyfromproductplacement,whichisofgreatbenefittothedevelopmentofCCTVitself.However,amongthepeoplesurveyed,morethanonethirdofthemcomplainthattheproductplacementhasnothingtodowiththeprogrammes.25%ofthemevenfeelhurtseeingsomuchofit.Furthermore,therest10%holdtheviewthatgreatharmhasbeendonetotheimageofCCTV.Fromthechartwecandrawaconclusionthatmostofthepeoplesurveyedareagainstproductplacementintheprogrammes.Inmyopinion,productplacementnowadaysisalmostunavoidable,butitshouldnotdamagetheartoftheshowandshouldtaketheaudience’sfeelingsintoaccount.（二）你班同学开展了一场“司机醉驾是否应该处罚乘客”的讨论。请你根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，介绍讨论的情况，并发表你的看法。少数同学赞成处罚乘客大多数同学反对处罚乘客1、减少交通事故，促进交通安全。2、不乘坐醉酒司机的车，不仅是对自己的负责，也是对司机和路人负责。1、乘客难以判断司机是否醉酒。2、即使乘客知道司机饮酒，如果司机不听从乘客的劝诫，处罚乘客是不公平的。3你的看法：满分文展示1：DearEditor,I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe’vehadaboutwhetherpassengerswhorideinacardrivenbyadrunkendrivershouldbepunished.Asmallpartofthestudentsapproveofitforthereasonthatononehand,thispunishmentcandecreasetheamountofthetrafficaccidents.Ontheotherhand,itcanimprovethesafetyofpassengersanddrivers.Besides,avoidingridinginacardrivenbyadrunkendriverisnotonlyresponsibleforus,butalsoforthedriverandpedestrians.However,themajorityofthestudentsarestronglyagainstthispunishmentinthattheythinkithardforpassengerstojudgewhetherthedriverhasdrunkornot.What’smore,eventhepassengersknowthedriverhasdrunk,ifthedriverdoesn’taccepttheiradvice,it’sunfairtopunishthepassengers.Personally,Ithinkpeoplewhorideinacardrivenbyadrunkendrivershouldbepunishedbecausethepublic’ssafetyisthemostimportant.作者分三个段落来完成此篇书面表达，先说明少数人赞成的观点，接着说明多数人反对的观点，最后给出作者自己的观点，并说明理由。结构紧凑，要点全面，作者观点鲜明，理由具有说服力。文章中作者使用了大量的高级词汇和高级结构，为文章增添了色彩。ononehand,ontheotherhand,besides,however,what’smore,personally等过渡词增强了文章的流畅性。满分文展示2：I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwe’vehadaboutwhetherpassengerswhorideinacardrivenbyadrunkendrivershouldbepunished.Theminorityofthestudentswhoarefortheideathinkthatitcanreducetrafficaccidentsandpromotethesafetyoftraffic.Theyalsothinkavoidingtakingacardrivenbyadrunkendriverisanactivityresponsibleforpassengersandthedriverandotherpeopleontheroadaswell.Onthecontrary,themajorityofthestudentsareopposedtoit.Thefirstreasontheygiveliesinthatpassengershavedifficultyfindingwhetheradriverisdrunken.Apartfromthat,evenifpassengersknowthatthedriverisdrunken,itisunfairtopunishthemwhenthedriverdoesn’ttaketheirsuggestionseriously.Inmyview,it’strafficsecuritythatgreatlymattersandweshouldpunishthosedrunkendriversratherthanthepassengers.该文的最大亮点是多处使用的复杂句式，体现作者娴熟的语言表达技巧。Beopposedto,take…seriously等高级短语的使用亦为文章增添了色彩。过渡词onthecontrary,apartfrom,evenif,inview,and等使用较为考究