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ContinuationwritingTipsforyourwriting1.注意卷面整洁、书写清晰2.不是双横线、波浪线,或方框3.关键词要下划线MyheartsankasIbadlyneededajob.ButIstillmissedthischance,andnoweverythinghasfailed.AnxietyreturnedtomyfaceandIcouldhardlycontrolmytears.SuddenlyCarrieburstintolaughterinreliefandsaid,“surprise!”ThenIsawhertakingoutaletterfromherback.Itwasmyhiringdocument.Everyonecheeredforme,andIrealizeditwasjustajoke.SoIwasoverexcitedrightnow.Wehaveworkedtogethersincegraduationandmonthlylunchwiththetaxgirlswasborn.NowIreallyenjoyedmyjob,mydiligentworkmatesandevenmydemandingboss,becausetheymademylifefullandmeaningful.Ilovetoworkhardandrelaxwithmyfriendsafterwork.WhatIneedtothankmostismyfriends’helpandencouragement.Ourlifegetsbetterandbetter.Thenew“town”getsmoreandmorecharming.4.段落只能分成两段MyheartsankasIbadlyneededajob.Ifeltverystuffy,likestoneonthechestandmymindwenttotallyblank.“Linda,don'tbeanxious.Maybetheyhaven'thadtimetosendmessageyet.Carriesaid.“Idohopethat”Isaid.Aswearesilent,suddenlythephonewasrung.Wehaveworkedtogethersincegraduationandamonthlylunchwithtaxgirlswasborn.Ican'timaginethatallofusreceivedthehiringdocuments.Iwouldneverhimforgetthetimewhenwewereinataxschool.Thismemorywaslikethestarshininginmylifeforever.5.两段词数共为150词左右！MyheartsankasIbadlyneededajob.IwasextremelyexcitedbecauseIalsoreceivedthehiringdocument.FinallyIhadareliablejob.IhopeIcankeepthejobbecauseIloveit.IwasnotanxiousanymoreandonethingletmehappywasthatCarriebecamemybestfriends.Weareworktogethersincegraduationandmonthlylunchwiththetextgirlswasbornandwehaveapartyforit.Wewenttotherestaurantwhereweorderedalotofdeliciousfood.Weallhadagoodtime.Wetalkedtoeachotheraboutourownlife.6.两段词数要差不多MyheartsankasIbadlyneededajob.Idraggedmyselfbacktomyseat.Ididn'thearthevoiceofcomfortaroundme.IwasthinkingaboutwhatIwasdoingbadlywhensuddenlyCarriecameandpattedmeontheshoulder,Iwasshocked,lookingatherwithweteyes.Carriessaid,“whatareyouanxiousabout?Youremploymentnoticeswasintheclassroom.”Irantothatclassroomrightaway.Iwantedtoseeitbymyself.”ohmygod.I'vegotit.”Wehaveworkedtogethersincegraduationandmonthlylunchwithtaxgirlswasborn.Eventhoughouragesandbackgroundsseemedverydifferent,itisimpossibletostopourfriendship,itwillalsobecomemuchbetter.7.对话不要过多Myheartsank,asIbadlyneededajob.“MaybeIcanneverfindagoodjob.”Susanrealizeditandhuggedme,“Don’tthinkmore.Webelieveyouwillbebetter.”“Thanks.”Itookadeepbreath,“Excuseme,AreyouLinda?Hereisyourdocument,butIdon’tknowyouraddress!”“That’sright!Ican’tbelievemyeyes!”“That’sright!”8.要符合主流价值观，不要负能量Wehaveworkedtogethersincegraduationandmonthlylunchwiththetextgirlswasborn.Wealwayssharedtheexperienceinthejobandalsoplayedjokesoneachother,buteverythingchangedagain.Oneday,mybosstooksomethingandrushedangrilyintomyoffice,“Linda，lookatwhatyouhavedone!”Iwasscaredbecauseofhisbehavior.“it'sthethirdtimeyouhavemadesuchamistake!”NextdayIwasfired.Secretsofagoodwriting1.getthemainideaofthepassage2.makeanoutlineofthewriting3.usesentencepatternsforwriting4.…1.mainideaofthepassageLindastudiedinthetaxschoolforajobwithagroupoftaxgirlstillthedistrictmanagercametointerviewthem,whofinallyreceivedthehiringdocumentsexceptLinda.Paragraph1MyheartsankasIbadlyneededajob.1.Myfriendscomfortedme.2.Isoughtwaysforthenewsaboutmydocument.3.ShereceivedthehiringdocumentHowwouldLindafeelinthisparagraph?sad,disappointedrelieved,excitedanxious2.outlineofthewritingParagraph2Wehaveworkedtogethersincegraduationandamonthlylunchwithtaxgirlswasborn.1.Theychatatlunch.2.Myfriendsinfluencemealot.3.Iwillcontinuetoworkhardatmywork.HowwouldLindafeelinthisparagraph?thankful,satisfied,relaxedhopeful2.outlineofthewriting3.Grammarusedforwriting定语从句1.Theworkingexperienceswererootedinourbrain,whichhelpedtocreateagreatachievement.2.Iwanttokeepthejobandbeapersonwhoisveryhard-workinginhiscareer.4.Finally,Igothired,forwhichtheyhuggedmewithsmile,butIcriedlikeachild.5.Astimegoesby,thenightwhenwecelebratedtogetheralwaysremindsmeofstoriesaboutthetaxgirlswhoarefullofhopeforthefuture.名词性从句1.“…Whateverhappensormayhavehappened,youmusthaveatrustinwhatyoudo.Sunshinealwayscomesafterrain.”2.WhatsurprisedmemostwasthatIhadalreadybeenadmitted.3.Whathesaidinspiredmeallthetime.同位语从句。。。With结构1.Withanxiety,Iopenedmymailbox.Therewasahiringdocumentinit,andinaninstantmytearssliddownmycheeks.2.Carriesaidexcitedlywithherfacereddeningover.3.WhenIwasstillinsadnessandanxiety,suddenlythelightwentoutandLarrycameinwithacakelightedwithcandles.4.Iquietlyopenedthedoorandstoppedsilentlywithmyheaddown分词结构1.Atthelunchtime,wealwaystalkaboutourwork,pointingoutmistakesandchattingcasually.2.Findingnoneoftheemailswithregardtomyhiringdocument,Ifeltmyheartwasbrokeninhalf.3.Seeingtheirbrightsmiles,Iseemedtobestandingatthefootofthemountain,lookingupthesun.4.Sincethen,becomingCEOhasbeenherlifegoal.强调句Itwasfatethatmadeusknoweachotherandbecomefriends.被动句1.Wehadalongtalking.ThenextdayIwastoldthatIwasemployed.2.Finally,thehiringdocumentweresenttome.形容词副词的使用1.Carrieputherhandonmyshoulderandsaidsoftly.2.Atthismoment,IrevealedmydisappointmentandIextremelywantedtoknowwhy.3.Thankstotheirhelp,Is