含对比观点的议论文写作

含对比观点的议论文写作评论某一事物利与弊的套用格式1.提出要评论的事物或观点.2.分别陈述利与弊(或不同的观点)3.归纳得出作者的结论.a.有定论的,作者可明确表态(赞成或反对)b.争议较大的或尚无定论的,可不明确表态,提出扬长避短的方法,也可以平衡其利弊,提出某种期望和设想.典型模板Justasacoinhastwosides,______alsohassomesideeffects.However,______hasalsoalotofproblems.Foronething,____________;Foranotherthing,___________.___hasbroughtanumberofbenefitstous.——isabeneficialactivity,inwhichwecanobtainmanyadvantages.Firstofall,________.Also,____________.Mostimportantly,____________________.Weareallawarethateverythinghasitstwosides.______isnoexception.开头:优点：缺点：表达个人观点的用语•Ithink•Ifirmlybelievethat…•Inmyopinion,•Personallyspeaking,…•AsfarasIamconcerned,…•Frommypointofview,….段落结构1）first,second,third,last（不推荐，原因：俗)2）firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally（不推荐，原因：俗）3）tostartwith\tobeginwith,next,then,furthermore,finally（强烈推荐）4）firstandforemost,besides,inaddition,what’smore,lastbutnotleast（强烈推荐）5）ontheonehand,ontheotherhand（适用于相对立的两点的情况）6）foronething,foranotherthing（适用于两点的情况）结尾:1）Inspiteofthesedisadvantages,Ithink______doesmoregoodthanharmto______.Wemusttakeacorrectattitudetowards______.Weshouldtakefulladvantageofitandavoiditsdisadvantages.2）Weighingthetwosides,wecanconcludethat______hasproducedgreateffectsonsociety.3）Tosumup,Iwouldsaythattheadvantagesoutweighthedisadvantages.4)Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaydrawtheconclusionthat…Allinall,Inconclusion,Onthewhole【议论文——观点对比型作文写作模板推荐】•Topic•①Recentlywe’vehadadiscussionabout_______.②Ouropinionsaredividedonthistopic.•③Mostofthestudentsareinfavorofit.④Herearethereasons.First,_______.Second,_______.Finally…•⑤However,theothersarestronglyagainstit.⑥Theirreasonsareasfollows.Inthefirstplace,_________.What’smore,___________.Inaddition/Besides,_________.•⑦Personallyspeaking,/AsfarasIamconcerned______________________.Onlyinthisway,展望前景标题①导入话题②观点有分歧③正方观点④列举2—3个赞成的理由⑤反方观点⑥列举2—3个反对的理由⑦个人观点【范文赏析】假如你是某中学学生李华。最近，你班同学正在参加21世纪英文报“大家谈”栏目的一个讨论。本次话题为：“父母有没有必要陪读？”•请你根据下表所列情况给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论的情况。•70%的同学认为：1．父母不应该陪读2．父母陪读让我们养成依赖的习惯，不利于我们将来自控能力的培养，不利于我们培养良好的学习习惯。3．父母陪读影响了他们的工作、学习和休息.•30%的同学认为：1．父母应该陪读2．父母陪读能使我们腾出更多的时间专心学习.3．父母陪读能帮助我们确立学习目标，督促我们完成学习任务，鼓励我们独立解决困难，培养我们养成良好的学习习惯。•注意：1．信的形式已经为你写好。2．词数100左右。•3．参考词汇：陪读accompanysb.studyingatschool督促urgeDeareditor,I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwerecentlyhadaboutwhetherourparentsshouldaccompanyusstudyingatschool.Ouropinionsaredividedonthistopic.Mostofthestudents(about70%)arestronglyagainstit.First,itmakesusfallintothehabitofdependencesothatwewon’tformthegoodhabitofstudying.What’smore,itwillbedifficultforustocontrolourselvesinthefutureifourparentsaccompanyusstudyatschool.Inaddition,itaffectsourparents’work,studyandrest.However,about30%ofmyclassmatesthinkitnecessaryforourparentstoaccompanyusstudyingatschool.Accompanyingusstudyingschoolallowsustohavemoretimetospareforourstudies.Besides,ourparentscanhelpussetupouraim,urgeustofinishourtask,encourageustoovercomedifficultiesandgetusintothegoodhabitofstudying.AsfarasI’mconcerned,weshouldstudyonourownandonlyinthiswaycanwelearnmoreandimproveourselves.Yours,truelyLiHuaYearsagoitwasverydifficulttotravelfromoneplacetoanother.Thejourneyswereoftenlong,tiringanddangerous.Todaythepicturehaschanged.Sciencehasimprovedtransportationandcommunicationfacilitiesagreatdeal.Travelinghasbecomesafer,moreenjoyableandaboveall,moreeconomical.Traveling—whetherwithinone’scountryorabroad—bringsmanyinvaluablebenefits.Peopletravelforpleasure,businessorforeducationandknowledge.Intheworldofyesterdaymostpeoplewereonlyabletoreadaboutstrangeandfascinatingplacesacrossthemountainsandseas.Later,withthecomingofthecinemaandtelevision,man’scuriosityaboutfarawayplaceswithstrangesoundingnameswasfurtherstirredup.Todayman’scuriositycanbesatisfiedinluxuriouscomfort.Therearefirst-classshipsandairplanestotakehimwherehisdreamslie.Wetraveltoincreaseourknowledgeoftheworldinwhichwelive.Knowledgeobtainedfrombooksaloneisnotenough.Newknowledgeofdifferentlandsandpeoplesenrichourmindandsoul.Booksgenerallydonotgiveusaverytruepictureoflandsbeyondourshores.Someofthemareevenmisleading.[写作内容]1)以约30个词概括短文的要点；2)然后以约120个词就“现代交通的利与弊”的主题发表看法，并包括如下要点：a)通过古今对比说明现代交通给我们带来的好处；b)现代交通方式给我们带来的负面影响；c)就如何消除这些负面影响提出你的建议。[写作指导]写摘要：首先，找准主题句，①Sciencehasimprovedtransportationandcommunicationfacilitiesagreatdeal.Travelinghasbecomesafer,moreenjoyableandaboveall,moreeconomical.(第一段最后两句)②论点：Travelingbringsmanyinvaluablebenefits.(第二段第一句)；论据是：Peopletravelforpleasure,businessorforeducationandknowledge.(第二段第二句)Wetraveltoincreaseourknowledgeoftheworld.(第三段第一句)。然后，用一两句自己的话把他们有机地联系起来。列要点：根据要点列提纲，表达个人看法。Para.2:advantages—Inthepast….Butnow…disadvantages—airpollution,trafficjams,lackofenergy…Para.3:suggestions—a)makerulesb)usebicyclesinsteadofcars扩展成句，连句成文：使用句子连接。如，用Ican’tagreemore.把摘要和个人看法联接起来。使用连词或连接性副词。如：a)alsob)Firstly….Secondly…c)Tobeginwith…What’smore/Besides/Moreover…Lastbutnotleast…Withthehelpofscience,transportationmakestravelingsaferandeasier,whichbringslotsofbenefitslikesatisfyingman’scuriosityandincreasingman’sknowledgeoftheworld.Ican’tagreemore.Asthelegendgoes:TocarrythenewsoftheGreekvictory,Pheidippides,aprofessionalrunner,hadtor