高一书面表达训练如何写建议信

高一书面表达训练----连句成篇（建议信）建议信建议信是针对某事向收信人提出建议和忠告的一种文体。建议信要写明写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由，提出的理由要合情合理，语气一定要和缓。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。建议信的常用结构如下：1．首段：表明写作意图，陈述事由。2．中段：围绕问题，结构清晰、科学婉转地提出有针对性的建议。注意充分考虑对方的实际情况。3．尾段：简单予以希望。希望自己的建议能对对方有所帮助。建议信开头常用句式：1.Thankyoufortrustingme.It'smypleasuretogiveyousomesuggestions/advice/tips.2.I’msorrytohear/learnthat......3.Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceon……andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.表达建议常用句式：1.IfIwereyou,Iwould……2.AsfarasIamconcerned,……/Inmyopinion……3.Whynot……?4.Itwouldbeagoodideaif……5.Inthefirstplace/Firstly/First……Secondly/Second……Lastbutnotleast(最后但不是最不重要)……CompositionsfromStudentTimes假如你是李华，你的笔友黎明来信说他的父母工作变动刚转入一所学校，由于性格内向，生活经历与同学差异很大等原因，在新学校没有知心朋友，很苦恼。请根据以上提示，给他写封回信，谈谈你对如何交友的看法。注意：词数100左右翻译下列句子：我很高兴了解到你现在一所新学校就读。（learn）Iamgladtolearnthatyouarestudyinginanewschool.如果你现在没有知心朋友，不用着急。(if)Donotworryifyouhavenorealfriendsrightnow.虽然你是一个性格内向的男孩，而且生活经历与你目前同学差异很大，只要你遵循下列提示不是没有可能交上好朋友的。（although，aslongas)Althoughyouarenotanoutgoingboyandhavedifferentlifeexperiencesfromyourpresentclassmates,itisnotimpossibletomakegoodfriendsaslongasyoutakethefollowingtips.首先，如果你能与同学同甘共苦，就会交上朋友。（firstofall)Firstofall,youcanmakefriendswithothersifyousharetheirjoysandsorrows.第二，你应该向同学敞开你的心扉。Secondly,youshouldopenyourhearttoyourfriends,holdingbacknothing.最后，一旦有了朋友，你必须不断用善举来保持你们的友谊。Lastbutnotleast,onceyouhaveafriend,youmustconstantlymaintainyourfriendshipwithactsofkindness.希望你很快找到真诚的友谊。Ihopeyouwillfindtruefriendshipsoon.连句成篇DearLiMing,Iamgladtolearnthatyouarestudyinginanewschool,whichisagoodchanceforyoutoturnoveranewleaf.（适当增加的细节，高级表达）Donotworryifyouhavenorealfriendsrightnow.Althoughyouarenotanoutgoingboyandhavedifferentlifeexperiencesfromyourpresentclassmates,itisnotimpossibletomakegoodfriendsaslongasyoutakethefollowingtips.首先，如果你能与同学同甘共苦，就会交上朋友。（firstofall)Firstofall,youcanmakefriendswithothersifyousharetheirjoysandsorrows.第二，你应该向同学敞开你的心扉。Secondly,youshouldopenyourhearttoyourfriends,holdingbacknothing.(增加细节，闪光句子）最后，一旦有了朋友，你必须不断用善举来保持你们的友谊。（Lastbutnotleast;once)Lastbutnotleast,onceyouhaveafriend,youmustconstantlymaintainyourfriendshipwithactsofkindness.希望你很快找到真诚的友谊。Ihopeyouwillfindtruefriendshipsoon.=Hopefully,youwillfindtruefriendshipsoon.=Itishopedthatyouwillfindtruefriendship.DearLiMing,Iamgladtolearnthatyouarestudyinginanewschool,whichisagoodchanceforyoutoturnoveranewleaf.Donotworryifyouhavenorealfriendsrightnow.Althoughyouarenotanoutgoingboyandhavedifferentlifeexperiencesfromyourpresentclassmates,itisnotimpossibletomakegoodfriendsaslongasyoutakethefollowingtips.Firstofall,youcanmakefriendswithothersifyousharetheirjoysandsorrows.Secondly,youshouldopenyourhearttoyourfriends,holdingbacknothing.Lastbutnotleast,onceyouhaveafriend,youmustconstantlymaintainyourfriendshipwithactsofkindness.Ihopeyouwillfindtruefriendshipsoon.仿写下面是一个中学生给某报编辑部写的一封信，仔细阅读并就信的内容以编辑的名义给此中学生回一封信。DearEditor，Iamanactivegirl，andIspeakandlaughloudlyintheclassroom，likeaboy.Idon'tcareaboutsmallmatters.Onthecontrary，myneighbor，thegirlwhositsnexttome，speaksquietlyanddarenotdothethingsIoftendo.Icanunderstandthis.WhatIcan'tstandisthatsheoftengetsangrywithmeaboutsmallthings.HowcanIgetalongwithher?Sunny，Shandong注意：1.书信格式要规范；2．回信就原信内容给出至少三条建议(如谈心，相互理解，参加他们的生日等活动，谈论共同话题，分享快乐等等)。[思路分析]写作时应注意下面几点：1．确定文体：这是一篇应用文，写作中应注意书信的常规格式。2．主体时态：文章应以一般现在时为主。3．主体人称：由于是给别人提出建议，所以人称应该以第二人称为主。[词汇热身]1．与某人交朋友________________2．依我看________________3．与某人谈心________________4．参加某人……活动________________5．分享快乐________________6．出去散步________________【答案】1.makefriendswithsb.2.inmyopinion3．haveatalkwithsb.4.joinsb.in...[句式温习]1．相互理解对你们两人都很重要。____________________________________foryoutwo.2．我认为邀请她参加你和你的同学们的各种活动也很好。Ithinkit'sbetterforyoutoaskher________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.3．与她分享你的喜怒哀乐。________________________________________________________________________.4．真心希望这些建议能对你有帮助。________________________________________________________________________toyou.【答案】1.Understandingeachotherisveryimportant2.tojoinyouandyourclassmatesinallkindsofactivities3．Shareyourhappinessandsadnesswithher4.Itrulyhopetheadvicecanbeofhelp连句成篇DearSunny，It'sverygoodthatyouwanttomakefriendswiththisgirl.Inmyopinion，you'dbetterfirsthaveahearttohearttalkwithher，becauseunderstandingeachotherisveryimportantforyoutwo.AndIalsothinkit'sbetterforyoutoaskhertojoinyouandyourclassmatesinallkindsofactivities，suchasbirthdayparties，goingoutforawalk，discussingsomefashionabletopics，andsoon.Besides，helpingeachotherisalsoveryimportantforbothofyou.Justsharehappinessandsadnesswithher.AndIbelieveshewillunderstandyouintimeanditiscertainyouwillbegoodfriendsinfuture.Itrulyhopetheadvicecanbeofhelptoyou.Yours，EditorTape高考真题链接年高考全国卷Ⅱ假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。要点：⑴参加中文学习班；⑵看中文书刊、电视；⑶学唱中文歌曲；⑷交中国朋友。⑴词数100左右；⑵可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；⑶开头语已为你写好。