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SectionⅦReadingforWriting——有关旅行计划的电子邮件本单元的写作任务是读理查德给小李介绍旅行计划的电子邮件后，给朋友写一封介绍旅行计划的电子邮件。Ⅰ.Pre-writing(Ⅰ)LearningtowriteafterthemodelDearXiaoLi，MytimehereinChinaisgoingwell.Ilovemynewschoolandclassmates.OvertheOctoberholiday，myparentsandIareplanningtogotoXi’antoseetheTerracottaArmy.I’veheardthatitisanamazingsight，andIcan’twaittogo.TomethestoryoftheTerracottaArmyisalmostunbelievable.It’samazingthattherearemorethan8，000statues，andnooneinmoderntimesknewaboutthemuntilthe1970s.We’realsoplanningtovisitseveralotherplacesinXi’an.MydadandIarebothlookingforwardtogoingtotheShaanxiHistoryMuseum，becausemydadloveshistoryandIhaveheardthatthismuseumisknownasa“Chinesetreasurehouse”！We’realsogoingtotheXi’anCityWallandafewotherfamoussights.We’retakingthetrain，leavingthedaybeforetheOctoberholidaybegins.We’rearrivingat9：30amandwillstartsightseeingrightaway，soIhopewesleepwellonthetrain!Iguessthat’sallfornow！I’llwriteagainsoonandsendphotos！Doyouhaveanyplansforthecomingholiday？Hopetohearfromyousoon.Yourfriend，Richard(Ⅱ)Preparationforwriting—Wordsandphrases①________________利用②________________如下③________________游览④________________出发⑤________________七日游⑥________________欣赏风景⑦________________动身去某地⑧________________和……一起⑨________________即将来临⑩________________乘公共汽车takeadvantageofasfollowstakeatoursetout/offaseven-daytripenjoythesceneryleavefortogetherwitharoundthecornertakeabusⅡ.While-writing假设你是王明，寒假即将来临，你打算和家人去上海玩。请你给你的好友李华写一封e-mail,分享你的出行计划。要点：1.元月21日下午2点左右从醴陵坐高铁去上海，到上海后入住预订酒店，休息一晚。2.第二天进上海迪士尼乐园游玩，体验各种游乐设施，购买纪念品。3.第三天上午参观上海科技馆，下午登东方之珠，欣赏上海全貌。4.元月24日乘坐高铁返回。注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2.词数100左右。参考词汇：highspeedrailway高铁book预订Disneyland迪士尼乐园recreationfacilities游乐设施souvenir纪念品ShanghaiScienceandTechnologyMuseum上海科技馆OrientalPearlTower东方明珠Step1Listtheoutlineofthepassage.Paragraph1：__________________________________________________Paragraph2：_________________________________________________Paragraph3：_________________________________________________Step2Listthewords，phrasesandsentences.1.Wordsandphrases①________________vt.预订②________________登记③________________提前④________________同时⑤________________四天的旅行Iwillhaveafour-daytriptoShanghaiwithmyfamily.WhatweshalldoeverydaywhileinShanghai.Howabouttheplanforyourwinterholiday?bookcheckininadvanceatthesametimeafour-daytrip2.Sentences①随着寒假的到来，我和我的家人要到上海旅行四天。(as)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________②到达上海后，我们会先入住酒店好好休息，酒店会提前在网上预订，这样我们才有足够的精力去参观上海。(sothat)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________③下午我们将登上东方明珠，在那里我们可以欣赏到上海的全景。(fromwhich)_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Asthewinterholidayiscoming，Iwillhaveafour-daytriptoShanghaiwithmyfamily.UponarrivinginShanghai，wewillcheckinthehotelforagoodrestfirst,whichwillbebookedonlineinadvance，sothatwecanhaveenoughenergytovisitShanghai.WewillclimbtheOrientalPearlTowerintheafternoon，fromwhichwewillenjoythewholeviewofShanghai.Step3Draftthearticlebyusingthefollowingwords.as，sothat，besides，fromwhichDearLiHua，Howiseverythinggoing?Asthewinterholidayiscoming，Iwillhaveafour-daytriptoShanghaiwithmyfamily.Hereismyplan.WeareleavingLilingforShanghaibythehighspeedrailwayataround2：00p.m.onJan.21st.UponarrivinginShanghai，wewillcheckinthehotelforagoodrestfirst，whichwillbebookedonlineinadvance，sothatwecanhaveenoughenergytovisitShanghai.Onthesecondday，wearegoingtotheDisneylandtoexperienceallkindsofrecreationfacilities，andbuysomesouvenirsatthesametime.Onthethirdday，wewillvisitShanghaiScienceandTechnologyMuseuminthemorning.Besides，wewillclimbtheOrientalPearlTowerintheafternoon，fromwhichwewillenjoythewholeviewofShanghai.OnJan.24th，wewilltakethehighspeedrailwaybacktoLiling.Howabouttheplanforyourwinterholiday?Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours，WangMingⅢ.Post-writing—polishingthepassageExchangeyourpassagewithyourpartner，andpayattentiontothefollowingpoints.□1.Isthereaclearpurposeforthetrip?□2.Doeseachparagraphhaveaclearmainidea?□3.Doesthewriterusethepresentcontinuoustenseforfutureplans?□4.Doesthewriterusecommas，stops，andquestionmarkscorrectly?□5.Areallthewordsspeltcorrectly?□6.Areallthepropernounscapitalised?写作要点Timeandtraveldestination：OvertheOctoberholiday，myparentsandIareplanningtogotoXi’antoseetheTerracottaArmy.Someotherplacesofinterest：MydadandIarebothlookingforwardtogoingtotheShaanxiHistoryMuseum.WearealsogoingtotheXi’anCityWallandafewotherfamoussights.Meansoftransport：We’retakingthetrain，leavingthedaybeforetheOctoberholidaybegins.亮点表达1.旅游计划①Mytravelplanisasfollows.我的旅行计划如下。②Here/Belowismytravelplan.这儿/下面是我的旅行计划。③Winterholidayiscoming.Ihaveaplanforit.寒假要来了。对此我有一个计划。2.旅游目的地①Thismonth，IwilltraveltoChangshaandZhangjiajiewithmytwofriends，whichissupposedtobeaseven-daytrip.这个月，我将和我的两个朋友去长沙和张家界旅游，这应该是一次七日游。②I’mplanningtotraveltoSuzhou，acitycalledEasternVenice.我计划到苏州旅游，它被称作东方威尼斯。③TheMayDayiscoming