如何读?AVacationwithMyMotherInterpretationoftheText文本解读AstoryhowwherewhenwhywhowhatIInterpretationoftheText文本解读(Who)mombrotherandsisterDavidDadInterpretationoftheText文本解读(When)1.Asthefirstdayofourtripapproached(para.2)2.Finally,themomentofourdeparturearrived(para.2)3.Onthefourthorfifthnight(para.4)4.thenextday(para.4)InterpretationoftheText文本解读(How)情感线:1.本中“unwillingly”,“nervous”,“toourgreatrelief”体现了“我”和David心情的变化。2.在起程前“我”和David是不情愿的,在路途中,因担心妈妈会把“我们”落在路上,一路上“我们”都很紧张。而当爸爸拒绝妈妈搭帐篷的提议的时候“我们”松了一口气。Interpretationofunderlinedwordsandgiveninformation划线词和续写首句解读(G-N策略)1.Interpretationofgiveninformation首句解读:Para.1Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.GivenInformation(para.4)Interpretationofunderlinedwordsandgiveninformation划线词和续写首句解读(G-N策略)NewInformation①Whatdidwedowiththetent?②Whathappenedtothetent?③WhatdidmybrotherDavidandIdo?④Whatdidmymumdo?1.Interpretationofgiveninformation首句解读:Para.1Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.Interpretationofunderlinedwordsandgiveninformation划线词和续写首句解读(G-N策略)1.Interpretationofgiveninformation首句解读:Para.2Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.(para.4)GivenInformationInterpretationofunderlinedwordsandgiveninformation划线词和续写首句解读(G-N策略)NewInformation①Whatsightsdidweseeonthejourney?②Whatdidwedoonthejourney?③Howdidwefeel?④HowdidIfeelaboutmymother?1.Interpretationofgiveninformation首句解读:Para.2Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.2.Interpretationofunderlinedwords下划线词解读:absent-minded,forgetful,trip,David,camping,tent;Dad,Mom;,trouble,niceInterpretationofunderlinedwordsandgiveninformation划线词和续写首句解读Characters人物David;Dad;MomPersonality个性;品格absent-minded;forgetful;niceEvents事件;项目trip;camping;tent;trouble;IInterpretationofwritingideas写作思路解读1DadMomsuggestedthatwegocampinginthenextvillagehadalreadylainonthegrasscomfortablyinfrontofthetentwereaskedtopickupsomebranchestobuildafire.DavidIInterpretationofwritingideas写作思路解读2Momsuddenlysaidwithafirmtonehadagreattimetryingallthecampingequipment.DavidTheMicro-skillsTraininginwriting表达微技能:之准确的动作神态描写:兴奋篇Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.Wewereattractedbythebluesky,thesunandthestars.Butwhatimpressedmemostduringthejourneywasthattent,whichwasforgottendeliberatelybyMom.Thoughshedidlovegoingcamping,shepresentedthatpoorboywiththetentoutofsympathy.Thatwasmymom,whowassometimesabsent-minded,forgetful,yetalwayslovingandsweet.上面这一段文字虽然情节完整,但是叙事平铺直叙,语言简单,人物动作不够生动,人物情绪描写不到位,整体形象不够丰满。在描述妈妈的“兴奋”时只用了一个“excited”来直白地体现。我们可以通过对人物的动作、语言、神态等的细节描写来体现人物的情绪。I.词的积累名词:excitement,delight,happiness,ecstasy动词:laugh,smile,jump,skip,hop,dance形容词:excited,joyful,cheerful,pleased,thrilledTheMicro-skillsTraininginwriting表达微技能:之准确的动作神态描写:兴奋篇II.词块和句的积累1.Hewassoexcitedthathecouldhardlyspeak.2.Shecouldhardlycontainherexcitement.3.BothMarkandIarefeelingonthetopoftheworld.4.Hiseyesglitteringwithexcitement.5.ThechildrenwerethrilledwithjoyatthesightoftheChristmastree.6.Hearingthenews,hejumpedupanddownwithexcitement.7.Icouldn'thelpbutgrinfromeartoear.8.Theplayerjumpedforjoywhenhescoredthewinninggoal.9.Aslowsmileworkeditswayacrosshisfaceandintohiseyes.10.Bubblingoverwithhappiness,shehummedasshestrodethroughthecorridorinsearchofRaymond.TheMicro-skillsTraininginwriting表达微技能:之准确的动作神态描写:兴奋篇Haveatry牛刀小试:句子翻译与句型转换1.妈妈建议我们在下一个路过的村庄搭帐篷,她的眼中闪着兴奋的光芒。①Momsuggestedthatwegocampinginthenextvillage,________________________________.(运用with复合结构)(②_____________________________,momsuggestedthatwegocampinginthenextvillage.(运用独立主格)whenhethoughtofthewolf’sbloodymouthwithhereyesglitteringwithexcitement2.一到露营地点,妈妈就立即打开车门,迅速下车,催促我们搭帐篷。①Whenwearrivedatthecampingplace,Momopenedthedoorimmediately,__________________________________________________.(运用连动句句型)②Whenwearrivedatthecampingplace,Momopenedthedoorimmediately,_________________________________________________.(运用非谓语作状语)andstormedoutofthecar,urgingustoputupthetentstormedoutofthecar,andurgedustoputupthetentPossibleversion1Paragraph1Thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.Thinkingofthetent,Momsuggestedthatwegocampinginthenextvillage,witheyesglitteringwithexcitement.Consideringherenthusiasm,weallagreed.Whenwearrivedatthecampingplace,Momstormedoutinstantlyandurgedustoputupthetent.DavidandIwereaskedtopickupsomebranchestobuildafire.Andwhenwecameback,DadandMomhadalreadylainonthegrasscomfortablyinfrontofthetent,talkingmerrilywithalocalboyatourage,whoalwayscastglimpseatthistentcuriously.Soonwelearntthattheboyinragswashomeless.Onceagain,Mom“forgot”totakethetentwithusagain.Possibleversion1Paragraph2Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.Thebrightbluesky,thelimitlessgreengrass,thesettingsunandthecountlessstarsallkeptmespellbound.Butwhatimpressedmemostduringthejourneywasthattent,whichwasforgottendeliberatelybyMom.Thoughshedidlovegoingcamping,shepresentedthatpoorboywiththetentoutofsympathy.Thatwasmymom,whowassometimesabsent-minded,forgetful,yetalwayslovingandsweet.评点:妈妈在建议的同时眼里闪烁着兴奋的光芒,这一描写使人物的形象更加的丰满。动词“storm”和“urge”的使用,从动作上更加凸显出妈妈的迫切和兴奋。从人物神情、动