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CONTENTS目录概要写作评分标准及得分要点01概要写作得分技巧02CONTENTS目录概要写作评分标准及得分要点01概要写作得分技巧02评分标准档次内容语言A55B44C33D22E11F00评分标准1.本题总分为10分,其中内容5分,语言5分。2.评分时应注意的主要方面:内容要点、信息呈现的连贯性和准确性。3.词数超过60,酌情扣分。内容部分A.能准确、全面地概括文章主旨大意,并涵盖主要信息。语言部分A.能用自己的语言连贯、正确地表述。评分标准Moustache(胡子)forCash“Movember”,astheannualeventisknown,seesmenincountriesincludingtheUK,USandAustraliagrowouttheirfacialhairwhilecollectingsponsorshipmoneyfromfriends,familyandcolleagues,withthemoneygoingtocancercharities.Themonthofnoshavingbeganunofficiallyin2003,whenapairofmenfromAustraliapersuadedtheirfamilytojointhemingrowingamoustacheinordertoencouragementogetthemselvescheckedforcancer,whichisseenasdistastefulbysomemales.Ayearlater,thegroupdecidedtosetuptheMovemberFoundation,askingfriendsandcolleaguestoofferdonationsofmoneytosupporttheirefforts,andraisedamassiveA$54,000whichwassharedbetweenanumberofhealthprojects.Withthanksmostlikelytosocialmedia,Movembersoonwentglobalandthefoundationnowoperatesworldwide,havingraisedover£440millionsince2004.Theeffectsofthefundraisingarewide-reaching,whichhadmadeasignificantdiscoveryinthetreatmentofcancer.Theissueofsomemenbeingtooself-willedtovisittheirdoctorforacheckup,orperhapsbeingraisedinacultureof“toughitout”,hasledsomemalestoneglecttheirhealth,whichmaymeanitcouldbetoolateifsomethingpotentiallydeadlydiddevelop.However,Movemberishelpingtobreakdowntheshameofmalehealthbymakingitmoreaccessible,meaningthatmenaremorelikelytovisittheirdoctors.Theyfoundawaytoappealtomeninawaythatothercampaignsjustdon’t–withasortofblokey①jokiness.blokey:behavinginawaythatissupposedtobetypicalofmen,especiallymenenjoyingthemselvesinagroup.”“Itssuccessisduetoitswaytohavemenvisittheirdoctorswithblokeyjokiness.(要点5)MengrowmoustacheformoneyusedforcancercharitiesinMovember.(要点1)In2003,twomenstartedMovember.(要点2)In2004,thefoundationwassetup.(要点3)Sincethenithasgoneglobalandraisedlotsofmoney.(要点4)Movemberisanannualeventwhenmenstopshavingtoraisemoneyforcancercharities.SomeAustraliamenfirststartedittoencouragementodocancerchecksregardlessofdiscrimination.Thankstosocialmedia,Movemberspreadsglobally,resultinginadvancementincancertreatment.TheaimofMovemberistoprovideaneasyaccesstocheckupsformen.(58)3+4=71“Movember”,anannualeventstartedinAustraliain2003appealstomenstogrowoutmoustachetoraisemoneyforcancercharities.Withthehelpofmediaitspreadsworldwideandhelphumanstreatcancer.Movemberhelpstobreakdownmen'sshameofvisitingdoctorsthroughblokeyjokinesstoletmentoconcernabouttheirhealth.(56)4+3=72评分范例语言连贯语法错误内容部分B.能准确概括文章主旨大意,但遗漏个别主要信息。(4分)C.能概括文章主旨大意,但遗漏部分主要信息。(3分)语言部分B.能用自己的语言较连贯、正确地表述,但有个别语言错误。(4分)C.基本能用自己的语言连贯、正确地表述,但连贯性较差,且有少量不影响表意的语言错误。(3分)“Movember”isanannualeventencouragingmentogrowouttheirmoustachewhilecollectingmoneyforcancercharities.TheeventisinitiallylaunchedbyapairofmenwhosetuptheMovemberFoundationayearlater,whichhasraisedmuchmoneyandoperatesworldwidenow.Movembercanhelpmanbreakingdowntheshameofmalehealthbymakingitmoreaccessible,whichishelpfultocancertreatment.(68)4+3-1=63“Movember”seesmengrowouttheirfacialhair.Theissueofsomemenbeingraisedinacultureof“toughitout”hasledsomewomentoneglecttheirhealth.However,Movemberishelpingtobreakdowntheshameofmalehealth.Theyfoundawaythatmenenjoyingthemselvesinagrouptoappealtomen.(57)1+1=24评分范例字数限制内容及语言内容部分E.几乎不能概括文章的主旨大意,未涉及文中有意义的相关信息。(1分)语言部分E.几乎不能用自己的语言连贯、正确地表述。(1分)CONTENTS目录概要写作评分标准及得分要点01概要写作得分技巧02Concise!!!1Determinethetypeofwritingandidentifythetopicaswellastheauthor'spurpose.Dividethepassage&summarizethemainideaofeachpart.Determine&Divide3Addsometransitionalwordstomakethepassagesmooth.Checkthesummary.(tense,spell,etc.)Add&Check2Highlightthekeyinformation.Rewritethesamemeaning.(usingyourownwords,phrasesorstructures)Highlight&RewriteSummarySteps030102衔接(照应、替代、省略、连接和词汇衔接)逻辑同义转换:近义词、同义词等替换句子重构:调整词类、时态、语态等语言提炼(删除细节、删除具体例子、避免重复)整合要点SkillsofSummaryWritingPart1段落概括PRACTICE1However,moreresearchiscalledfortoensureitssecurity.Butmoreresearchisneededtoassureitssafety.(2017崇明区一模)同义转换PRACTICE2Peoplereadpoemsforenjoymentaswellasacademicpurposes.Whydowereadpoetry?Firstobviousone:becauseweenjoyit.Theonlyotherreasonisforacademicpurposes,andthat'snotwhythisishere.(2017奉贤区二模)H&RA&CPeoplereadpoemsforenjoyment.Peoplereadpoemsforacademicpurposes.aswellas/and调整词类PRACTICE3Thebeststrategytoachievegoodresultsintheexamistostudybooksearly.So,it'stheexamtimeagain—haveyoudonethenecessaryworktogetgoodmarks?Sleepingwiththetextbookunderthepillowinthehopethatknowledgewillbemagicallyabsorbedintoyourbrainasyousleepdoesn'twork.Thebeststrategyistospaceyourpracticeout,ratherthancraw(死记硬背)italltogether.Itmeanshitthebooksearly!(2017虹口区一模)H&RA&Ctoachievegoodresultstostudybooksearly提炼(删除细节、删除具体例子、避免重复)PRACTICE4Aninterestingstorymotivates/inspiresustoreadcontinuously,foritreflectsourreallives.Agoodstoryencouragesustoturnthenextpageandreadmore.Wewanttofindoutwhathappensnextandwhatthemaincharactersdoandwhattheysaytoeachother.Wemayfeelexcited,sad,afraid,angryorreallyhappy.Thisisbecausetheexperienceofreadingorlisteningtoastoryismuchmorelikelytomakeus'feel'thatwearepartofthestory,too.Justl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