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专题二十三书面表达之图画式1.【2015·上海】GuidedWritingDirections:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120–150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.学校即将举办“读书节”，目前正广泛征集“读书节”宣传册图片。假设你是该校学生潘阳，你已找到以下三幅图片，决定给读书节组委会写一封信，推荐其中一幅，你的信须包括以下内容：1.简单描述你想推荐的那幅图片；2.阐述你用这幅图片宣传“读书节”的理由。【参考答案】DearSir/Madam,SincetheReadingFestivalisaroundthecorner,I’mwritingtorecommendapicturewhichcanbeusedinthebrochuretoremindthestudentsofthepleasureofreading.Inthepicture,threestudentsaresittingatthetable,discussingheatedlywhattheyhavejustread.Itseemsthattheyhavehadalotoffunthroughthediscussion.Thoughitisadmittedthatreadingismostlyapersonalactivitywhichneedsquietnessandconcentration,asfarasI’mconcerned,itcanalsobeasharingexperiencewhenthesamebookisbeingappreciated.Justimaginethatyouhavereadaterrificdetectivestorywithfascinatingandintricateplots.Youaresoamazedbythegeniusofthewriterandyoucan’thelpsharingitwithyourclassmatesorbestfriends,whoturnouttohavebeendeeplyimpressedaswell.Themomentyoumentionthebook,thepassionandenthusiasmaboutthestorywillexplodewhichcanneverbegainedonyourown.Myidealatmosphereofreadingisjustlikethat,throughwhichyoucannotonlyappreciatethecontentbyyourself,butalsohavethepleasureofsharingtheplotsoropinionswithyourpeers,whichwillultimatelyenhanceyourunderstandingofthebook.Tosumup,thereasonofmyrecommendationisquitesimpleandapparentthatreading,insteadofbeingdullandisolating,canbefullofparticipationandcommoninterest.IsincerelyhopethatyouwilltakemysuggestionintoconsiderationandI’mlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yourssincerely,PanYang【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。运用定语从句apicturewhichcanbeusedinthebrochuretoremindthestudentsofthepleasureofreading.;apersonalactivitywhichneedsquietnessandconcentration;yourclassmatesorbestfriends,whoturnouttohavebeendeeplyimpressedaswell；Myidealatmosphereofreadingisjustlikethat,throughwhichyoucannotonlyappreciatethecontentbyyourself,butalsohavethepleasureofsharingtheplotsoropinionswithyourpeers,whichwillultimatelyenhanceyourunderstandingofthebook；运用连词Though,运用副词deeply修饰impressed运用了宾语从句discussingheatedlywhattheyhavejustread；Itseemsthattheyhavehadalotoffunthroughthediscussion;Justimaginethatyouhavereadaterrificdetectivestory;itisadmittedthatreadingismostlyapersonalactivity；Isincerelyhopethatyouwilltakemysuggestionintoconsideration此外，文章还使用了大量习语和短语，如notonly…butalso;asfarasI’mconcerned;Tosumup;sharewith;等。【考点定位】考查描述图片及表达理由。【名师点睛】一篇好的文章除了书写工整，还需要条理清晰以及充分利用各种句式和语法表达。可以适当地记忆一些表达的模，板比如说总结，开头和结尾。2.【2015·福建】书面表达(满分25分）请阅读下面图画，按要求用英语写一篇词数为120左右的短文。内容包括：1.描述画面；2.概述其含义；3.谈谈个人感想。凿壁偷光注意：1.短文开头已给出,不计入总词数；2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；参考词汇：凿，钻：boreInthepicture,【答案】Inthepicture,wecanseeaboyinwornclothes,sittingatashabbywoodentablewithapileofbooksonit.Aweakrayoflightcameinthroughasmallholeinthewallandhewasabsorbedinhisreading.Thisisawell-knownstoryfromancientChineseidiom.Theboy,beingpoor,couldn’taffordevenacandle,soheboredaholeinthewallto“steal”lightfromhisneighbour‘shousetoreadatnight.ThemoralofthestoryissparenoefforttoaccquireknowledgeandnevergetdiscouragedeasilynomatterhowdifficultthesituationmaybeOfcourse,thingsaretotallydifferenttodayItisnotthestoryitselfbutwhatisreflectedinthestorythatcounts.Hardworkpaysoff.Weshouldtakepainstoimproveourselvesthroughlearningandgetperparedforthefuture.【亮点分析】文章第一段描述图片，第一句中用到了动词ing形式的非谓语动词做伴随状语和with的复合结构Inthepicture,wecanseeaboyinwornclothes,sittingatashabbywoodentablewithapileofbooksonit.图中我们可以看见一个男孩穿着破旧的衣服坐在一个堆满书的桌子旁边。Aweakrayoflightcameinthroughasmallholeinthewallandhewasabsorbedinhisreading.一丝微弱的光亮从墙上的一个小洞穿过，他沉静在自己的阅读中。第二段第一句开始说这个图片的主题。Thisisawell-knownstoryfromancientChineseidiom.这是一个众人周知的中国古代成语。第二句也是用了一个分词结构表示伴随状语Theboy,beingpoor,couldn’taffordevenacandle,soheboredaholeinthewallto“steal”lightfromhisneighbour‘shousetoreadatnight.这个贫穷的男孩甚至不能够买得起一根蜡烛，于是他把墙凿了一个洞，从他邻居那里偷了一些光在夜晚阅读。第二段最后一句用了一个nomatter引导的让步状语从句。Themoralofthestoryissparenoefforttoaccquireknowledgeandnevergetdiscouragedeasilynomatterhowdifficultthesituationmaybe.故事的精神是要不遗余力的获取知识，并且不管有多么困难的情况从不轻易气馁。第三段结束Ofcourse,thingsaretotallydifferenttoday.当然，现在可完全不同了。第二句是一个not…but结构以及宾语从句Itisnotthestoryitselfbutwhatisreflectedinthestorythatcounts.不是这个故事本身而是这个故事反映出来的东西才是重要的。俗语：Hardworkpaysoff.功夫不负有心人。Weshouldtakepainstoimproveourselvesthroughlearningandgetperparedforthefuture.我们应该带着苦来通过学习来改进自己并且为未来做准备。【考点定位】看图说话写作。【名师点睛】本文考查看图说话写作，要求学生仔细描述图片并且发表自己的感受。一篇好的文章除了书写工整，还需要条理清晰以及充分利用各种句式和语法表达。可以适当地记忆一些表达的模，板比如说总结，开头和结尾以丰富文章的内容。3.【2015·北京】假如你是红星中学学生李华。根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍在“传统文化进校园“活动中，面向人艺术家学习捏面人的过程。并以”ADaywithaCraftsman”为题，给校刊”英语角“写一篇英文稿件。注意：词数不少于60.提示词：一个面团apieceofdough面人doughfigurine【答案】LastTuesday,ourclassinvitedanoldcraftsmantoteachushowtomakedoughfigurines.Whenthecraftsmancameintotheclassroom,wegavehimawarmwelcomeandtwoboyshelpedhimwiththetoolbox.First,heshowedusthebasicstepsandskillsofmakingdoughfigurines.Westoodaroundhimandwatchedattentively.Thenwestartedtohaveatryourselves.Theoldmanwalkedaroundandhelpeduspatiently.Finally,weputthefigurineswemadeonthetableandtookpictureswiththeoldcraftsman.Lookingatthefigurines,wewereallveryexcited.Wehopewecanhavemoreac