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Day3writing1234写作的流程写作训练写作小贴士写作Whatdoestheword‘writing’makeyouthinkof?writingwriting•在英语学习中，写是学生必须掌握的语言技能之一。写作体现了一个人的综合语言运用能力。要写好一篇文章，不仅要有扎实的语言基础知识包括语法、词汇、习惯用语等，还需要掌握必备的写作技巧。写作能力的培养不是一蹴而就的，它需要进行知识的积累和技能的训练。写作过程A.写作前头脑风暴整合资料制定列表大纲B.设计时间顺序空间顺序逻辑顺序C.草稿D.修改topic1我今天做的事情事情原因gotothePassionEnglishCampinteresting,teachersarelovelygetupearlytheclockrings,haveenoughsleephavelunchquick,delicious,rice,vegetables,fruits牢记哦！Keeptheminmind:Who…Where…When…Why…What…How…Askyourselfmorequestions:1)Whooftengivesyoulove/whodoyouoftengetlovefrom?(parents,friends,strangers)2)Whendotheygivelovetoyou?(everyday,inneed,introuble)“Lovearoundme”Usethefollowingpointsasaguide.（短文须包含下列要点）·Isthereanylovearoundyou?(Giveoneortwoexamples.)·Howdoyoufeelwhenyougetlovefromhim/her/them?·Whatareyougoingtodotoshowyourlove?Lovearoundme•Loveiseverywhereinmylife.Myparentslovemeandmyfriendscareaboutme.WhenIamindifficulty,theywillpullmeout.WhenIfeelsad,theywillcheermeup.IfeeldelightedandthankfulwhenIgetlovefromthem.Ialsowanttodosomethingtoshowmylovetoothers.Whentheyhavesomeproblems,Iwilltrymybesttohelpthem.Idobelieveifweallloveeachother,ourworldwillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.topic2Para1:介绍你的朋友如何认识他/她？你觉得你们的友情怎么样？Para2:客观描述年龄,衣服的颜色,眼睛,个头高矮,爱好，等等.Para3:介绍朋友的性格（举一两个示例：如帮助我解答问题、生病时关心我）Para4:结尾.你对你们友情以后的期望（Ihopewecan....）主体部分时间顺序Timeorder:•First,…•Firstofall,…•Second,…•Third,…•Next,…•Afterthat,…•Then…•Finally,…空间顺序Spaceorder•Ontheright,…•Ontheleft,…•Inthecenter,…•Inthemiddle,…•Nexttothe…,…•Besidethe…,…•Oppositethe______,…•Nearthe______,…•Underthe______,…转换写作逻辑的标志：1、递进：besides,inaddition,what’smore2、转折和对比：but,however,ontheotherhand,3、总结：inshort,inbrief,forthesereasons4、因果和结论：asaresult,dueto,becauseof,thus,therefore5、强调：really,indeed,surely培养英语思维---词的搭配•大雨•大桥•大楼•大错•大写•大病•大地震heavyrainlongbridgehighrise/largebuildingbig/terrible/seriousmistakecapitalletterseriousillnessmajorearthquake注意定语位置汉：常常是前置定语英：前置和后置定语e.g.我们学校的所有学生allthestudentsinourschool左边数第五个男孩thefifthboyfromtheleft英国人的日常生活everydaylivesoftheBritish在中国骑车的人数thenumberofcyclistsinChina几种气体的混合物amixtureofseveralgases介词短语作后置定语玩/放松的时间timetoplay/relax当一个音乐家的计划planstobeamusician出国学习的机会thechancetostudyabroad供人坐着休息的安静场所aquietplaceforpeopletositin/rest找到任何一个可以询问的人findanyonetoask动词不定式作后置定语城市用水waterusedbycities不乱扔垃圾的习惯thehabitofnotthrowingawayrubbish我曾经生活的村庄thevillagewhereIstayed/lived我昨晚吃的某样东西somethingIatelastnight到月球去的宇航员astronautswhotraveledtothemoon孩子们喜欢吃的食物food(which)childrenlike分词、定语从句等作后置定语写作小贴士:1.时态一致必须注意所用时态符合上下文。如果用过去时叙述一个故事，就要保证通篇都用过去时，不要在作文中间变成现在时。同样，如果是在谈论普遍问题、现状或日常习惯，就要用现在时，而不要用过去时。2.主语一致应该保持全文人称一致，这样读者才能跟随一个逻辑思维顺序。否则读者会感到困惑。e.g.Althoughyoumayfailtheexam,hecanstillbeusefultothecountry.Itnotonlyprovidesyouwithlotsofknowledgebutalsodevelopshisinterests.youyour写作小贴士:3.主谓一致/人称一致确保语法正确。e.g.ThingsIhatetodoisdoinghomework.WhatIhatetodois…EverypeoplestarttolearnEnglish.EverypersonstartstolearnEnglish.Theactivitiescanrelaxourselves.Theactivitiescanhelpusrelaxourselves./Wecanrelaxourselvesbytakingpartintheactivities.写作小贴士:有帮助的句子:Sayingsandproverbs:•Onself-help:Pridegoesbeforeafall骄者必败.Agoodbeginningishalfdone.良好的开端是成功的一半。Confidenceinyourselfisthefirststepontheroadtosuccess.自信是走向成功的第一步。Custommakesallthingseasy.有个好习惯，事事皆不难。Greathopesmakegreatman.伟大的抱负造就伟大的人物。Honestyisthebestpolicy.做人诚信为本。Hopeforthebest,butpreparefortheworst.抱最好的愿望，做最坏的打算。Nothingisdifficulttothemanwhowilltry.世上无难事，只要肯登攀。Ifathingisworthdoing,it’sworthdoingwell.值得做的是就值得做好。Wherethereislife,thereishope.生活充满了希望。/留得青山在，不怕没柴烧有帮助的句子:•Onhealth:Aclosemouthcatchesnoflies.病从口入。Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.一天一苹果，不用请医生。Earlytobedandearlytorisemakesamanhealthy,wealthyandwise.早睡早起身体好。•Onmotherhood:Amother'sloveneverchanges.母爱永恒。有帮助的句子:•Onfriendship:Afriendiseasierlostthanfound.得朋友难，失朋友易。Afriendisneverknowntillamanhasneed.需要之时方知友。•Onreading:Agoodbookisthebestoffriends,thesametodayandforever.一本好书，相伴一生。Byreadingweenrichthemind,byconversationwepolishit.读书使人充实，交谈使人精明。Chooseanauthorasyouchooseafriend.择书如择友。有帮助的句子:•Onentertainment:AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.只会用功不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。•Onlife:Weknownotwhatisgooduntilwehavelostit.好东西，失去了才明白。Varietyisthespiceoflife.丰富多彩是生活的调味品。Lifeisjustlikeabowlofcherries.生活犹如一盘樱桃。Livingwithoutanaimislikesailingwithoutacompass.生活没有目标等于航行没有指南针。Pleasanthoursflypast.快乐时光去如飞。有帮助的句子:Usefulsentencepatterns:•在各种…之中…•Amongvariouskindsof…,e.g.Amongvariouskindsofsports,Ilikejogginginparticular.•就我的看法…；我认为…•Inmyopinion,…•=Tomymind,….•=AsfarasIamconcerned,…e.g.Inmyopinion,playingcomputergamesnotonlytakesmuchtimebutisalsoharmfultohealth.•根据我个人经验…•Accordingtomypersonalexperience,…•=Basedonmypersonalexperience,…e.g.Accordingtomypersonalexperience,smilehasdonemealotofgood.•俗语说得好：「…」。•Wellgoesanoldsaying,…•=Asanoldsayinggoes(runs,says),…“e.g.Asanoldsayinggoes,“Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.•(A)…用下列方法…inthefollowingways.•(B)…有三个主要理由。…forthreemajorreasons.e.g.Ibuildmyconfidenceinthefollowingways.Peoplelearnaforeignlanguageforthreemajorreasons.•换言之…•inotherwords,…e.g.Inotherwords,Iwilltrymybesttoliveuptomygoal.•曾经…最…的…•最高级+现在完成时•Mr.ChangisthekindestteacherthatIhav