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Unit7-9作文评讲课主讲：谢泽武Howtodescribeyourfamily?1.外表特征：外貌与五官2.内在特征：性格特征等1.用英文描写人物的外貌与五官在描写人时,通常会描写其外貌特征,如:身材,体形,头发(长短,颜色,发型),脸型,肤色,眼睛,衣着,爱好等,但不必面面提到,一般要抓住某人比较明显的特征来描述。在描写人的外貌时,用一般现在时。(1).描述身高常用的形容词有:tall,short,ofmediumheight…(2).描述体型的有:fat,thin,slim,big,small,ofmediumbuild,strong…(3).描述相貌的有:beautiful,pretty,good-looking,ugly,sweet,handsome,funny…(4).在用英语描写面部容貌的时候，可以从脸型、头发、五官入手。脸型（face）:round圆的;thin瘦的;long长的;square方的…(1)发型（hairstyle）:straight直的;curly卷发的;crewcut平头;bald秃头的…(2)发色(haircolor):black乌黑的;blonde金黄色的;grey灰色的；white白色的…头发（hair）:(1)眼睛（eyes）:big大的,small小的…(2)鼻子(nose):straight挺直的;big大的;small小的；long长的…五官:kind,nice,friendly,strict,quiet,shy,lazy,smart…二.用英语描述人物的内在特征如：Canyoufindthemistakes?1.Myfamilyhavethreepeople.__________________________________2.Therearemyparents,mybrotherandI.__________________________________3.Myfatherandmeverylike.__________________________________4.Andmysister,shehasalonghair.__________________________________Therearethreepeopleinmyfamily.Theyaremyparents,mybrotherandI.Ilooklikemyfatherverymuch.Andmysisterhaslonghair.5.Myfatheristall,helikesP.E.verymuch.____________________________________6.Myfamilyisveryfriendly.____________________________________7.Letmetellyouwhatdomyfamilylooklike.____________________________________8.Iverylovemyfamily.____________________________________MyfatheristallandhelikesP.E.verymuch.Myfamilyareveryfriendly.Letmetellyouwhatmyfamilylooklike.Ilovemyfamilyverymuch.Howtowriteacompositionaboutdescribingyourfamily?Unit7-9书面表达（15分）某英语报社正在以“Myfamily”为话题征集文章。假如你是张磊，请你根据以下要点写一篇文章向该报社投稿。要点：1.Howmanypeoplearethereinyourfamily?2.Whatdoyourfamilylooklike?3.Whataretheylike?要求：1.语句通顺，逻辑连贯。2.包括以上要点，60词左右。1.审字数。注意字数不能过多，也不能太少。如作文要求60词左右，大家最好控制在55-65之间。2.审写作要求与内容要求。注意看要求写几方面的内容，理解每一方面的内容要求写什么，确定哪一方面的内容是重点要叙述的。3.审信息点。切记不要缺写信息点，也不要过多增加信息点，避免信息点理解错误。第一，学会审题。第二，增加印象分。1.段落分明：一般情况下，作文要有三个段落：Beginning,bodyandending。当然有时也可以整合成两段。2.书写整洁：作文一般有1-2分的卷面分。第三，如何来写好每一个段落呢？1.开头段(Beginning):开门见山，直奔主题。如：Ihave/liveinahappyfamily.Therearefourpeopleinit.Theyaremyparents,mybrotherandI.2.主体部分(Body）：关注三方面。（1）.使用过渡句。如：Doyouwanttoknowmyfamily?Nowletmedescribethemtoyou.（2）.使用连接词。如：表并列连词and,表转折的but,表选择的or,表原因的because或者so等等。（3）.注意标点符号的正确使用。3.结尾段(Ending):首尾呼应，点明主题。如：Thisismyfamily.Ilovemyfamilyverymuch.Rewriteyourcompositionbyyourself.Ihaveahappyfamily.Therearefourpeopleinmyfamily.They’remyparents,mybrotherandI.Nowletmedescribethemtoyou.Myfatheristallandthin.Heisalittlestrictandhedoesn’ttalkmuch.Mymotheriskindoffatandsheisveryfriendly.Mybrotheristallandheisofmediumbuild.Heissmartandhealwayshelpsmewithmyhomework.I’mthinwithshortstraighthair.I’malittlelazy.Thisismyfamily.IIovemyfamilyverymuch.Whatdoyoulearnfromthislesson?Homework1.Copythecompositioninyournotebook.2.Recitethecompositionaboutdescribingyourfamily.