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BasicWritingHowtointroduceaplace优秀作文不合格作文衡水中学学生作文：衡水中学学生作文：衡水中学学生作文衡水中学学生作文：衡水中学学生作文衡水中学学生作文：衡水中学学生作文优秀作文不合格作文衡水中学学生作文：衡水中学学生作文：衡水中学学生作文衡水中学学生作文：衡水中学学生作文衡水中学学生作文：衡水中学学生作文优秀作文不合格作文Practicemakesperfect.什么样的作文才是好作文？•书写工整，无乱涂乱画；•注意大小写和标点；•分三段；•无单词拼写、词性和时态错误；•主谓一致；•恰当使用关联词；•简单句表达正确；•使用了复杂的句子结构；•表达方式多样化，注意长短句搭配；•使用了好词好句。假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom打算来中国。请根据表格中的信息给他写封邮件，向他推荐苏州。位置：中国东南部；面积：约8400平方公里；人口：约1000万；风景优美，素有“人间天堂”之称；中国著名的历史文化名城，以刺绣、园林闻名于世；主要景点：寒山寺HanshanTemple拙政园HumbleAdministrator’sGarden、及虎丘TigerHill词数100左右;paradise天堂embroidery刺绣Whenyouintroduceaplace,whataspectswillyouwriteabout?location/areahistory/culturepopulationscenerylocalproductsaplaceclimate1Referenceexpressions:refertobesituated/locatedinsphas/witha(long)historyof...has/withapopulationofcoveranareaofTherearemanytouristattractionssuchas假如你是李华，向你的朋友Jim介绍北京：1.中国首都，是政治、文化中心；2.位于中国的北方，人口2100万，占地16400k㎡；3.历史悠久，有众多旅游景点，如长城、颐和园、故宫等，每年有成千上万的国内外游客到北京参观；4.美食以北京烤鸭最为出名,愿意当向导带他去品尝。参考词汇：故宫theForbiddenCity；颐和园theSummerPalace;北京烤鸭PekingDuck词数：120个左右，可适当添加细节，以使行文连贯。典题示例典题示例项目结论体裁话题时态人称审题谋篇:说明文介绍北京一般现在时第三人称1.中国首都，是政治、文化中心；2.位于中国的北方，人口2100万，占地16400k㎡；3.历史悠久，有众多旅游景点，如长城、颐和园、故宫等，每年有成千上万的国内外游客到北京参观；4.美食以北京烤鸭最为出名,愿意当向导带他去品尝。词句推敲:6.ABOUTBeijingisthecapitalofChina.Itisourcountry’spoliticalandculturalcenter.Ithasalonghistory.BeijingissituatedinthenorthofChina.Itcoversanareaof16000squarekilometers.Ithasapopulationof21million.BeijinghasmanyplacesofinterestsuchastheGreatWall,theForbiddenCityandtheSummerPalace.MillionsofpeoplefromhomeandabroadvisitBeijingeveryyear.BeijingisthecapitalofChina.Itisourcountry’spoliticalandculturalcenter.Ithasalonghistory.1.用同位语和with短语：Beijing,_______________,isourcountry’spoliticalandculturalcenter____alonghistory.Howtoorganisesentences?thecapitalofChinawith2.巧用介词短语和过去分词作后置定语：BeijingissituatedinthenorthofChina.Itcoversanareaof16000squarekilometers.Ithasapopulationof21million.Beijing,_______inthenorthofChina,_____anareaof16000squarekilometers_____apopulationof21million.situatedcoverswith3.用Therebe句型、替换成高级词汇：BeijinghasmanyplacesofinterestsuchastheGreatWall,theForbiddenCityandtheSummerPalace.________many_______________suchastheGreatwall,theForbiddenCityandtheSummerPalace.There'retouristattractionsMillionsofpeoplefromhomeandabroadvisitBeijingeveryyear.4.善于用定语从句和被动语态：被动：Beijing_______________millionsofpeoplefromhomeandabroadeveryyear.定语从句：Therearemillionsoftourists_______visitBeijingeveryyear.isvisitedbywho5.用好连词，顺理成章。Tobeginwith,Beijing,thecapitalofChina,isourcountry’spoliticalandculturalcenterwithalonghistory.SituatedinthenorthofChina,itcoversanareaof16000squarekilometerswithapopulationof21million.Inaddition,there'remanytouristattractionssuchastheGreatWall,theForbiddenCityandtheSummerPalace.What'smore,it'svisitedbymillionsofpeoplefromhomeandabroadeveryyear.ABExchangeyourcompositionsandhelpeachothertoimproveyourwriting.Putupyourhandifyouneedmyhelp!对照作文评价表！Thankyou!Designedby于晓娟Homework:Improveyourwriting.