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Mybestfriendawritinglessonby:BaiYuping•Beforewriting----choosewhatyouwanttowritePrepareforyourwritingEnjoysomesayingsaboutfriends！Afriendislikewine,theolder,thebetter.Alifewithoutfriendsisjustlikealifewithoutsun.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.Enjoysomesayingsaboutfriends！•Afriendissomeonewhofillsourliveswithbeauty,joygrace.•Afriendissomeonetolaughwith,overlittlelittlethings.•Afriendissomeoneweareseriouswith,infacingwhateverlifebrings.•Afriendmakestheworldwelivein,abetter,happierplace.friendforeverrememberI(me)evenoldRemembermeforever,evenIamold.Iwillrememberyouforever,evenyouareold.Doyouhaveafriend?Whatisheorshe?Whendoyougettoknoweachother?Doyouhavesomethingincommon?Whatarethedifferencesbetweenyouandher/him?Whatishe/shelike?What’shis/herhobby?Doyouthinkwhatmakesagoodfriend?Whycanyoubegoodfriends?friendappearancetall,short,heavy,longStraightblackhair,beofmediumbuild…personalityoutgoing,shy,friendly,kind…similaritieshobbieslikedoingdifferencesname,gender,job,nationality词汇语库•词：•bigeye,longhair,tall,handsome,pretty…•kind,friendly,wild,warm-hearted,shy…•painting,football,skating,gocamping…•have…incommon,bedifferentfrom•both…and,neither…nor句子语库•so…that,such…that•likedoing,enjoydoing•spenddoing•Ittakessb.sometimetodo…•Itisimportantforsb.todo…•Ithink…•sb.isa…who/that…•sb.is…than…•Duringwriting---usethewordsandsentencesyouthoughtofjustnowtowriteyourfriendTopicsentenceWhoisyourfriend?Hisorherappearanceorpersonality.Hisorherhobby.Yoursimilarities.Yourdifferences.Whatmakesyoubegoodfriends?EndingBody篇章结构•Afterwriting---shareandcompare•Findyourshortcomingsandmistakes(person,tenseandnumbers)•Improveyourstructurestomakeitnice•Changesimplesentencesintocomplexones•Checkifyouhaveusedsomesentencepatterns、conjunctions、andconnectives•Thinkifyouhavetotallygotwhatareaskedtowrite•ReadagainIhaveagoodfriend.Sheisastudent.HernameisLinda.Sheisthirteenyearsold.Shehastwobigeyesandlongstraightblackhair.Sheiskindandoutgoing.Shelikesreading.Ilikemusic.Webothlikewatchingcartoonmovies.Hopethatourfriendshipwilllastforever.•Simplesentences:•Myfriendisa13-year-oldgirlstudentnamedLindawithtwobigeyesandlongstraightblackhair.Sheissokindtoeveryonethateveryonelikesher.Sheismoreoutgoingthanme,soIenjoytalkingwithherbecauseofhersenseofhumorandself-confidence.Longsentences:•MygoodfriendisahandsomeboynamedRoywithtwosmalleyesandapairofblackglasses.Weweregoodfriendssincewewereinprimaryschool.Heisalittletallerthanme.Butheismuchquieterthanme,whichmakeshimagoodlistener.BothofuslikeplayingbasketballbecauseKobeisourgreatidol.•Rewriting---improveyourwritingsafteryoupolishyouroldonesUsefulsentences:•Ihaveagoodfriendwhose…•He/Sheisa…boy/girlwith…•He/Sheisso…that…•He/sheissucha/an…that…•Wehave…incommon…•Therearealso…•Weboth…•Notonlyshe/he…butalso…Everyoneneedsfriend,becausefriendsarelikewine,theolder,thebetter.IhaveanoldfriendnamedRoy,heiskindofstrongwithapairofglasses.Heisfriendlytoeveryone,andthemostimportant,webothlikedplayingbasketballinourfreetimesinceprimaryschool,andheisgoodatplayingit.Ienjoyplayingbasketballwithhim,andhealwaysteachesmetobeabetterplayer.Inaddition,Iamquieterthanhim,butheisoutgoing.Maybethat’swhywecanbegoodfriendsforsolong.IneedRoybecausewespendalotofhappytimetogether,andallthesearemybeautifulandeverlastingmemories.bodyTheending!Alifewithoutfriendislikealifewithoutsun.Iwon’tbehappyunlessthereissomeonetosharemyjoysorsorrowswithinmylife.IalwayssharemyhappinesswithmybestfriendNancybecausesheisagoodlistener.Sheiskindandpatient,andIneversawherfeelupset.What’smore,sheisthatkindofpersonwhocanalwaysmakeyoufeelhopefulandactivetolife.IalwayshelpherwithherEnglishandsheoftengivesmeahandtopullmeoutfromhardmathproblems.IfeelgoodwhenIspendtimewithherandwealwayshelpeachother,that’swhywecouldbegoodfriendssinceprimaryschool.Idon’twanttohavemanyfriends,becauseIhaveNancyandsheisthesuninmylife.Tipsforyourwriting:•Usecertainperson(pronouns);•Usecorrecttense；•Choosecertaintypeofwriting;•Usecomplexsentencesifpossible;•Usesuitablesentencepatternsifyoucan;•Useconjunctionsproperly;TryTryFly!TrytowriteyourownarticlebyusingthewayIshowedyou!