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英语满分作文DearBob,I’msogladthatyouarecomingtolearnChinesehere.I’vealreadyfoundyouahousenearourschool.I’dliketotellyousomethingaboutit.YoumaygetonNo.llbusatFangCaoStreetandthenextstopisjustJianXinChineseSchool.Thehouseisneartheschool.Itisabout25squaremetres.Inthebedroom,thereisabed,asofastandingagainstthewallandatablenearthewindow.Youmayfindalightonthetableandachairnexttoit.Therearetwootherroomsconnectingthebedroom.Theleftoneisabathroomandtherightoneisakitchen.Soyoumaycookbyyourself.Therentforthehouseis500yuanpermonth.Hopeyou’llenjoystayinghere!Yours,LiHua满分理由本文内容具体，详略得当，表述方式很有创造力和新意，长短句并用，语言结构富于变化，错落有致，顺畅圆润，尤其是情态动词和分词的运用很独到，为文章增色不少。作文：DearBob,I’mgladtohearfromyou.Welcometoourcityinseptember.I’vefoundasuitablehouseforyou.ThehouseisonFangCaoStreet,notfarfromtheJianxinChineseSchool.IfyoutaketheNo.11bus,itisjustonestop.Itisaflatonthethirdfloorofabuilding.Ithasthreerooms,aliving-room,abathroomandakitchen.Youcancookyourself.Themirror,thebasinandthebathtubareveryconvenientforyou.Intheliving-room,thereisabed,asofaandadeskwithchair.Thedeskisnexttothewindow.Itwillbegoodforstudy.Thetotalsizeis25squaremetresandtherentis500yuanamonth.Willyoubesatisfiedwiththisflat,oryouwantanotherone?Justletmeknow.I’lltrymybesttohelpyou.Yours,LiHua满分理由本文内容详实，描述具体细腻，用词适当准确，如“suitablehouse”、“notfarfrom’’等，另外文中的选择疑问句也很有新意。最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。60％的同学认为40％的同学认为1．不应该收门票2公园是公众休闲的地方3l如收门票，需建大门、围墙，会影响城市形象1．应收门票，但票价不要太高2．支付园林工人工资3．购新花木注意：1．信的开头已为你写好。2．词数：100左右。3．参考词汇：门票---entrancefeeDearEditor．I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwehavehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks．Deareditor,I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwehavehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.60%ofusschoolmatesthinkthatanentrancefeedonotmeetpeople’sexpectations,foraparkisconsideredtobeaplacewherethepubliccanhaveagoodtimewhentheyarenotbusyeitherathomeoratwork.Ifanentrancefeemustbepaidbythevisitorsforapark,itwillbenecessarytobuildagateandsurroundingwalls.Intheendacitywilltakeonabadlook.40%ofusschoolmatesthinkthatanentrancefeecanbeaccepted,butitmustnotbetooexpensive.Themoneyfromticketsellingcanbeusedforpayingthegardenersintheparkandbuyingsomeotherkindsofflowersandtrees.Withregardtomyself,Ithinkanentrancefeeisuseful,foritcanbeusedtoprotectapark.Dowesharethesameopinion,deareditor?Yourstruly,LiHuaDeareditor,I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwehavehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.Sixtystudentsoutofonehundredthinkthatanentrancefeeshouldnotbeboughtbeforeoneentersapark,foritisaplaceforthepublictogotowhentheyarefree.Ifaticketmustbebought,agateandwallshavetobebuiltforapark,whichwillmakeacitylookugly.Fortystudentsoutofonehundredthinkthatanentrancefeeshouldbeboughtbeforeoneentersapark,butthatthepriceoftheticketshouldbereasonable.Moneythatisgotfromticketsellingcanbeusedtopaythegardeningworkersandbuydifferentkindsofflowersandtrees.Asformyself,Ireallythinkparksaregoodplacestogotoatweekendsandonholidays.Atthesametime,we,asvisitors,shouldpaytheentrancefeewhenweenterapark.Afterall,ittakesalotofmoneytomaintainaparkingoodworkingorder.Doyouagreewithme,deareditor?Yourstruly,LiHuaDeareditor,I’mwritingtotellyouaboutthediscussionwehavehadaboutwhetheranentrancefeeshouldbechargedforparks.Sixtypercentofmyschoolmatesarefortheideathatanentrancefeeshouldnotbeforcedonthepublic.Theybelieveparksaretheplacewherethepublicenjoythemselvesattheirleisure.Theythinkthatagateandwailsaretobebuiltifanentrancefeeistobecharged.Thecitywillnotlooksobeautifulasitshouldhave.FortypercentofmyschoolmatesarefortheideathatanentrancefeeisOK,butitshouldn’tbeoutofcontrol.Entrancefeecanbeusedtopaythegardenersandbuynewtypesofflowersandtrees.Formyself,I’dliketosaythatifweallworkhardtobuildourcityintoaflowergarden,whocaresabouttheentrancefeeforparks?MyFavouriteTVProgram(我最喜欢的电视节目)IliketheprogramAnimalWorld.Firstofall,Ilikeanimals,especiallysmallanimals.Secondly,thehostisabletomaketheprogramlivelyandinteresting.Thirdly,throughthisprogramIknowalotofthingsthatIhaven'tknownbefore.Igainsomeknowledgeaboutanimallife,suchas,differentlivesofvariouskindsofanimals,therelationshipbetweenpeopleandnature,peopleandanimal,andtheimportanceofanimalprotection.Iwanttosaythatanimalsarepartofnatureasweare.Theycannotbeseparatedfromthehumans.Wemustkeepnatureinbalance.Pleasegiveyourlovetoanimals.Stopkillingthem.我喜欢“动物世界”这个节目。首先，我喜欢动物，尤其是小动物。第二，主持人把节目办得既生动又有趣。另一方面，通过这个节目，我知道了许多以前不知道的关于动物生活方面的事情，例如不同动物的不同生活习惯，人与动物之间、人与自然之间的关系，还有保护动物的意义。我想说的是，动物是自然的一部分，它们与人类不可分割，我们必须保持生态平衡。请把你们的爱给它们吧，不要杀害它们。AnimalWorldismyfavoriteprogram.Firstofall,Ilikeanimals,especiallysmallanimals.Secondly,thehosthastheabilitytomaketheprogramlivelyandinteresting.Thirdly,throughthisprogramIknowalotofthingsthatIhaven'tknownbefore.Igainsomeknowledgeaboutanimallifesuchasdifferentlivesofdifferentanimals,therelationshipbetweenpeopleandnature,peopleandanimal,andthemeaningofanimalprotection.NowIunderstandanimalsarepartofnatureasweare.Theycannotbeseparatedfromthehumans.Wemustkeepnatureinbalancesothatwewillhaveago