2011年6月英语四级答案及解析完整版

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2011年6月英语四级答案及解析完整版PartIWriting标准版DoingShoppingOnlineWiththedevelopmentoftheInternet,shoppingisnolongeratiringthing.Justclickyourmousetochoosethearticlesyoulike,andthepurchaseisdone.Youdon'tevenhavetostepoutoftheroom.Itseemsalleasyandquick.However,people'sopinionsvaryonthistrend.Somebelievethatonlineshoppingistimeandmoneysaving.Withplentifulselectionoptions,theycanbuywhatevertheylikeatanytimeconvenient.Stillothersinsistthatmis-purchasingaloneisannoyingenough,nottomentionthecredibilityofthesellersandthesafetyoftheiraccounts.Inmyopinion,theconvenienceandexcitementofonlineshoppingisbeyondalldoubts.Inthemeantime,wemustalwaysbearinmindthatcertaintrapsdoexist,sowe'dbettermakesurethesellersaretrustworthybeforebuying.Inaddition,weshouldalsoguardourselvesfromthepotentialhackerswhomightstealouraccountinformation.文章点评:这是一篇“中等偏上”的学生作文。本文先对网购热潮进行简介,引出全篇;接着对网络购物的正反两方面进行对比;最后提出自己的看法结束全篇。整体看思路清晰,逻辑严密,行文流畅,用语较为地道。下面说一下这篇文章的有待提高之处:1.文章结构上,能看得出该同学试图采用议论文的“三段式”(提出问题、分析问题、解决问题)。但是,以“WiththedevelopmentoftheInternet”为开首语,有些落入俗套,有硬套模板的嫌疑。稍加注意,应该能写出更好的句子。2.微观语言点方面,有些语句稍显啰嗦,比如Withplentifulselectionoptions…简化成Withplentifulselections…更好,意思没有丝毫减损,表达力反而增强许多。高分版Nowadays,canwefindapersonwhohasnotexperiencedonlineshopping?Definitelynot.Onlineshoppingiscomingintofashioninmostofcitiesduetotherapiddevelopmentofinternettechnology.Onlineshoppingiswelcomedbymostpeopleduetovariousreasons.Fromtheperspectiveofconsumer,itcansavesometimeforpeoplewhodon’thavemuchsparetime.Justclickthemouse,theycangetwhatevertheywantwhilestayingathome.Fortheretailers,itcancutsomecostsforthosewhodon’thavemuchcirculatingfunds.Theydon’thavetorentahouseandspendmoneyonemployeescomparedwiththetraditionaltrademode.However,therearestillsomedefectsinonlineshopping.First,facetofacedealmakesonlineshoppinglessreliableandtrustworthy.Second,peoplewilllosethefunofbargain.Itisundeniablethatshoppingontheinternethasbecomeanirresistibletrendinmodernsociety.It’sofgreaturgencythatweneedtoregulatetherelativelawsinaccordancewiththerapidgrowthofonlineshopping.Onlyinthiswaycanweenjoythepleasureandconvenienceofonlineshoppingwithouttheconcernofbeingtreated.点评:本次四级作文探讨的是最近的热点话题之一——互联网网购。目前网购的风靡程度是众所周知,因此,考生对于该话题还是比较熟悉的。但是,比较特殊的是,题干所列出的要求的是考生从一个客观的角度来阐述该话题,而不是简单陈述自己的意见。所以,考生应当审清楚题,在写作时不仅仅要列出网购的优点,还必须给出相应的缺点。按照四级作文的要求,考生在第一段时应该总述现象并引出话题;第二段考生应当从正反两方面来论述网购,分别铺陈其优缺点;关于优点,网购的优点很多,考生可择其最突出显著的方面来阐述,比如说网购可以节省很多时间;网购可以节省很多成本开支等;其次,缺点方面考生可以把重心放在诚信方面;为了不至于跟优点相比,缺点方面太轻,考生可以考虑稍微提一下其他缺点,比如说与传统购物相比,网购少去了很多砍价的乐趣;第三点要求考生对于第二段列出的缺点给出自己的建议。此处我们可以根据第二段列出的缺点方面给出相应的防范应对措施。整篇作文话题比较好展开,难度不大,只要考生审好题,列出相应点,相信作文不会是难题。外教版Onlineshoppinghasbeenaboontomanyindustriesandcompanieslookingtoexpandtheirmarkets.Also,it'sconvenientforshopperswhoaretoobusytoleavethehouse.However,insomecasesnothingcanreplaceatruefacetofaceshoppingexperience.Internetshoppingisconvenientforthemotherswhospendalldaydoinghousechoresandforthefatherswhoworkafull-timejob.Ontheotherhand,therearelimitstoshoppingonline,forexample:guessingthecorrectsizeofclothingonacomputerscreencanbeveryfrustrating.Forthebusymotherandfather,onlineshoppingisaveryusefulandconvenienttool.But,thereareinstances,likeclothesshopping,wherenothingbeatstherealthing.点评:作者在第一段描述了网购作为一种时尚给大家的生活带来了便利,然后话锋一转,说网购仍然取代不了面对面的购物交流。第二段主要还是从正反两方面分析了网购的优势和不足,以此描述大家对网购的不同反应。第三段作者表明了自己的观点,对网购的便利和不足之处都做了描述。综合来讲,本篇文章观点明确,结构清晰,语言表达地道,有不少闪光词汇,但是,内容深度上来讲还有些欠缺,另外,最后一部分表达个人观点,和第二段稍有重复。考生需要注意观点的清晰,不宜模棱两可。PartIIReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)1.B.Itsbadtaste解析:题干中generallyknownfor对应原文areputationfor,根据原文第一句WhydoesBritishfoodhaveareputationforbeingsobad?Becauseitisbad!可知关键词为bad,故选B。2.A.aninadequatesupplyofproduction解析:由题干关键词theSecondWorldWar可以定位到原文第四段,二战之前,英国的食品都是进口的,二战之后,食品供应船只遭到攻击,只能依靠配给。故选A,食品供给不足。3.B.Itspeoplecaredmoreforquantity解析:由competewithsomeofitsneighbouringcountries可以定位到原文第6段,theyweren'tlookingfor…,theywerelookingfor…,thisprioritizationofquantityoverqualityprevailedfordecades.可见他们对数量的追求高于质量,因此选B。4.C.allkindsofoverseasvisitors解析:由题干关键词culinary定位到原文第7段,根据最后一句…itsabilitytopleasethetastesofanyinternationalvisitor.而anyinternationalvisitor就等同于答案allkindsofoverseasvisitors。故选C.5.C.Newideasandpresentations解析:问题是按照DavidTamlyn的观点,香港的饮食者喜欢什么。先根据DavidTamlyn这个人名定位到原文第八段,再根据最后一句话HongKongdinersareextremelyresponsivetonewideasorpresentations,…这里的areextremelyresponsiveto在意思上等于题干中的welcome。6.D.maintainBritishtraditionaltastes解析:一些饭店修改菜谱,采用新样式,而另外一些则保留英式口味,再根据Tamlynisinthesecondcamp,可知Tamlyn属于后者,即保留原汁原味。故答案选D。7.B.Theyareproducedonexcellentorganicfarms解析:由NeilTomes定位到原文第12段,根据最后两句话…Ithasexcellentorganicfarms,beautifullycraftedcheeses,high-qualitymeats可选出答案B,NeilTomes喜欢英国原料的原因就在于原料产于优秀的有机农场。8.thelocalmarkets解析:根据原文,…whichmeanswetakeourvegetablesfromthelocalmarkets,…即除了从英国直接进口,还有部分蔬菜从本地市场购买的。9.inaBritishway解析:先定位到ThePhoenix那一段,再找到下一段,Weusealotofingredientsthatpeoplewouldn'tperhapsassociateasBritish,butarepresentedinaBritishway.10.sharetheirmeals解析:AtYorkshirePudding,Hillsaysthathisstaffasksdinerswhethertheywouldliketosharetheirmeals.餐厅之所以在上菜之后再供应碟子,原因就在于可能会有人愿意和别人分享食物。PartIIIListeningComprehensionSectionA11.M:Shawn'sbe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