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书面表达系列讲练之自然衔接、过渡byMissHuang书面表达评分原则根据文章的内容和语言初步确定档次。第五档.21~25分第四档.16~20分第三档.11~15分第二档.6~10分第一档.1~5分0分技巧1.使用较高级的词汇3.使用恰当的连接词词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。增强书面表达效果的技巧2.使用较丰富的句式对比：根据高考作文的评分标准的五个档次对下面两篇作文进行评分。给澳大利亚的朋友写一封信，谈谈减负给学生的学习和生活带来的变化。【Sample1】第_______档次I’mverypleasedtotellyouthechangeswhichhavetakenplaceinmylifesinceourhomeworkwasreduced..Before,wehadmanyclasseseveryday.Ihadtodoalotofhomeworkafterschool.Iwenttobedat11:30intheevening.Ihadnotimetoplay.Iwasverytired.NowIcanvisitmuseums.Icanlearncomputeranddrawing.Intheevening,IcanreadbooksandnewspapersandwatchTV.Igotobedat10:00now.第五档第四档第三档第二档第一档21-25分16-20分11-15分6-10分1-5分I’mverypleasedtotellyouthechangeswhichhavetakenplaceinmylifesinceourhomeworkwasreduced.Beforethat,learningduringthedaywasverysimple.Havingclassanddoinghomeworkwastheonlythingweshoulddo.Intheevening,wealsohadagreatdealofhomeworktodo.Asaconsequence,wecouldnotgotobeduntil11:30.Nevertheless,sincereducingthelearningload,mylifehasbecomemuchmorehealthyandcolorful.Ioftenvisitmuseumsandcomputerroomsanddrawpicturesinmysparetime.Intheevening,IalsohavetimetowatchTVandreadnewspapers.What’smore,Igotobedatabout10pminsteadofstayinguplateatnight,makingmystudymoreefficient.Inshort,Iamquitesatisfiedwithmylifenow.【sample2】第_____档次第五档第四档第三档第二档第一档21-25分16-20分11-15分6-10分1-5分•一、表示起始关系的过渡性词语aboveall,firstofall,tobeginwith,accordingto,asyouknow/asisknown,asisshownin...•Egs：•1.按照调查结果，现在总数已减少到不足1000只。(2013重庆卷满分作文）_____________aresearch,thetotalnumberisreducedtolessthan1,000now.•2.我们大家都知道，好的学习习惯可以提高学习效率。（四川卷满分作文）_____________________,goodlearninghabitscontributetoefficientstudy.AccordingtoAsweallknow/Asisknowntous•3.首先，我认为一个人在国外多交朋友是很重要的。____________________,Ithinkitimportanttomakemorefriendsabroad.•4.正如图画所示，树被大风刮倒了，而小草依然在那里。_______________________,atreeisknockeddownbythestrongwind,whilethegrassstaysasitis.Firstofall/Tobeginwith...Asthepictureshows•二、表示时间顺序的过渡性词语•firstly,then,later,intheend,finally,atlast,afterthat,afterwards,sincethen,immediately,suddenly,meanwhile•1._________,weallenjoyedthebeautyofnature.(江西卷满分作文）同时，我们都欣赏了大自然的美丽。•2.__________,Icollectedallthebooks,newspapersandotherthingsscatteredintheroomsandputtheminplace.______Iwipedthedustoffallthefurniture.___________,Isweptandmoppedthefloors.（陕西卷书面表达）首先，我把所有的书籍、报纸和其他的散落在屋子里的东西收集起来放好，接着我扫去所有家具上的灰尘，然后我扫地、拖地。MeanwhileFirstlyThenAfterthat•三、表示并列关系的过渡性词语and,or,also,aswellas,neither...nor...,notonly...butalso...,either...or...,not...but...•1.Ithinkwewillhaveagoodtimethere______Iwillsendyourphotostakenthere.(山东卷满分作文）我想我们会玩得很愉快，而且我将会把在那里拍的你的照片寄给你。•2._______，doletmeknowifyouneedmoreinformation.（新课标全国卷II）如果你需要其他的信息，也一定要告诉我。andAlso•3.游泳不但对身体有好处，而且能培养我们的坚强意志。Swimming____________benefitstoourhealth,_____________developsourstrongwell.•4.塑造我们生活的不是我们偶尔做的事情而是我们始终如一坚持的事情。Itis_________________________________________________________shapesourlives.notonlybutalsonotwhatwedoonceinawhilebutwhatwedoconsistentlythat•四、表达转折关系的过渡性词语•but,yet,however,while,otherwise,onthecontrary,ratherthan,insteadof...•1._________,notuntilthematchwasoverdidwerealizethatwebecametheloser.(湖南卷满分作文）•然而，直到比赛结束我们才意识到我们输了。•2.______________,thevolunteersalwaysclaimthattheyaretiredofthelifeonearth,sotheyareeagertoexperiencethefuturelifeontheMars.(广东卷满分作文）•3.Itisthethoughtfulness_______________thepricethatmatters.(2014重庆卷写作二）HoweverOnthecontraryratherthan五、表示因果关系的过渡词语because,as,since,for,thanksto,dueto,asaresultof,so,therefore,asaresult/consequenceforthereasonthat...•1.____________,thereisnoreasonforustolookdownuponordinaryjobs.因此，我们没有理由轻视普通的工作。（广东卷书面表达）•2._______________,childrenbecomesoreliantontheirparentsthattheyhavenoindependentthoughtorcreativeideas.(福建卷书面表达）•结果，孩子变得太依赖于父母，以至于他们没有独立的思想和创造性的想法。ThereforeAsaconsequence•3.Itisatime-consumingandenergy-consuminghobby__________________________________playingcomputergameswillswallowahugeamountofstudents'precioustime.duetothefactthat•六、表达条件关系的过渡性词语•if,unless,incase(of),as/solongas,onconditionthat...1.I____________________youcouldmeethimattheairport.（新课标全国卷I满分作文）如果你能到机场接他，我将不胜感激。•2.________________________ourdreams,wewillbecomeawinnersoonerorlater.(湖南卷满分作文）只要我们坚持梦想，我们迟早会成为赢家。wouldbegratefulifAslongaswestickto七、表达递进关系的过渡性词语What’smore,furthermore,moreover,besides,what’sworse,stillless,tomakemattersworse,worsestill,on(the)onehand...ontheotherhand...,foronething...foranother...•1.Inspiteofthelarge-scaleconstructionofroadsandhighways,thereisstillmuchroomforimprovement,becauseoftheeverincreasingnumberofcarstheseyears.__________________,somedrivers,cyclistsandpedestriansdonotthinkitvitaltoobeytrafficrules.(2015江苏满分作文）•2._____________,Icanearnsomemoneybydoingittohelpmyparents,______________________,Icangainsomeexperiencefromit,whichwilldogoodtomyfuturelife.(山东卷满分作文）What'smoreForonethingandforanother八、表示列举事实的过渡性词语suchas,forexample/instance,take...forexample,thatistosay,inotherwords,asfollows•1.Theyareofdifferentshapes,___________diamonds,butterflies,flowersandbirds.(新课标全国卷II满分作文）•2.Ononehand,Iwillorganizes