专四写作冲刺讲义

1专业英语四级写作冲刺讲义第一部分：专业英语四级写作题型1）旧题：Direction-Write2）新题：Read-Summarize-CommentReadcarefullythefollowingexceptonterm-timeholidayargumentsintheU.K.andthenwriteyourresponseinNOLESSTHAN200words,inwhichyoushould:•summarizethemainmessageoftheexcept,andthen•commentonwhetherparentsshouldtakechildrenoutofschoolforholidayduringtermtimeinordertosavemoney.第二部分：不变1）题材环保、社会经济发展、诚信、文化教育择业、人生哲理（价值观）、时尚爱心和伦理、健康、网络电讯2）核心内容（开篇点题-关联词-核心例证）第三部分：变第一段做题流程第四部分：做题流程1）阅读：首尾、转折、否定2）归纳主旨、看出写作题材3）第一段：模板+主题词不能没有模板（原创的危险性）也不能只背模板句模板和文章指向内容相融合4）第二段：提供相应例证对于主题进行支持5）第三段：呼应第一段2第五部分：怎么套第一段1）第一句话：5-8秒2）第二句话：抓住议论文的特点，用模板句过渡3）总结文章的主题，形成填空TheessaymainlydiscussestheissueofafullyautomaticautomobileinMountainView,California.Byprovidingconcretefacts,completestatisticsandanin-depthanalysis,theauthorstatesthatadriverlesscarcanchangethetraditionalideathathumanwisdomcanbesuperiortothemachines,ascanbeseeninthefollowingparagraphs.54words4）如何填空定名词，不要乱换换动词，换（消）形容词换句型和语序第六部分：定住第一段，才能写好第二段1）如何进行头脑风暴物质金钱责任爱心作息娱乐健康方便快捷沟通安全时尚素质成功违法文化发展环保趋势管制2）背诵顺序先宏观题材再微观题材注意人生哲理和教育择业（和八级考试类似）第七部分：先宏观、再微观1）先宏观3参考范文Theessayabovemainlydiscussestheadvantages(benefits)anddisadvantages(drawbacks)oftourismdevelopment.Byprovidingconcretefacts,completestatisticsandin-depthanalysis,theauthorholdsthattourismindustryisofgreatimportance(indispensable)foranationunderrapideconomicgrowth.Inthisprocess,theimportanceofenvironmentalprotectioncannotbeignored,ascanbeseeninthefollowingparagraphs.There’snodenyingthefactthat(Evidently/Beyonddoubt/Undeniably,)thereexistsomeproblemssuchasairqualitydegradationandwaterpollution.Themostseriousonesevenincludethelossoflocalecologicalbalance(aterroristattack),whiletheminoronesarethecommutinginconveniencetothelocalresidents.Thisstatementdoeshaveagrainoftruthatthefirstglimpse.Butitmustbepointedoutthatthesocialandeconomicreturnoftourismisattractive.Foronething,intheprocessofdevelopingthisindustry,atouristcitycannotonlypoolitsvariousresources,butalsoadjustitsindustrialstructure.Inthisway,infrastructureconstructioncanbegreatlystrengthened,henceprovidingasolidbasistothesustainingurbangrowth.Foranotherthing,tourismgrowthwillprovidenewincentivetothelocaleconomy,becauseitsboomoftenbecomesasourceofgovernmentrevenueaswellasaproviderofjobopportunities.Toconclude,theinfluenceofencouragingtourismindustryisfarreaching,intermsofsocialdevelopmentandeconomicreward（internationalimage）.Tosumup,itisessentialthatacountryprovidemechanismforthedevelopmentoftourismindustry.Tobringitsnegativeinfluenceundercontrol,thegovernmentdepartmentcanmakeplansfortheenvironmentalconservation.Inthisway,atouristcitycanimpresstheoutsideworldwithitsnewimage:aplacewithbeautifulscenes,meanwhile,withahighlevelofcivilization.译文：上面的文章主要讨论的是，旅游业发展的优势（优点）和不利（不足）。通过提供具体的事实、完整的数据和深入的分析，作者坚信旅游业对一个经济快速发展的国家来说是非常重要的（必不可少的）。在这个过程中，环境保护的重要性不容忽视，将在下一段中得到体现。无可否认的事实是（显然/无疑/不能否认地）存在一些问题像空气质量恶化和水污染。4最严重的一个问题甚至包括当地生态失衡（一次恐怖袭击），其次是对当地居民通勤的不便利。这个观点乍一看确实有可取之处。但是必须指出的是旅游业对社会和经济反哺是很具有吸引力的。一方面，旅游业的发展过程中，一个旅游城市不仅仅汇聚各种资源，同时也能调整产业结构。如此，基础设施建设能得到极大的加强，以此给城市持续发展提供一个稳定基础。另一方面，旅游业发展将给当地经济提供新的刺激性鼓励，因为经济繁荣常常会变成大量财政收入和许多的岗位。总之，就社会发展和经济回报（国际形象）鼓励旅游业发展的影响是深远的。总而言之，一个国家为发展旅游业提供机制是非常必要的。为控制其负面影响，政府部门可以指定环境保护的计划。这样的话，一个旅游城市可以以其全新的形象惊艳外面的世界：一个拥有美丽风景的城市，同时，也有高度的文明。补充好词好句：绕着五点走1）建立机制：Intheissueof主题词(misleadinginformationandemptypromisesintheadvertisements),itisessentialthataneffectivefeedbackmechanism(should)besetupatthegovernmentlevel.2）制定计划：Inthisframework,therelevantgovernmentdepartmentsaresupposedtomakeconcreteplanstocontrol…(promote…).3）听专家的话：Meanwhile,advicefromresearchersandexpertscannotbeignored:Afterall,theyaremoreprofessionalandqualified,especiallyintheprocessofpolicymaking(intheestablishmentofqualitystandardsystem).4）媒体的力量：Themainstreammedia,includingTVstationsandwebsites,isalsoanindispensablepart.Theycanlaunchacampaignin(giveawidecoverageto)theissue.Inthisway,thegeneralpubliccanformtheawarenessthat…isthemainstream(thegeneraltrend),andthenplaytheirpartinthismatter.5）结尾1:Inasense,itisnotwhytheissueexistsinoursociety,butwhatshouldbedonetohandleitproperly.6）Havingreadthisessay,somereadersmightthinkthatmyproposalsaresomewhatconservative,nolesstraditional,buttheyareatleastrationalandrealistic.7）Myadvicessoundgeneral,becauseIamnotprofessionalinthisfield,buttheyareatleast5rationalandrealistic.题材1：人生哲理和态度PassageOne:‘Failure’meansthelackofsuccess.Thiswordissynonymoustoallnegativeandheart-breakingmeaningsofwordsintheadjectivelist.Youcanratethiswordfrom1to10dependingonhowintenseyourfailuremeanstoyou.FailureisaslethalashurricaneKatrinaorthegreatAsiantsunamibecauseithasclaimedplentyoflivesaswell.Becauseoffailureinanyoftheareasmentionedabove,manypeoplehavecommittedtoresultingindeathratherthanfaceanotherdayfilledwithshame.However,thesepeoplehavefailedtoacknowledgeintheirshort-livedlivesthatfailureisanessentialingredientbeforesomeonereachessuccessorbeforesomeonecanachievehis/hergoals.ChristinaAguilera’ssongcouldn’thavesaiditbetter:‘Itmakesmethatmuchstronger,makesmeworkalittlebitharder,itmakesmethatmuchwiser,thanksformakingmeafighter.’Asucc