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段落展开Tension例子法理由段=1句主题+x句解释+y句举例•(1)每一个论点都要有理由•(2)每一个理由都要有例子•(3)每一个例子都要有细节1句主题•注意:主题句简洁,尽可能短,否则第二层(解释)就无法拓展。y句例子例子是万证之母y句例子真例子和假例子一样中国例子和外国例子一样名人例子和普通人例子一样一例与多例一样本人例子和别人例子一样•Thenewscienceandtechnologyhasbroughtgreatconveniencetomodernsociety.•Moderntransportmeanssuchaslighttrails,theunderground,automobilesandjetairlines,makestravelingapieceofcake.•Mypersonalexperienceisacaseinpoint.举例法:1.细例子的展开•MygrandparentsliveinasmallvillageinnorthwesternChina.•WhenIwasachild,thelastthingIwantedtodowasgotovisitmygrandparentsfromthecitymyparentsandIwasin.•Wehadtotakeseveralkindsofvehiclesbeforewefinallygotthere.•However,duetothedevelopmentoftransportationsystem,wecannowtakeadirecttrainandthishasreducedthejourneyby8hours.•Thenewscienceandtechnologyhasbroughtgreatconveniencetomodernsociety.•Moderntransportmeanssuchaslighttrails,theunderground,automobilesandjetairlines,makestravelingapieceofcake.•Doyouagreethatpeopleshouldhavehobbiesanddophysicalactivitiesthatareverydifferentfromone’swork?•Ahobbydifferentfromworkcanhelpusrelax.•Afriendofmineisatechnicianinaninternationalcellphonecompany.•Herjobrequiresherlonghourstodealwithclientsandworksinfrontofascreen.•Thejobcanbestressfulattimesandrequiresuseofsignificanttechnicalknowledge.•Inhersparetimeshepracticesdancing.•Dancingisextremelydifferentfromherworkbecauseitfocusesmoreonphysicalactivityandlessonmentaleffort.•Myfriendclaimsthatdancinghasreallyhelpedherrelaxafteralongday’swork.•Shecanshuthermindoff,listentomusicandexpressherselfthroughherbody.•Itisalsoagreatwayforhertokeephealthy.•Dancinghasbeenhelpfulinreducingstressinmyfriend’sworklifeandhasmadehermuchhappieroverall.•Herdecisiontotakeupahobbycompletelydifferentfromherworkhashadapositiveimpactonherlife.•Doyouagreeordisagree:Childrenshouldnotbeallowedtoplaycomputergames.20080607•Doyouagreeordisagree:Childrenshouldnotbeallowedtoplaycomputergames.20080607computergames•魔兽世界:WoW•CS•DOTAcomputergames•魔兽世界:WoW•Blizzard(暴雪公司)•十大职业:德鲁伊、猎人、法师、圣骑士、牧师、潜行者、萨满祭司、术士、战士、死亡骑士。computergames•魔兽世界:WoW•Blizzard(暴雪公司)•十大职业:德鲁伊、猎人、法师、圣骑士、牧师、盗贼、萨满祭司、术士、战士、死亡骑士。•Playingcomputergamescanenhanceourabilityofteamwork.•Almosteveryonehasheardoforevenplayedtheclassicgame--worldofwarcraft,whichisproducedbyBlizzard,themostfamousgameproduceroftheworld.•Inthisgame,playersalonecannotentersomelarge40-playerraidtocompleteahugemission,sotheymustgatherintoagroupwithdifferentcareerssuchaswarriors,priests,andwarlocks.•Onlywithasuitablecareerconfigurationandgoodcommunicationamongplayerscantheyaccomplishthecomplicatedmissions.•Inthissense,thegamedoesofferchildrenaperfectplatformtoimprovetheirabilitiesofcommunications,teamworkandleadership.•Almosteveryonehasheardoforevenplayedtheclassicgame--worldofwarcraft,whichisproducedbyBlizzard,themostfamousgameproduceroftheworld.•Inthisgame,playersalonecannotentersomelarge40-playerraidtocompleteahugemission,sotheymustgatherintoagroupwithdifferentcareerssuchaswarriors,priests,andwarlocks.•Onlywithasuitablecareerconfigurationandgoodcommunicationamongplayerscantheyaccomplishthecomplicatedmissions.•Inthissense,thegamedoesofferchildrenaperfectplatformtoimprovetheirabilitiesofcommunications,teamworkandleadership.•Thenewscienceandtechnologyhasbroughtgreatconveniencetomodernsociety.•Moderntransportmeanssuchaslighttrails,theunderground,automobilesandjetairlines,makestravelingapieceofcake.举例法:2.粗例子的并列•Communicationbecomesmucheasierwithmobilephones,theInternet,andfaxmachines.•Communicationbecomesmucheasierwithmobilephones,theInternet,andfaxmachines.•Communicationbecomesmucheasierwithmobilephones,theInternet,andfaxmachines.•Meanwhile,thehouseholdappliancessuchasairconditioners,washingmachines,microwaveovensandrefrigerators,relieveusfromeverydaychores.•Inaword,withthedevelopmentofnewscienceandtechnology,ourlifebecomesmoreconvenientinmanyaspectsofourlife.•Communicationbecomesmucheasierwithmobilephones,theInternet,andfaxmachines.•Meanwhile,thehouseholdappliancessuchasairconditioners,washingmachines,microwaveovensandrefrigerators,relieveusfromeverydaychores.•Inaword,withthedevelopmentofnewscienceandtechnology,ourlifebecomesmoreconvenientinmanyaspectsofourlife.•Communicationbecomesmucheasierwithmobilephones,theInternet,andfaxmachines.•Meanwhile,thehouseholdappliancessuchasairconditioners,washingmachines,microwaveovensandrefrigerators,relieveusfromeverydaychores.•Inaword,withthedevelopmentofnewscienceandtechnology,ourlifebecomesmoreconvenientinmanyaspectsofourlife.•Communicationbecomesmucheasierwithmobilephones,theInternet,andfaxmachines.•Meanwhile,thehouseholdappliancessuchasairconditioners,washingmachines,microwaveovensandrefrigerators,relieveusfromeverydaychores.•Inaword,withthedevelopmentofnewscienceandtechnology,ourlifebecomesmoreconvenientinmanyaspectsofourlife.•Doyouagreeordisagreewiththefollowingstatement?Youngpeopleintodayarelessdependentontheirparentsthaninthepast.举例法:3.数字例子•Earlyindependencecausesmanyyoungadulttofail.•Arecentsurveycanbackupmypoint.•Thesurvey,conductedbyUSAToday,afterpollingthousandsofcollegegraduates,hasfoundthatasignific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