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ISSUE观点类TheauthordeclaresthatXXX,however,itisoversimplifiesthisissue.XXX(加个论述)Thefinaljudgment,inmyopinion,shouldbebasedonacase-by-caseanalysis.Firstandforemost,toavoidtheriskofsoundingtoosimplistic,mymainpropositionforXXXcanbesummarizedinonesayingthatA.WithA,XXXXXXX.WithoutA,XXXXXXX.Furthermore,IconsentwiththeclaimthatXXXwithoutreservationinthatXXXX.[因果说明]Asaconsequence,AhasbeenregardedasanecessityforXXXX.[说理论证结束，进入例证]Let’sbringoutdiscussionheretoamorepresentandpracticalcontext,itcanbegivenaconcreteexampleXXX.Fromanalyticalpointofview,anotheressentialfactorwhyIadvocateAinvolvesboththerealmofBandtherealmofC.&IntherealmofB,XXX.Ontheotherhand,intherealmofC,XXX.Asacomplextheme,thisstatementneedstobequalifiedintworespectsinordertosubstantiateitsvalidity.&Firstly,XXX.Secondly,XXX.Historyisrepletewithevidencetodemonstratethispoint.AnotablecaseinpointisthatXXX.(举例论证)Meanwhile,arecentsurveythatXXXwillhelpmakingthismoreclear.Nevertheless,weshouldconcedethatdisputeamyriadofmeritsofAmentionedabove.OverextendedAwillbeindeedharmful.Theharmirinducedisbothpalpableandprofound.Fortheindividual,XXX;forthesociety,XXX.Tosuccessfullycurbsuchunfavorableharm,itisimperativeforustotakeseveraleffectivestepsintoconsiderationinduecourse.Atthecommunitylevel,weshouldXXX.Atthepersonallevel,weXXX.Atthefinancinglevel,weXXX.Consequently,suchactionshouldrenderusabrightfutureandprosperity.Fromtheanalysismadeabove,IstronglycommittothenotionthatweneedtocallforabalancebetweenXXXandXXX.WithoutA,XXX.WithoutB,XXX.Inaword,thiscomplexissuedependonXXX.Firstofall,theargumentisbasedonafalseanalogy.Theauthorsimplyassumesthat……..buthedoesnotprovideanyevidencethat…….areindeedcomparable.However,…….Therefore,eventhough……..provedtobeeffectivein….,thereisnoguaranteethatthesamesituationwillundoubtedlyturnoutin…….[类比类]TheauthorunfairlyinsistthatAbearssomerelationtoB.However,theauthorfailstosupportthatthisisthecase,andestablishacause-and-effectrelationshipbetweenAandB,either.Perhaps,otherfactors,suchas…….thatcontributetotheB.Lacingimperativeevidence,itisillegitimatetojustifythatAisresponsibleforB.[无法建立必然关系]Theevidencetheauthorprovidesisinsufficienttosupporttheconclusion.Justbasedonaspecificexamplethat….,itislogicallyunsoundedtomakesuggestionforthewhole…..Unlesstheauthorshowsusthat….isrepresentativeofall…..,theconclusionthat….iscompletelyunwarranted.[单个事例不能说明整体问题]Theauthorfalselymakesan“either-or”conclusionthatsbmustdoAormustdoB,andheassumesthatAandBaretheonlyavailablesolutionstotheproblem.However,itishighlypossiblethatotherfactorsmightalsocontributetothisissue.Forexample,…..Ifso,theauthorcannotdrawhisconclusionsafely.[还有其他原因]Inaddition,theauthorcommitsafallacyofhastygeneralization.Evenif……,itdoesnotundoubtedlyfollowthat…..ItishighlypossiblethatotherfactorsthatmayberesponsibleforB.Forinstance,…..[Besides,…..]Unless….,thereisnoguaranteethat….//WithoutrulingouttheseandotherpossiblefactorsthatmaygiverisetoB,theauthorcannotconfidentlyconcludethat….[结论得出过早，考虑不周全]Theauthorassumesthatjustbecauseoneeventfollowsanother,thesecondeventhasbeencausedbythefirst.However,noevidenceisprovidedtosupportthatthisisthecase.Itishighlypossiblethatotherfactorsmightalsobringaboutthesameresults.Forinstance,…Inaddition,WithoutconsideringandrulingouttheseandotherpossiblefactorsthatmaygiverisetoB,theauthorcannotconfidentlyconcludethat….Theauthorassumesthecharacteristicofagroupapplytoeverymemberofthatgroup.However,thereisnoguaranteethatthisisthecase,northedoestheauthorprovideanyevidencetosubstantiatethisassumption.Itisverylikelythat…..Inabsenceofsuchevidence,theauthorcannotdrawanyfirmconclusion.[这题规律不一定适用于个人]Theauthorassumeswithoutjustificationthatthebackgroundconditionhaveremainedthesameatdifferenttimes.However,theauthorfailstoofferenoughevidencetosubstantiatethisassumption.Itisverylikelythat…,orthat…..Anyofthesescenarios,iftrue,wouldservetounderminetheclaimthat….[过去不能推出现在与将来]Finally,theauthorprovidesnoassurancethatthesurveyonwhichtheargumentdependsonisreliable.Lackinginformationaboutthenumberofrespondents,itisimpossibletoassessthevalidityoftheresult.Forexample,if…weresurveyedbutonly…responded,theconclusionthat….wouldbehighlysuspected.Inaddition,howistherepresentativenessoftherespondents?Weretheyrepresentativeofallthe…?Weretheychosenforthesurveyrandomly?Lackingsuchinformation,theauthorcannotdrawanyfirmconclusionbasedonthestudy.