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写作题目：MyfavoriteChinesefestivalWriteaboutyourfavoriteChinesefestival.What’sthestoryabout?Lookatthepicturesandsaywhatfestivalstheyare.探究1：Brainstorm(头脑风暴)WhatChinesefestivalsdoyouknow?(你知道有哪些中国节日吗？)TheDragonBoatFestivalTheMid-AutumnFestivalTheSpringFestivalTheLanternFestivalLet’smakealist!thepopularfestivalsinChinaWhenisit?SpringFestivalLanternFestivalDragonBoatFestivalMid-AutumnFestivalinJanuaryorFebruaryonthe15thofthefirstlunarmonthonthe5thofthefifthlunarmonthinSeptemberorOctoberWhenwetalkaboutafestival,wecantalkabout…ChinesefestivalbeginningnameofthefestivalWhenisitcelebrated?EveryyearthereisaSpringFestivalinChina.Itiscelebratedonthefifteenthdayofthefirstlunarmonthoftheyear.Itiscelebratedin/on…ItisatraditionalChinesefestivalcalled…Mid-AutumnFestivalisoneofthemostpopularfestivalsinChina.bodyHowdopeoplecelebrateit?thingstoeatthingstododumplingszongzitangyuanmooncakesnoodlescleanthehousesmakezongzihavedragonboatracesadmirethemoonmakelanternsguessriddlesgettogethergivebestwishessharemooncakeswithrelativesWhatdoesitcelebrate?Itcelebratesthebeginningofnewyear.ThisfestivalisinmemoryofQuYuan,oneofthegreatestChinesepoets.endingWhatdoyouthinkofthefestival?Whydoyoulikeitsomuch?Ithinkitisfunandexciting.Iusuallyhaveagreattimeduringthisfestivalbecauseitmakesmerelaxed.IlikethefestivalverymuchbecauseIcangettogetherandsharehappinesswithmyfamilies.NotonlycanIspendmoretimewithmyfamilies,butIgetmuchluckymoney.MyfavoriteChinesefestivalMyfavoriteChinesefestivalistheMid-AutumnFestival.TheMid-AutumnFestivalisoneofthetraditionalChinesefestivals,itisoftencelebratedinSeptemberorOctober.Duringthefestival,familymembersgettogetherandeatmooncakes.Therearemanykindsofdeliciousmooncakes.OntheeveningoftheMid-AutumnFestival,peoplecanenjoythefullmooninthedarksky.IlikeMid-AutumnFestivalbecauseitmakesmehappy.在这么多的中国传统节日当中，你最喜欢哪一个？请你从中选取你最喜爱的一个节日,以”MyfavoriteChinesetraditionalfestival”为题写一篇80词左右的说明文。MyfavoriteChinesefestivalis…Itiscelebratedin/on…Duringthisfestival,people…It’smyfavoritefestivalbecause…Itmakesmefeel…Thefollowingexpressionscanhelpyou:MyfavoriteChinesefestival__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________开声朗读自己的文章，并从结构、人称、时态、字数、拼写、大小写、标点符号等方面进行自我修正。ExercisesTask1自我欣赏与修正同伴互赏欣赏角度：1.写作基本要求:人称,时态；2.要点齐全；3.结构:开头，正文，结尾；4.好词好句。ExercisesTask2①欣赏与修正请交换习作欣赏，用红笔划出对方的亮点词、句,并运用改错符号找出不足，进行适当修改。②评分以满分15分为标准，给同伴的习作打分。③点评由亮点欣赏到不足的修正（篇章结构分析-细节点评)集体赏析，共同进步ExercisesTask3WeareChinese!Weloveourfamily!Weloveourmotherland!SummaryHowtowriteanarticleonyourfavoriteChinesefestival.Rewritethearticles.