大学英语四级作文四级考试中,作文最难拿分的原因:•一、作文是一项综合考察的项目,既考察学生对词汇、语法的掌握情况,也考察句型、篇章的能力;•二、有的考生过分自信,认为只要写足字数,大体写一写,就能得个八、九分;•三、有的考生过于缺乏自信,觉得这个部分太综合了,平时也懒得写,考试时能写到哪儿就写到哪儿,结果造成了“活马当作死马医”,自然是“医死”了。作文最低分的规定•(1)根据学生目前的作文分均值,将作文的最低分定为6分;•(2)作文分为0分,总分若高于60分,最后报分一律按59分不及格处理;若低于60分则报分时一律再减6分;•(3)作文分大于0分,小于6分,则按下面的公式计算成绩:•最后报导分=原计算总分-6分+实得作文分•例1:原计算总分为63分,实得作文分为2分,最后报导分=63-6+2=59分。•例2:原计算总分为80分,实得作文分为4分,最后报导分=80-6+4=78分。•例3:原计算总分为58分,实得作文分为2分,最后报导分=58-6+2=54分。评分标准•1.短文写作部分满分为15分。•2.阅卷标准共分五等:14分、11分、8分、5分、及2分。各有参照卷一至二份。•3.阅卷人员根据阅卷标准,对照参照卷评分,若认为与某一分数(如8分)相似,即定为该分数(即8分);若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数,则可加一分(即9分)或减一分(即7分),但不得加或减半分。•2分:条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。•5分:基本切题,表达思想不够清楚,连贯性差,有较多的严重语言错误。•8分:基本切题,表达思想比较清楚,文章尚连贯,但语言错误较多,其中有少量的严重错误。•11分:切题,表达思想清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。•14分:切题,表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好,基本上无语言错误。•字数不够扣分。(各段已给出的主题句均不得计入)•段落不够扣分。四级考试作文—作文题型•纵览历年的作文试题,我们可以发现论说文占绝大多数,但近年应用文有上升的势头。就话题而言,主要有三大类:社会热门话题、校园话题和日常生活话题。四级考试作文写作常识•一、基本的写作步骤:••在四级考试(包括其它水平考试)的写作中,通常进行以下五个步骤:审题、选材、腹稿(包括提纲和正文)、书写、修改。二、文章的衔接与连贯•在评分标准中,同是否扣题同样重要的是文章的连贯性。往往有的文章扣题倒也扣题了,但还是得不了几分,这其中的原因恐怕与连贯性有很大的关系。这里所说的连贯有两两层含义。一是指文章在内容上是连贯、统一的,文章中所有的句子都是为全文的中心服务的。就各段而言,其中的每一句话都要紧紧围绕着该段的主题句进行,不能说与主题句无关的东西。有人也将其称为统一性。不同类型作文的写作方法共同原则:•1.中心第一;2.注意分段;3.注意比例.•表示列举的方法•Firstofall/Aboveall,secondly,moreover…•Inthefirstplace,inthesecondplace,furthermore/what’smore•Tobegin(start)with,secondly,inaddition•Foronething,foranotherthing,forstillanotherthing表示举例说明的过渡语•Forexample,forinstance,foronething,toillustrate,asanillustration,acaseinpoint,•Let’stake…asanexample.Take…forexample.•…isatypicalexampleof…•…isatypical/propercaseinpoint.表示递进关系的过渡语•Inaddition,furthermore,moreover,besides,also,what’smore•Notonly,butalso,similarly,•Another…is•…isanother…•…isalsoafactor.表示对比对照的过渡语•Incontrast,bycontrast,ontheotherhand,incomparison,onthecontrary,unlike,like,contraryto,whereas,while,conversely,•…differ/varygreatly/vastlyfrom•Differentfrom表示因果关系的过渡语•Becauseof,onaccountof,dueto,owingto,thanksto,for,because,since,as,forthisreason•Therefore,so,asaresult,consequently,inconsequence,accordingly,hence,thus•Thereasonswhy/for…are/liein…•…resultsin…•…resultfrom…表示结论的过渡语•Tosumup,toconclude,tosummarize•Insum,insummary,inconclusion,inall,inaword,inshort,inbrief•So,therefore,thus•Wecancometotheconclusionthat•Aconclusioncanbereachedthat表示转折的过渡语•Though,although,however,nevertheless,nonetheless,eventhough•Let’slookattheothersideofthecoin.•Aseverythinghastwosides,weshouldnotneglecttheothersideofthecoin.•Justastherearetwosidesofacoin,.归纳总结概括全文,得出结论•Allinall•Inaword•Asforme•Inmyopinion•Personally,Ithink/believe•AsfarasIamconcerned作文模板(AorB)模板1:•1Differentpeoplehavedifferentviewson事物/问题。2Someprefer一种观点/选择。3Otherstendto另一种观点/选择。4Astome,Iagreetothefirst/secondopinion.•5Ofcourse,“我”不赞同的观点/选择的合理性。6Forexample,支持其合理性的例子。7But,我不赞同观点/选择的不足。8Thefollowingreasonscanaccountformypreference.•9Oneofthemainreasonsisthat我的观点/选择一。10Agoodexampletoillustrateisthat支持一的例子。11Inaddition,我的观点/选择二。12Toconclude,重申观点/选择。模板二•1Thereisnocompleteagreementamongpeopleconsider事物或问题。2Somepeopleconsiderthat一种观点或选择。3However,othersthinkthat另一种的观点或选择。•4Somepeoplemaysaythat观点一理由。5Theyholdthisopinionbecause深入的阐述观点一的理由。6However,othersbelievethat观点二或选择二的理由。7Theyarguethat深入阐述观点二的理由。•8Personally,Iprefertheformer/latteropinion/choice.9Firstly,我的理由一。10Secondly,我的理由二。11.Mostimportantofall,我的理由三。12.Takingtheabove-mentionedintoconsideration,I/wemayreasonablyconcludethat重申观点/选择。模板三•1Whenaskedabout/Whenitcomesto事物/问题,differentpeoplewillofferdifferentopinions.2Somepeopletakeitforgrantedthat观点一。3Intheiropinion,观点一的理由。4Besides,观点一的理由二。•5However,otherholdthat观点二/选择二。6Theymaintainthat观点二/选择二的理由一。7And观点二/选择二的理由二。•8Weighingupthesetwoarguments,Iamforthefirstopinion/choice.9Foronething/Ontheonehand,我的理由一。10.Foranother/Ontheotherhand,我的理由二。11Forinstance,举例说明理由二。12Therefore,asstatedabove,重申理由。常用句式•1.Thereisageneraldiscussionnowadaysontheproblemof…Someargue/holdthat…,butothersetforthatotallydifferentargumentabouttheissue.•2.Inreactiontothephenomenon/inanswertotheproblem/inresponsetotheon-goingsocialchange,somepeoplebelieve…,intheirminds,…Othersmaintain…,intheireyes,…•3.Personally,Isidewiththeformer/latteropinion.•4Iamoftheopinionthatpriorityshouldbegivento…•5Inconclusion,itisclearthat…•6Thereisastrikingcontrastbetween…•7Itmaybebrieflysummedupasfollows.8.Fromwhathasbeenmentionedabove,wecancometotheconclusionthat…Yourassignmenttoday!•Directions:forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicCollegeLecturesorDiscussions?Youshouldwriteatleast120words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutlinebelow:•1有些学生认为大学里的教学方式应该是用讲授式•2另一些学生认为应该用讨论式的教学方式•3我的看法现象解释型•1总体现象hasbroughtintofocus./总体现象,whichhasrousedgreatconcern./Recently,theproblemof现象hasbecomethefocusofthepublicconcern.2Nowadays,现象表现或变化.3Inaddition,进一步阐述现象.4Thereasonsforthisphenomenonarevaried./Therearemanydifferentfactorsdeciding该现象或其相关情况./该现象hasagreateffecton影响的主要对象。•5Amongallthesereasons/factors/effects,原因一playsacriticalrole.6具体阐述原因一.7.Moreover,原因二.8Besides,原因三。9Therefore,最终结果或影响。•10.AsfarasIamconcerned/Astome,我的观点/态度/做法.11Furthermore/Besides,进一步说明.12Inaw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