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Unit2TRAVELLINGAROUND-----ReadingforWritingⅠ.回顾原文1.我听说它是一个令人惊叹的景点，我迫不及待的想去。2.对于我来说，兵马俑的故事几乎令人难以置信。3.我们还计划去西安的其他几个地方。I'veheardthatitisanamazingsight,andIcan'twaittogo.Tome,thestoryoftheTerracottaArmyisalmostunbelievable.We'realsoplanningtovisitseveralotherplacesinXi'an.4.我爸爸和我都期待去陕西历史博物馆，因为……MydadandIarebothlookingforwardtogoingtotheShaanxiHistoryMuseum,because……5.我们将坐火车，十月假期开始前一天离开。We'retakingthetrain,leavingthedaybeforetheOctoberholidaybegins.Ⅱ.Lead-inBrainstorming:（1）Doyouliketravelling?Why?（2）Whichcitydoyouwanttovisiteagerly?Why?（1）Doyouliketravelling?Why?thebenefitsoftravellingdosomeexerciseandrelaxenrichmyknowledgebroadenmyhorizonsmakemorefriendseatmuchdeliciousfoodandsoon......showgreatperseverance毅力broadenyourhoizonsenrichyourknowledgeshowgreatperseverance毅力（2）Whichcitydoyouwanttovisiteagerly?Why?Idesiretogoto......Ihavebeenalwayslongingfor......I'meagertogoto......Idreamaboutgoingto......云台山红石峡BlueMoonValley蓝月谷呼伦贝尔大草原Now,youhaveachancetovisitabigcity----------J--U--Y--E.Ⅲ.写作任务AtthelastofRichard’semail,hesaid“……Doyouhaveanyplansforthecomingholiday?Hopetohearfromyousoon.”1.【写作思路】（一审、二定、三明确、四分段）（1）一审：确定写作体裁和主题体裁:应用文----告知信主题：给Richard回信，告诉他自己的假期旅行计划及安排。（2）二定：确定时态和人称（与体裁和主题息息相关）时态：一般将来时（对于即将到来的旅行的计划）一般现在时（一般描述）（3）三明确：明确写作要点要点：①对Richard的来信做出评价和反馈②具体的旅游计划（交通方式、旅游景点、旅行的目的和意义）③旅游的心得体会（4）四分段（与写作要点息息相关）结合写作要点，整体分为三个段落，其中第二段为主体部分，详细叙述。1.【写作典例】假定你是小李，你要给你的朋友Richard写一封回信。告诉他你十月假期的安排。你要和爸爸妈妈一起乘高铁去巨野旅游，并告诉他你的旅游计划和目的。借此机会，向他介绍一下巨野的著名景点和人文历史。注意：（1）词数100左右；（2）巨野景点：永丰塔(YongfengTower）；巨野县博物馆(JuyeCountyMuseum);金山旅游区（JinshanTouristArea);洙水河公园（ZhuShuiHePark)（3）巨野名吃：罐子汤（potlampsoup）；蒸菜（steamedvegetables）；（4）高铁（high-speedrailway）；2.【写作提示】（1）谢谢你写信告诉我你在西安的旅行,这真是特别令人惊奇的旅行。________________________________（2）我写信是为了告诉你我的假期旅游计划。__________________________________ThankyouforyourletteraboutyourtripinXi'an,whichisamazing.Iamwritingtotellyoumytravelplan.（3）我们将乘高铁去巨野去参观永丰塔，它是巨野令人惊叹的景点。我们迫不及待要出发（amazing）Wearetakingthehigh-speedrailwaytoJuyetovisitYongfengTower,whichisanamazingsight,andwecan'twaittogo.（4）我们也计划参观巨野其他的地方。我爸爸和我都期待去巨野博物馆，因为里面有很多文物。(treasure)(5)我们还打算去金山旅游区和洙水河公园。WearealsoplanningtovisitotherplacesinJuye.MydadandIarelookingforwardtogoingtoJuyeCountyMuseum,becausetherearemanytreasuresinside.WearealsogoingtoJinshanTouristAreaandZhuShuiHePark.（6）此外，我们还可以吃很多美味的食物，比如罐子汤和蒸菜。________________________________（7）依我看，旅游不仅可以让我增长知识，而且还可以拓宽视野。(enrichmyknowledge;broadenmyhorizons)___________________________________Besides,wecanenjoydeliciousfoodthere,suchaspotlampsoupandsteamedvegetables.Inmyopinion,travellingcannotonlyenrichmyknowledge,butalsobroadenmyhorizons.Ⅳ.连贯成文DearRichard,ThankyouforyourletteraboutyourtripinXi'an,whichisamazing.Iamwritingtotellyoumytravelplanovertheholiday.Wearetakingthehigh-speedrailwaytoJuyetovisitYongfengTower,whichisanamazingsight,andwecan'twaittogo.WearealsoplanningtovisitotherplacesinJuye.MydadandIarelookingforwardtogoingtoJuyeCountyMuseum,becausetherearemanytreasuresinside.WearealsogoingtoJinshanTouristAreaandZhuShuiHePark.Besides,Wecaneatdeliciousfoodthere,suchaspotlampsoupandsteamedvegetables.Inmyopinion,travellingcannotonlyincreasemyknowledge,butalsobroadenmyhorizons.Inaword,JuYeisworthvisiting.I'mlookingforwardtoyourcoming.Yours,XiaoLiThankyou!