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Sophia读后续写微技能指导之1①Hedecidedtovisitthefamily.②Buttheshabbycottagewasnowheretobefound.Heonlyfoundasplendidhouse.③Hethoughtthefamilymightdie.TIP1“小”心思——丰满人物内心①Drivenbyasenseofregret,hedecidedtovisitthefamily.②Tohisgreatsurprise,theshabbycottagewasnowheretobefound.Heonlyfoundasplendidhouse.③Uponthinkingthefamilymighthavestarvedtodeath,hesighedwithguilt.Vivid&AccurateWhichparagraphisbetter?2Paragraph1Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.Atfirst,Poppybarkedathim.Dadgentlycaressedthelittledogandsaid,“Don’tworry,youwillgetusedtothenewfamily.”MomapproachedPoppyandsaidinalowvoice,“Poppy,heisyournewfriend.Behappy.”Poppybecamequietasifhesaidyes.Dadsaidinahumoroustone,“Yousee,Poppyunderstandswhatwesay!”2020年浙江高考英语试卷---读后续写（第一段）Paragraph1Dadopenedtheboxandasweetlittledogappeared.Atfirst,Poppybarkedathim.Dadgentlycaressedthelittledog，comforting“Don’tworry,youwillgetusedtothenewfamily.”MomapproachedPoppyandwhispered,“Poppy,heisyournewfriend.Behappy.”Poppybecamequietasifheagreed.Dadjoked,“Yousee,Poppyunderstandswhatwesay!”Vivid&AccurateWhichparagraphisbetter?TIP2:“小”词汇——增加表达效果3Brainstormingtellwhispermurmurspeaktalkcryoutshoutrespondreplyexplainscreamroarannouncedeclareyell…calloutsay4B1add，disagree，command，request，persuade，congratulate，beg，sentenceB2debate，admit,appreciate,bargain，analyse,threaten,respond,chargeB3apologize,announce,remind,lieconsult,sigh,narrate,bet,permit,scream,react,chat,confirmB4argue,inspire,support,regret,underline,comment,summarize,translate,conclude,enquire,blameinstruct,B5clarify,quarrel,assess,inform,accuse,deny,demand,approveB6appeal,convey,subscribe,oppose,state,advocate,guarantee,disagreeB7dictate,congratulate,state,yell,pause,urge,lecture,recommend,comfort,acknowledge,contradict,barkB8mourn,object,claim,hesitate,remark,condemn,compromise,howl5Different“says”1.tospeakveryquietlyorinalowvoice2.tomakealong,lowsoundbecauseyouareinpain3.togiveasuddensharploudvoice4.tospeakwithdifficulty,repeatingsoundsorwords5.totalkaboutother'sprivatelives6.totakeaquickdeepbreathwithyourmouthopen,especiallybecauseyouaresurprisedorinpain7.togivemoraloremotionalstrengthtosb8.tosaysorryfordoingsthwrong9.toblamethatsb/sthisresponsibleforsthbad10.toordersbtodosthscreamwhispergroangaspstammergossipcriticizecomfortcommandapologize呻吟口吃，结巴喘气，倒抽气671.Heapproachedmeand__________tomyearthathewasabitafraid.2.She__________herselfwiththethoughtthattherewasstillabeamofhope.3.“Help！Help！”Seeingtheblood,thegirl___________outinterror.4.“I’msosorryI’mlate,”theaunt___________toFranklin.5.Peopleare_________aboutthefilmstar'ssuddendivorce.6.“Don'tmove！Handsup！”Thepolicerushedinand_____________.7.Theon-lookers__________thedriverseverelyforhiscarelessdriving.8.Theoldladylayonthefloor_________painfully.9.“A”he___________,feelingveryconfident.10.Theathlete_________beforestartingtorunatthebeginningline.whisperedcomfortedscreamedapologizedgossipingcommandedcriticizedhowlingblurtedoutmurmured11Thegovernment_________astateofemergency.12“Getoutofmyhouse!”Theofficer______.13Askedwhyhewaslate,Alex________thathiscarhadbrokendown.14.Drivenbyasenseofsympathy,Pappy__________(saidtothegirlloudly),“Howmuchhaveyougottospend,Missy?”15.Tearsfillinghereyes,she_____________(saidcheerfully)“Hello,Dad.”declaredroaredexplainedcalledoutcriedout8see,watch,observe,peep,lookaround,lookback,stareat,glareat,glanceat,catchsightof,losesightof,etcwalk,run,wander,dash,strollaround,pacebackandforth,stepinto,makeone’swayto,danceout,etc各种看和各种走9Withagianttearinhereye,thelittlegirllookedupathim.Sheforcedasmile,___________(saying)“Thankyou”and________________(walkedtowards)thedoor.Pappythoughtofhisdaughter.Drivenbyasenseofsympathy,Pappy____________(saidtothegirlloudly),“Howmuchhaveyougottospend?”Hearingthis,thelittlegirlcountedmoneyinherpurse---twodollars.Afterthinkingforafewseconds,Pappy__________(said),“TodayisChristmasDayandthisisyourluckyday.Thebellcoststwodollars.”Thechild__________withgreatjoy,holdingthespecialbellinherhand.LaterthateveningwhenPappywasclosinguptheshop,heheardafamiliarringing.Hecouldn’tbelievehisears.Thegirlstoodinthedoorway,ringingthebellhappily.Feelingpuzzled,Pappygotclosetoherandasked,“Haveyouchangedyourmind,Miss?”“No.MyMommasaysthepresentisforyou.”explainedthechild.BeforePappyhadtimetosayanotherword,ayoungwoman_________(walked)in.Tearsfillinghereyes,she____________(said)cheerfully,“Hello,Dad.”makeherwaytodancedoutsteppedmurmuringcalledoutannouncedcriedout10举例：Iwasscared1Afeelingoffearslowly__________(蔓延)onme.2表示某种情感侵袭/涌入Afloodofterror__________________me.Asenseoffright_____________________meAwaveofhorror________insideme.creptupovertook/overwhelmedwashedover/floodedoverwelledup11举例：Thathousewasonfire.1.Thehousewas________（沉浸在）inanimmensestreamofflame.2.Theroaringfire________（吞没）thewholehouse.3.Thehousewas_______（点亮）bytheviolentfire.4.Theferociousfireripped(撕破，裂开)throughthehouse,reducingitto________(灰烬).bathedswallowedlitupashesTip3：“小”细节——丰富故事情节12Anoldmanwasknockeddownbyacarwhichfledaway.用下面的动词中的至少3个，编一个60词的小故事criticizecomfortapologizecommandgasps