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抗击疫情，相互协作，战胜疫情写作假设你是红星中学高二学生李华。目前，随着全球新型冠状病毒肺炎确诊病例数量不断攀升，你的英国笔友Jim发来邮件向你询问在家抗疫和学习的注意事项，请你给他回信，内容包括：1.表达关心；2.介绍经验；3.分享感受。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。提示词：新型冠状病毒肺炎thenovelcoronaviruspneumonia或COVID-19疾病的大流行pandemicDearJim,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua审题文体：应用文类时态：一般现在时人称：第一、二人称小贴士：“抗击疫情、共克时艰”对应2017年新课标中“人与社会”主题语境下“社会热点问题”这一内容要求，旨在帮助学生树立“人类命运共同体”这一意识，鼓励学生以健康的生活方式、积极的生活态度应对艰难时刻，并能急人所急、想人所想，充分彰显“守望相助、共克时艰”的胸怀和气魄。分析：行文时需做到要点齐全、语篇连贯、交际得体。要点一需侧重交际，语气诚恳关切。要点二要求对应题干要求，包含在家抗疫和学习两方面，内容维度丰富、具有可操作性。最后可表达对抗疫英雄的感激和对抗疫胜利的坚定信心。写作素材I.表达关心1.你近况如何？1)Howiseverythinggoing?2)Howareyoudoingrecently?2.随着新冠肺炎确诊病例人数不断攀升，我很担心你。1)WiththeincreasingnumberofconfirmedcasesofCOVID-19,I’mgreatly/genuinely/deeplyconcernedaboutyou.2)AsthenumberofCOVID-19casesworldwideisgoingup/increasing/rising,theentireworldisworkinghardtofight/battle/combatthepandemic.Isincerely/genuinelyhopeeverythingisfinewithyou.II.介绍经验1.我很愿意向你分享经验，希望它能帮助到你。1)I’mmorethanwillingtohelp,soI’mwritingtoofferyousometipsonhowtoprotectyourselfandtakeonlinecourses.2)Tohelpyoudealwith/getthrough/grapplewiththishardtime,I’dliketoofferyousomeadvice/suggestionsonself-protectionandonlinelearning.2.关于自我防护的建议1)Concerning/Regardingself-protection,thebestpreventativepracticeistostayathomeandtoavoidunnecessarysocialgatherings.2)Itishighlysuggested/recommended(that)you(should)stayathome,keepabalanceddietanddoexerciseregularly.3)Youshouldwearamaskwhenyougooutandwashyourhandsthoroughlywithwaterandsoapfornolessthan20secondsafteryoureturn.4)Tostaypositive/optimistic,it’sagreatideatotakeupsomenewhobbies.5)Sticktoahealthydailyroutineandavoidstayinguplate,forgoodsleepimprovesyourimmunefunctionandhelpsfightthevirus.3.关于在家学习的建议1)Intermsof/Whenitcomestoonlinelearning,Isuggestthatyoumakeadetailedscheduletohelpyoudealwith/tackleprocrastination(拖延症).2)Asfarasstudyingathomeisconcerned,itisstronglyadvisedthatyoudrawupaplan,detailingthetasksyouneedtodoandthetimerequired.3)Whenstudyingathome,youmayfinditchallengingtoconcentrate.Tohandle/addressthisproblem,youcansetasideyourphonewhilestudying.4)Whenlearningonline,youmayfindyourselfeasilydistractedfromtimetotime.Trysettingalimitedtimeforataskandrewardingyourselfonceit’sdone,whichcanhelpyoustayfocused.III.分享感受1.我感激和钦佩所有抗疫英雄们无私的奉献。1)Iamdeeplygratefultotheunsungheroesonthefrontline/attheforefront.2)Wordsfailtoexpressmygratitudeandrespecttotheirselflessdedication.3)Icanneverfullyexpressmythankfulnessfortheirselflesscontributions.4)Myappreciationandadmirationfortheheroes’selflessdevotionarebeyonddescription.2.山川异域，风月同天。携手同心，共克时艰。1)Bysupportingeachotherandfightingtogether,wewillsurelywinthisbattle.2)Landsapart,skyshared.Weneedtostrivetogether/makeconcertedefforts/joinhands/unitetocombatthedisease.3)Iamfirmly/fully/totallyconvincedthatwe’llgetthroughthistogether.4)Iholdastrongbeliefthatwecangetthroughthishard/toughtime.IV.结语1.Ifyouneedanyhelp,feelfreetocontactme.I’llsparenoefforts/sparenopainstohelpyou.Pleasetakegoodcareofyourself.2.IfthereisanythingIcando,don’thesitatetoletmeknow.I’lldowhateverIcan.3.Let’ssticktogetherthroughthickandthin.4.Takecare!I’mlookingforwardtomeetingyouafterthepandemicends.重点表达一览表beconcernedabout关心、挂念fight/combatthepandemic抗击疫情offersbsometipson…向某人提供关于……的建议concerning/regarding/intermsof涉及、谈及……addfunandvitalityto…为……增添乐趣和活力comeinhandy派上用场begratefultosbforsth=bethankfulforsth对……心怀感激onthefrontline/attheforefront在前线wordsfailtoexpress…=sthbebeyonddescription无法用言语表达或描述sparenoefforts/painstodo竭尽全力、不遗余力去做sticktogetherthroughthickandthin共克时艰小试牛刀1.当新型冠状病毒威胁人民的生命安全时，中国政府采取了迅速有效的措施来控制疫情。_______________________________________________________2.在应对疫情时，是无私的医护人员们冒着生命危险在救治被感染者。_______________________________________________________3.你应该经常洗手，尤其是在用手触摸眼睛、嘴巴和鼻子之前。_______________________________________________________4.在抗击疫情的战场上，我们每个人都是勇敢的战士，努力做出自己的贡献。_______________________________________________________5.为了抗击全球大流行，我们比以往任何时候都更需要团结一致。_______________________________________________________写作范文DearJim,Howiseverythinggoing?1.______________________.(望一切安好)Inyourpreviousemail,youaskedforsomeadviceonself-protectionandonlinelearningathome.2.______________________.(我很乐意帮忙，现写信向你提供一些建议。)Forself-protection,itisstronglyrecommendedthatyoustayathome,keepabalanceddietanddoexerciseregularly.Toaddsomefuntoyourlife,3._________________________（你可以培养新的兴趣爱好。）Asforonlinelearning,youmayfindyourselfdistracte