应用文写作(五)letter-of-application

一、写作架构要规范应用文写作常见8大文体(五)——申请信申请信有很多种，比如求职申请、加入某组织或活动的申请、报考申请、留学申请等。由于此类题目常有较多的文字提示，写作时除应注意格式上的要求外，也应注意审题全面，不能遗漏要点。具体写作结构为：二、靓点句式背一番(一)开头常用语1．Ilearnedonyourwebsitethat...我从你们的网站上得知……2．I’mwritingtoapplyforthejob/post/positionas...我写信申请……的工作/职位。3．Iamwritingthislettertorecommendmyselfasaqualifiedcandidatefor...我写信推荐自己为……的合格人选。(二)主体部分常用语1．Asanoutgoing...Igetalongwellwithmyclassmates.作为一名外向的……我和同学们相处得很好。2．Foronething,Icanhelp...Foranother,IcanimprovemyEnglish,makemorefriends,andenrichmylife.一方面，我能帮助……另一方面，我能提高我的英语水平，结交更多的朋友，丰富我的生活。3．IamconfidentthatI’msuitablefor.../I’mqualifiedtodo.../I’mequalto(doing)sth.我确信，我适合……/我有做……的资格/我能胜任(做)……(三)结尾常用语1．Iwouldgreatlyappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyapplicationintoconsideration.如果您能考虑我的申请，我将不胜感激。2．Shouldyouoffermeaninterview,Iwouldbemostgrateful.Lookforwardtoyourreplysoon.如果您能给我提供面试机会，我将非常感激。期待您的早日答复。三、润色完善很关键(2018·银川一中二模)假定你是新华中学的学生李华，学校将要选拔一些学生作为交换生到英国进行为期两个月的学习，你非常想得到这次交流学习的机会。请你根据以下提示给校长写一封申请信。要点如下：1．父母优势；2．个人优势；3．表达愿望。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearMr.President，Yourssincerely，LiHua开头：自我介绍及写信目的(申请到英国学习)主体：优势(父母支持、个人的英语水平等)结尾：表达期盼回复的心情定要点定结构一般现在时为主定时态第一人称为主定人称申请信定体裁(一)准审题、准表达保基本分[中档作文]DearMr.President，I’mLiHua❶.I’mahighschoolstudentofXinhuaMiddleSchool❷.I’mwritingtoapplytostudyintheUKasanexchangestudentfortwomonths.Undoubtedly❸，I’meagertoapplyforthechancetostudyabroad.Tobeginwith,myparentsareinsupportofme.❹Studyingabroadcanbroadenmyview.Besides,theycanaffordalltheexpensesthere.❺IlearnEnglishwell❻anditenablesmetohavenodifficultycommunicatingwithstudentsfromothercountries❼.❽Iamoutgoingandabletogetonwellwithothers.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucanconsider❾myapplication.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yourssincerely，LiHua(二)巧润色、大升级创高分(请根据括号内要求升级上面的中档作文)DearMr.President，(1)(合并升级❶❷句为名词短语作同位语)．I’mwritingtoapplytostudyintheUKasanexchangestudentfortwomonths.(2)(升级词汇❸为同位语从句)I’meagertoapplyforthechancetostudyabroad.I’mLiHua,ahighschoolstudentofXinhuaMiddleSchoolThereisnodoubtthatTobeginwith,myparentsareinsupportofme.(3)(❹前加过渡词汇)studyingabroadcanbroadenmyview.Besides,theycanaffordalltheexpensesthere.(4)(❺前加过渡词汇),I(5)(词汇升级❻),(6)(升级句❼为非谓语动词作状语)．(7)(❽前加过渡词汇),Iamoutgoingandabletogetonwellwithothers.Iwouldbegratefulifyoucan(8)myapplication(词汇升级❾)．Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yourssincerely，LiHuaAsfarastheyareconcernedForonethinghaveagoodcommandofEnglishenablingmetohavenodifficultycommunicatingwithstudentsfromothercountriesForanothertakeintoaccount/consideration四、“一题两用”错不犯下文是根据上面的题目学生完成的一篇习作，文中共有10处语言错误，请改正。DearMr.President，I’mmorethandelighttolearnthatsomeofusstudentswillhaveanopportunitytostudyintheUKasexchangestudentfortwomonths.Iamdesperateforit,butI’mwritingtoapplyforthechancetostudyabroad.Inthefirstplace,myparentsstrongsupportmefortheyholdthefirmbeliefthatstudyingabroadcanbroadentheirhorizonsandtheycanaffordalltheexpensesthere.Secondly,haveagoodcommandofEnglishenablemetocommunicatewithothersfreely.Iamoutgoingandhelpful，whichmakeseasyformetoadjustforthenewsurroundingsaswellasfitinwellwithforeigners.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldgiveconsiderationtomyapplication.Lookingforwardtoyouapproval.Yourssincerely，LiHua答案：第一句：delight→delighted;student→students第二句：but→so第三句：strong→strongly;their→my第四句：have→having;enable→enables第五句：makes后加it;第二个for→to第七句：you→your