2018-2019学年英语人教版选修63.5Section-Ⅴ-Writing—写一封关于健康生活的

写作探究能力提升区[文体感知]建议信是向收信人就某事提出写信人的建议和忠告。建议信要写出写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌和缓。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力。[增分佳句](一)开头常用句式——引出话题①Iamsorryyouhavehadsomuchtroublein...②Youhaveaskedformyadviceon...andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.(二)主体常用句式——提出建议①Inmyopinion,itwouldbewiseforyoutotakethefollowingaction.②Firstofall,...;Meanwhile，...;Inaddition，...③It'simportantforyouto...④Inthefirstplace,Iwouldalsorecommendabalanceddiet.⑤Whynotdrinkalittle,exercise,stopsmokingandeatmorefruit?(三)结尾常用句式——提出期望①Cheerup!Yourtroubleswillsoonbeover.②Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.③Don'tloseheart,whateverhappens.④Iwillbeverygladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.⑤PleaseletmeknowifIcanhelpfurther.[写作规范]题目要求你的网友Mike由于长期上网，出现了视力下降、病态肥胖等多种健康问题，并染上了一些疾病，住进了医院。现在请你以李明的身份给他写一封信，希望他早日康复，并给他提一些合理的建议。注意：1．语言通顺、连贯；2．词数100个左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：病态肥胖——obesity第一步审题谋篇体裁建议信话题健康生活时态一般现在时为主人称第一、二人称为主结构首段：表明写作意图，引出问题中段：具体分析问题，给出建议尾段：总结归纳建议，表达愿望第二步词汇推敲1．康复恢复recover2．接受以下建议take_the_following_advice3．锻炼work_out4．保持健康keep_healthy5．上网surf_the_Internet6．很快好起来be_well_soon第三步句式锻造①我们应该锻炼来保持健康。Weshouldworkoutto_keep_healthy.②没有什么比健康更重要。Nothingismore_important_thanhealth.③只有当我们健康的时候，我们才能学得更好。Wecanstudybetteronly_whenwearehealthy.④接受医生的建议，不要担心。Follow_the_doctor's_adviceanddon'tworry.⑤你很快就会好起来的。Youwillbe_well_soon.第四步句式升级⑥用because合并①②句We_should_work_out_to_keep_healthy,_because_nothing_is_more_important_than_health.⑦把第③句改为倒装句。Only_when_we_are_healthy_can_we_study_better.⑧用and合并④⑤句。Follow_the_doctor's_advice_and_don't_worry,_and_you_will_be_well_soon.第五步妙笔成篇DearMike，I'mverysorrytohearthat__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours，LiMing范文：DearMike，I'mverysorrytohearthatyouareinhospitalwitheyesightdecreasingandobesityandsomeotherdiseases.Ihopethatyouwillrecoversoon.Inmypersonalopinion,itwouldbewiseofyoutotakethefollowingadvice.YousaidthatyourillnesswascausedbysurfingtheInternettoomuch.IthinkthatweshouldspendlesstimeontheInternetfromnowon.Instead,weshouldworkouttokeephealthy,becausenothingismoreimportantthanhealth.Onlywhenwearehealthycanwestudybetter.Andmyteachersoftentellusthatit'sbadforustosurftheInterneteveryday.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful.Therefore,followthedoctor'sadviceanddon'tworry,andyouwillbewellsoon.Bestwishes!Yours，LiMing[写作能力训练]假如你是李华，是英国某高中的交换生，你发现最近你的同学John每天都熬夜到很晚，这严重地影响了他的学习和生活，请根据下列要点用英语给他写一封100词左右的信。主要内容如下：1．指出他的错误；2．他的行为可能导致的后果；3．就他的问题给出建议。要求：1．词数：100左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearJohn，Ireallycareaboutyouandworrythat________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ihopeyoucangetoutofyourbadhabit.Yours，LiHuaOnepossibleversion：Dear_John，I_really_care_about_you_and_worry_thatyoustayuplateeverynight,whichcanbebadforyourhealth.Seriousconsequencescausedbystayinguplatearetirednessandlackofenergy.Withoutenoughrest,youwillsufferfromheadachesthenextday.Youwillfindithardtofocusonyourstudy.What'smore,long­termstayinguplatewillevenbringdamagetoyourmemory.Isuggestthatyoushouldpayspecialattentiontothesebadeffects,andtrynottostayuplateatnight.Ibelieveyoucanbreakthehabitbygoingtobedearlierandyouwillbebackonanormalschedulebeforelong.I_hope_you_can_get_out_of_your_bad_habit.Yours，Li_Hua