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2020新高考山东卷英语短文续写TheMeredithfamilylivedinasmallcommunity.Astheeconomywasindecline,somepeopleinthetownhadlosttheirjobs.Manyoftheirfamilieswerestrugglingtomakeendsmeet.Peopleweretryingtohelpeachothermeetthechallenges.Mrs.Meredithwasamostkindandthoughtfulwoman.Shespentagreatdealoftimevisitingthepoor.Sheknewtheyhadproblems,andtheyneededallkindsofhelp.Whenshehadtime,shewouldbringfoodandmedicinetothem.Onemorningshetoldherchildrenaboutafamilyshehadvisitedthedaybefore.Therewasamansickinbed,hiswife,whotookcareofhimandcouldnotgoouttowork,andtheirlittleboy.Thelittleboy—hisnamewasBernard—hadinterestedherverymuch.“Iwishyoucouldseehim,”shesaidtoherownchildren,John,Harry,andClara.“Heissuchahelptohismother.Hewantsverymuchtoearnsomemoney,butIdon’tseewhathecando.”Aftertheirmotherlefttheroom,thechildrensatthinkingaboutBernard.“Iwishwecouldhelphimtoearnmoney,”saidClara.“Hisfamilyissufferingsomuch.”“SodoI,”saidHarry.“Wereallyshoulddosomethingtoassistthem.”Forsomemoments,Johnsaidnothing,but,suddenly,hesprangtohisfeetandcried,“Ihaveagreatidea!Ihaveasolutionthatwecanallhelpaccomplish(完成).”Theotherchildrenalsojumpedupallattention.WhenJohnhadanidea,itwassuretobeagoodone.I’lltellyouwhatwecando,”saidJohn.“YouknowthatbigboxofcomUncleJohnsentus?Well,wecanmakepopcorn(爆米花),andputitintopaperbags,andBernardcantakeitaroundtothehousesandsellit.”WhenMrs.MeredithheardofJohn’sidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.Witheverythingready.Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.possibleversion(1)即墨五中版思路分析：短文续写需要“合情、合理、合法”，瞻前顾后，努力符合原文风格和文脉。既要考察学生的语言功底基本语言的组织应用能力，又要考察学生的思维逻辑能力，甚至还考察学生的生活能力和生活常识。用英语讲述外国的故事，属于跨文化交际的体现，但是充分体现了文化认同，而且往往可以找到中国优秀传统文化的影子以及诸多美好的一面。本文一方面赞扬了TheMeredithfamily乐于助人的精神，另一方面肯定了Bernard自力更生，自食其力，努力为父母分忧解难，做个有价值的好孩子。穷人的孩子早当家。责任感很强。自助者，天助之！Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves!天行健，君子以自强不息；地势坤，君子以厚德载物！人生总是充满了艰、难、险、阻。当我们遭遇困难或者挫折时，要自强不息，要迎难而上，办法总比头发多，天无绝人之路！树立正确的人生观、价值观、世界观；拒绝坑蒙拐骗，拒绝嗟来之食，独立自主、自力更生，自尊自爱自强！WhenMrs.MeredithheardofJohn’sidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.WithMrs.Meredith’shelp,thekidsputsomecorninthemicrowavestove,addedsomeoilandsugar.Soonthefirsthomemadepopcorncameout.Lookingatthegoldensoftdelicatepopcorn,thefourexcitedkidsjumpedwithjoyandclappedtheirhandswitheachother.“Delicious!Yummy!”,theyyelledgladly.ThentheyputthecornintopaperbagsandhandedthemtoBernard.“I’mgoingtostartmynewbusiness.”,saidBernardshylyandexcitedly.Witheverythingready,Bernardstartedonhisnewbusiness.Heputallthesepopcornheldinthepaperbagsonabigcleanplateinorderandtookthemaroundthehousestosellthem.PeoplewereamazedandadmirabletoseewhatBernardwasdoing.Althoughtheeconomywasindecline,mostpeoplepreferredtobuyoneortwobags.Inlessthanhalfaday,allthepopcornwassoldoutandhispocketsswelledwithcoinsandnotes.Bernardwasdeeplymovedandthankfulandheknewitwasnotjustmoneybutlove、appreciationandfraternity.其他思路和美句：1.Sothechildrenweregreatlypraisedandencouraged,andtheycalledinBernardinexcitementtosharetheideawithhimwithouthesitation.2.Bernard’seyeswerewidelyopenedandglaredwithhope,butsoondisappeared.3.Myfamilydidn’thavecornorsugartomakepopcorn.NorcanImakepopcorn.4.I’mhappythatIcanmakesomecontributionstomyfamilyandmyparentsshouldbeproudofme.possibleversion(2)WhenMrs.MeredithheardofJohn’sidea,shethoughtitwasagoodone,too.WhenthethreesiblingscalledonBernardandsharedthebigprojectwiththepoorboy,Bernard’sfacelitupbutquicklyhisexcitementfaded.“Thankyouforyourbigboxofcorn,butIdon’thaveasinglepennytobuypopcornandpaperbags.”Bernardsighedheavily.Smilingslyly,Johnproduced50dollars,whichwascontributedtogetherbyClaraandHarry.ExcitementreturnedtoBernard’sfaceashemurmuredasincerethankyouwithatremblingvoice.Witheverythingready,Bernardstartedoutonhisnewbusiness.Withthebigboxhangingaroundhisneck,BernardbecometheNo.1popcornboyintheneighborhood.Thethreesiblingswouldhelphimwithfillingandmakingchanges.Together,theysold500portionsinasingledayastheneighborsstillshowedsupportdespitetheirownpoverty.Bytheendoftheday,Bernard’scornboxwasemptiedbuthiscashpotwasfullofnotesandcoins.Yet,heknew,fromthebottomofhisheart,thatitwasnotjustmoney,butalsolove,kindnessandfriendship,thatfilledhispot.Thankyouforyourappreciation!