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外研版Book31.DoesthewriteroftheemailliveinZiguiCounty?Readtheemailandanswerthequestions.Becauseitiswherehergrandparentshadlived.No,shedoesn’t.2.Whydidshewanttovisittheregion?3.Whathadchangedsincethelasttimeshewasthere?TheareahasbeenfloodedbecauseoftheThreeGorgesDam.写作任务：假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Lucy五年前曾在你所在的城市当外教。最近他发来邮件询问你市近几年的变化，请你给他回一封电子邮件。要点包括：1.城市交通2.市容环境3.居住条件注意：1.词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。.DearLucy,Hearingfromyou,Iamverydelighted.AndI’dliketotellyouaboutthechangesinourcityinrecentyears._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inaword,ourcityischangingforthebetter.I’mlookingforwardtoyourvisit!Yours,LiHua抄改连扩抓审书面表达书面表达六步法一、审题抄改连扩抓审书面表达文体，人称，时态1文体：今昔对比类说明文2人称：第三人称3时态：一般过去时，一般现在时，现在完成时二、抓要点抄改连扩抓审书面表达确定要点齐全，写出和要点相关的单词或短语要点一城市交通与要点相关的词汇：城市__________促进，增进__________交通__________发展__________政府__________公路___________自行车共享系统_____________________容易的___________可获得的___________宽的___________使----变宽_____________方便的__________旅行_____________四处走动_______________要点二市容环境与要点相关的词汇:环境__________整洁的__________漂亮的__________宜人的__________有吸引力的__________舒服的__________树木__________花朵__________风景__________要点三居住条件与要点相关的词汇：搬家___________旧房子_____________公寓__________建筑物______________建设，搭建___________家人_____________越来越多的___________现代的_____________居住条件__________三、扩展成句抄改连扩抓审书面表达把与要点相关的词汇扩展成句。为了保证句子正确，最好写简单句。1.在城市里旅行是很方便的。__isconvenient___________________________2.要促进城市的发展，政府已经拓宽了路。___________________________,thegovernment_____________________3.自行车共享系统已经逐渐受欢迎起来。Bike-sharingsystems________________________4.我们的城市比以前更漂亮/迷人。Ourcityis_____________________________5.宜人的风景使我们的城市成为更舒服的居住地。__________sceneryhasmadeourcitya____________________placeto_____________6.人们的居住条件已经有很大的提高。People’____________have________________7.大量的漂亮公寓被建。________________________________________8.人们已经从他们的旧的小的房子，搬到新的房子里。Manypeoplehave______________theiroldandsmallhousesand_________________.四、连句成文抄改连扩抓审书面表达适当使用连接词把写出的句子连成篇章五、查错改错1.注意时态、语态等是否正确2.是否有破句（缺成分）3.词数是否符合要求4.是否需要合适的开头与结尾抄改连扩抓审书面表达六、誊写修改无误后，认真规范地誊写在规定的地方。卷面一定要工整!抄改连扩抓审书面表达抄改连扩抓审书面表达书面表达六步法汾阳Almostheaven,WestVirginia,BlueRidgeMountains,ShenandoahRiver.Lifeisoldthere,olderthanthetrees,Youngerthanthemountains,blowinglikeabreeze.Countryroad,takemehomeTotheplaceIbelong,WestVirginia,mountainmomma,Takemehome,countryroad.Allmymem'riesgather'roundher,Miner'slady,strangertobluewater.Darkanddusty,paintedonthesky,Mistytasteofmoonshine,tear-dropinmyeye.Countryroad,takemehomeCountryroad,takemehomeTotheplaceIbelong,WestVirginia,mountainmomma,Takemehome,countryroad.Ihearhervoice,inthemorninghoursshecallsme,Theradioremindsmeofmyhomefaraway.AnddrivingdowntheroadIgetthefeelingthatIshouldhavebeenhomeyesterday,yesterday.Countryroad,takemehomeTotheplaceIbelong,WestVirginia,mountainmomma,Takemehome,countryroad.Takemehome,countryroad-在人生的道路上，从来没有全身而退，坐享其成，不劳而获一说。你不努力，就得出局。Ontheroadoflife,neverretreatfromthewholebody,enjoyitsachievementsandgetsomethingfornothing.Ifyoudon'tworkhard,you'reout.单枪匹马你别怕，一腔孤勇又如何，这一路你可以哭，但不能怂，总得熬过无人问津的日子，才能迎来掌声和鲜花。Don'tbeafraidtoshootasinglehorse.Whataboutbeingaloneandbrave?Youcancryalltheway,butyoucan'tbeangry.Youhavetogothroughthedayswhennobodycaresaboutittowelcomeapplauseandflowers.要像溺水的人渴望呼吸一样渴望成功，一秒钟也不能松懈，不然你觉得你凭什么赢。Beaseagertosucceedasadrowningpersonistobreathe,anddon'tslackenoffforasecond,orwhatdoyouthinkyou'regoingtowin?所有美好，都不负归期，选一种姿态让自己活得无可替代，没有所谓的运气，只有绝对的努力。Allgoodthingscometoanend.Chooseagesturetomakeyourlifeirreplaceable.Thereisnoso-calledluck,onlyabsoluteeffort.3、一切伟大的行动和思想，都有一个微不足道的开始。Allgreatactionsandthoughts,allhaveainsignificantbeginning.勇敢的面对不一定成功，而你不面对就一定不成功。Braveinthefaceofnotnecessarilysuccessful,butyoudontfacewillnotbecertainofsuccess.我们这个世界，从不会给一个伤心的落伍者颁发奖牌。Wearetheworld,nevergiveasadlaggardawardedMEDALS.新路开始常是狭窄的，但它却是自己延伸拓宽的序曲。Startthenewroadisnarrow,butitisthepreludeofthespreadyourselftobroaden.一个人几乎可以在任何他怀有无限热忱的事情上成功。Apersoncansuccessonanyofthethingshehasunlimitedenthusiasm.当一个人先从自己的内心开始奋斗，他就是个有的人。Whenapersonfromhisfirstheartbeginstostruggle,heisaman.的记忆是泪水洗不净的，只有汗水才能把它冲掉。Painfulmemoriesaretearswashnotclean,canonlyputthesweatitwashedaway只会在水泥地上走路的人，永远不会留下深深的脚印。Canonlywalkontheconcreteperson,neverleftadeepfootprint.1、其实输并不可怕，可怕的是输了就鼓不起勇气面对世界。Actuallyloseisnotterrible,terribleislostjustcan'taffordtodrumcourageinthefaceoftheworld.对于每一个不利条件，都会存在与之相对应的有利条件。Foreachdisadvantage,therearefavorableconditionsandatthesametime.当你对自己诚实的时候，世界上没有人能够欺骗得了你。Whenyou'rehonestwithyourself,nooneintheworldcandeceiveyou.挫折经历的太少，所以总是把一些琐碎的小事看的太重。Frustratingexperiencetoolittle,soalwaysputtoomuchweightonsometrivialthings.卓越的人一大优点是：在不利与艰难的遭遇里百折不挠。Asabigadvantageisremarkable,inbadandhardbyperseverance.一个缺口的杯子，如果换一个角度看它，它仍然是圆的Agapinthecup,ifchangeapointofviewit,itisstillround.只是一起走过一段路而已，何必把怀念弄的比经过还长。walkingthrougharoad,whyshouldgetmissmorethanalong.思想是行动的先导，心理问题直接作用并影响人的思想。Thoughtistheforerunnerofaction,psychologicalproblemsdirectlyeffectandinfluencepeople'sthinking.第一个青春是上帝