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为成功的人生奠基No.2MiddleSchoolofYuci写作主题词：故宫TheForbiddenCityThePalaceMuseum世界文化遗址WorldHeritageSite(遗产+地方)工匠精神Craftsmanspirit为成功的人生奠基No.2MiddleSchoolofYuci假设你是红星中学学生李华，得知故宫正在招募暑期义务英文讲解员，请你给相关负责人写一封申请信，内容包括1.介绍你的基本信息2.说明你的优势3.表示你希望被录用信息来源+自我介绍+写信目的申请理由+个人优势希望录用+期待回信中文构思六件套为成功的人生奠基No.2MiddleSchoolofYuci我从网上/报纸得知故宫正在招募暑期义务英文讲解员Ihavelearnedfromthelocalnewspaper/yourwebsitethat+简单句learn=be/getinformed被告知(bedone被动)getinformedofsth/getinformedthatinformsbofsth,whichreallyattractsme.fascinate/appealto/interestyouarelookingfor/recruiting(招聘)Tomydelight,Ihavebeenreliably(可靠地)informedonyourwebsite/fromthenewspaperthat+简单句①Iamwritingtoapplyforthejob/position/postasa+职业applyto应用于，适用于applyfor申请apply还可以表示涂抹for是介词后加n或doing(动名词)position职位post邮寄,发表的文章或公告引申为公告上的职位asa+职位做状语②Iamwritingtowithmyapplicationforbeinga...③Iamwritingtorecommendmyslefasa...with是介词(prep)，myapplication是n,介词+n作状语，表示写信时的一种状态,写信时带着我对某一职位的申请建议信换成suggestion④Iamwritingtohopethat...⑤Iamwritingtointhehopethat...(带着一种希望给你一些建议/我想成为你们当中的一员)自我介绍I'mLiHua,aboyof17currentlystudyingin**school.IhavelearnedformtheInternetthat...,soIamwritingtorecommendmyslefasa...为成功的人生奠基No.2MiddleSchoolofYuci如此……以至于……so…that…I'msointerestedthatI’mwritingtoapplyforit.Soadjbe主语that照抄倒装如以句用非谓语,主句HavinglearnedthatyouarelookingforanEnglishguide,soI’mwritingto……SointerestedamIthatI’mwritingto……不能用so[so是连接两个句子的]不能用非限制性定从主句，从句非谓语不是完整的句子了HavinglearnedthatyouarelookingforanEnglishguide,sointerestedamIthatI’mwritingto……为成功的人生奠基No.2MiddleSchoolofYucidueto(介词)+nthat后面是同位语从句因为这个活动好(有意义)我才申请因为让世界了解中国文化很有意义，所以我申请成为义务讲解员I'meagertobecomeanEnglishguideonaccountofthefactthatitismeaningfultolettheworldknowmoreabouttheChineseculture.itisofgreatsignificance/itisofcritical[关键的]importanceto为成功的人生奠基No.2MiddleSchoolofYuci我能胜任这份工作Ibelieve(that)Icandothejobwell.宾从中that可以省略IbelieveIwillbefitforthejob.(befitfor合适)IbelieveIamfullyqualifiedforthejob(qualify限定，合格、使合格).我是足够有资格的Iamconfidentinbeingaqualified+职位(beconfidentindoingsth)Thereasons(whyIamconfidentinbeingqualifiedforthejob)areasfollows.关于我能够胜任这份工作的原因如下定从修饰reason个人优势[总-分]占有拥有will意愿意志bewillingto想要Beingkindaswellasdiligent,Iamalwayswillingtohelpothers.变非谓语的时候一定要先变为动词原形再变非谓语diligent=hardworkingIcanfullycooperatewith我可以和...充分完全的合作为成功的人生奠基No.2MiddleSchoolofYuci而在你为数不多的经历当中，唯一能锻炼人际交往能力的是做班长/学生会主席Iamwellversed/specializeinsth=begoodatMycommand(掌握)ofsthisexcellent./Ihaveafair(相当的)mastery(掌握)/commandofEnglish.我对英语有相当的掌握程度Iexcelatsth/doingsthIcanuseEnglishfluentlyandaccurately.精准准确的Ihavegainedahighlevelofcompetence(能力)in......ismyareaofexpertise(专长)/excellence...是我专长的领域excellent表示成功，excel擅长IhaveafaircommandofEnglish,whichmakesitpossibleformetocommunicatewithforeignvisitorsfluently.it是形式宾语IhaveafaircommandofEnglish,whichhelpsme/enablesmetocommunicatewithforeignvisitorsfluently.Ihaveagreatamountofknowledgeconcerning(on)...,whichmakesitpossibleformetohelpforeignershaveabetterunderstandingofChineseculturesth(过往经历)enablesmetodevelopbetterinterpersonalskillsandthespiritofcooperation.enableto使……既体现出我有经验，又说明社交能力强性格好，还调整的句式避免了通篇以I开头Theexperienceofbeingmonitorofmyclassenablesmetodevelopbetterinterpersonalskillsandthespiritofcooperation.prep+n定语修饰experienceIhavealotofexperience.SinceIusedtoworkasavolunteerinasimilarevent,Iamequippedwithagreatdealofpracticalexperiencebeequippedwithsth=havesth为成功的人生奠基No.2MiddleSchoolofYuci为成功的人生奠基No.2MiddleSchoolofYuci承诺/感谢+期待回信承诺Ifyougivemethisopportunity,Iwilltrymybestto/makeeveryefforttowork.IfIcantaketheposition,Iwilltreasurethisopportunityandworkhard.珍惜这次机会，努力工作感谢Iwouldbehonoredifyougivemethisopportunity.IwouldsincerelyappreciateitifyoucouldgivemetheopportunitytoshareChinesecultureandhistorywithforeignvisitors.Yourprompt/timely(adj及时的)replymightbeappreciated.期待回信Hopetohearfromyousoon.为成功的人生奠基No.2MiddleSchoolofYuci结构内容三段式、连接词。阅卷要点明确好找结构清晰(一看就知道要点是全的)要点不能少、低级语法错误不能有、亮点突出(词汇、灵活的运用高级句式体现语法基础深厚)老师时间短，亮点放在开头(一眼就知道用了高级句式体现你的水平)节约阅卷时间阅卷老师开心你的分数也不会差你觉得这篇作文的中间段有什么问题？为成功的人生奠基No.2MiddleSchoolofYuci2个并列要点Ontheonehand,...ontheotherhandForonething...foranotherinthefirstplace...inthesecondplace首先+其次首先FirstofallTobeginwith/Tostartwith/firstandforemost3个并列要点首先+其次+最后其次Besides/what'smore/furthermore/inaddition最后lastbutnotleast/finally为成功的人生奠基No.2MiddleSchoolofYuci