高三英语写作公开课课件(共26张)

Whatmakesagoodwriting?AGoodWriting作文评分标准分数档要点词汇语法交际逻辑21-25覆盖所有要点丰富基本无错得体，满足要求清楚、合理16-20覆盖所有要点基本满足任务要求少许错误基本符合要求清楚、合理11-15漏掉一些要点有限有一些错误但不影响理解基本得体基本清楚6-10漏掉主要要点贫乏错误较多，影响理解不得体混乱1-5未能传达任何信息，写的内容与要求无关1.要点完整；2.语言准确且多样；3.结构清晰；4.逻辑连贯5.交际得体6.书写美观好作文标准：好作文的写作步骤(写作七步法)审题•体裁•时态•人称•要点列提纲•结构•要点•关键词补充细节语言表达•准确•地道•词汇•句式连词成句+过渡词•逻辑•连贯•流畅连句成篇润色修正•美化句子•高级替换定稿典题示例假定你是李华，暑期在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展，请写一封信申请做志愿者。内容包括：1.写信目的;2.个人优势;3.能做的事注意：1.词数120左右2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯3.结束语已为你写好Dearsirormadam,_________________________________________________________________________________________Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Sincerely,LiHua(2019全国1卷)体裁人称时态要求一般现在时120左右gallery,artcenter应用文（申请信）第一人称AChinesepaintingexhibition其它相关表达：中国画Chinesepaintings,traditionalChineseart,theartworks.字数内容avolunteer,thevoluntaryjob,theposition写作背景:(抓关键词)美术馆中国画展志愿者内容要求：1.写信目的;2.个人优势;3.能做的事自我介绍+写信目的开头正文结尾Para.1Para.2Para.3个人优势+能做的事（具体说明能胜任此工作的理由,3个优势）总结意愿高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）自我介绍+写信目的Para.1我是李华，是从中国来的一个留学生；得知你们美术馆要举行中国画展，正在招募志愿者；我迫不及待地写信想申请这个工作。IamLiHua,anexchangestudentfromChina.anexchangestudent;thecomingChinesepaintingexhibition;thelocalgallery;can’twaittodo;applyfortheposition;IHearthatvolunteersareneededforthecomingChinesepaintingexhibitioninthelocalgallery.Ican’twaittoapplyfortheposition.高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）个人优势①+能做的事（中国画展）Para.2因为对中国传统艺术非常感兴趣并且受到过良好训练，所以我非常了解中国画。我不仅可以给游客解说画美在哪里，还可以讲述他们背后的故事。traditionalChineseart;IamdeeplyinterestedintraditionalChineseartandIhavereceivedagoodeducationinart,soIhaveagoodknowledgeofChinesepaintings.bedeeplyinterestedin;haveagoodknowledge/grasp/understanding/commandof;notonly···butalso···;explaintoIcannotonlyexplaintothevisitorsthebeautyofthepaintings,butalsotellthestoriesbehindthem.高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）个人优势②+能做的事（在伦敦的中国人）我的英语很流利，这使得我在与别人交流方面没有障碍。haveagoodknowledge/grasp/understanding/commandof;IhaveagoodcommandofEnglish,soIhavenodifficultycommunicatingwithothers.Para.2communicatewithothers;havenotrouble/difficultyindoing高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）个人优势③+能做的事（申请做志愿者）我非常热情并且有责任心，我相信我完全胜任志愿者工作。enthusiasticandresponsible;Iamenthusiasticandresponsible,soIbelieveIamperfectlyqualifiedforthejobasavolunteer.Para.2bequalifiedfor高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）总结具备了以上提到的所有品质(如上所述)，我可以肯定的说，我就是你要找的合适人选。Asismentionedabove；Withallthesequalitiesmentionedabove,IcansaywithcertaintythatIamtherightpersonyouarelookingfor.Para.2with；qualities高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）表达感谢和期待回复Para.3如果你能考虑我的申请，我将十分感激。期待你的回复。Iwouldappreciateitif…;Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyapplicationintoconsideration.takemyapplicationintoconsideration/account/takeaccountof/seriouslyLookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇⑴排序关系⑵递进关系⑶举例关系⑷转折关系⑸因果关系⑹归纳总结⑺并列关系first;firstly;second;secondly;lastbutnotleast;atfirst;firstofall;inthefirstplace;atlast;lastofall;foronething;foranotherthing;ontheonehand;ontheotherhand;finallyand;too;aswellas;alongwith;togetherwith;both…and…;notonly…butalso…forexample;forinstance;like;suchas;asfollows;take…asanexamplebut;however;while;though;onthecontrarybecause(of);since;owingto;dueto;thanksto;asaresult/consequence(of);thus;thereforeinaword;inshort;tosumup;inconclusion;ingeneral;insummary;onthewhole;inbriefwhat’smore;besides;furthermore;inaddition;additionally;tomakemattersworse;what’sworse;worsestill;（使用恰当的连接词使文章流畅）高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）自我介绍+写信目的开头正文结尾Para.1Para.2Para.3个人优势+能做的事（具体说明能胜任此工作的理由,3个优势）总结意愿高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇⑴排序关系⑵递进关系⑶举例关系⑷转折关系⑸因果关系⑹归纳总结⑺并列关系first;firstly;second;secondly;lastbutnotleast;atfirst;firstofall;inthefirstplace;atlast;lastofall;foronething;foranotherthing;ontheonehand;ontheotherhand;finallyand;too;aswellas;alongwith;togetherwith;both…and…;notonly…butalso…forexample;forinstance;like;suchas;asfollows;take…asanexamplebut;however;while;though;onthecontrarybecause(of);since;owingto;dueto;thanksto;asaresult/consequence(of);thus;thereforeinaword;inshort;tosumup;inconclusion;ingeneral;insummary;onthewhole;inbriefwhat’smore;besides;furthermore;inaddition;additionally;tomakemattersworse;what’sworse;worsestill;（使用恰当的连接词）高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）DearSirorMadam,IamLiHua,anexchangestudentfromChina.IHearthatvolunteersareneededforthecomingChinesepaintingexhibitioninthelocalgallery.Ican’twaittoapplyfortheposition.Atfirst,IamdeeplyinterestedintraditionalChineseartandIhavereceivedagoodeducationinart,soIhaveagoodknowledgeofChinesepaintings.Icannotonlyexplaintothevisitorsthebeautyofthepaintings,butalsotellthestoriesbehindthem.Besides,IhaveagoodcommandofEnglish,soIhavenodifficultycommunicatingwithothers.Additionally,Iamenthusiasticandresponsible,soIbelieveIamperfectlyqualifiedforthejobasavolunteer.Withallthesequalitiesmentionedabove,IcansaywithcertaintythatIamtherightpersonyouarelookingfor.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyapplicationintoconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）高三英语写作公开课课件（共26张）好作文的写作步骤(写作七步法)审题•体裁•时态•人称•要点列提纲•结构•要点•关键词补充细节语言表达•准确•地道•词汇•句式连词成句+过渡词•逻辑•连贯•流畅连句成篇润色修正•美化句子•高级替换定稿高三英语写作公开课课