读后续写微技能训练——修辞手法(Simile明喻)

读后续写微技能训练修辞手法——明喻(Simile)Figureofspeech(修辞手法)修辞手法(figureofspeech)是根据表达需要，运用有效的语言手段来提高语言的表达效果，使语言表达具有准确性、鲜明性和生动性的语言运用方式。恰当地使用修辞手段，可以使文章更加生动，更具有表现力，蕴意丰富，引人入胜。常用的修辞手法有：夸张(Exaggeration)、明喻(Simile)、暗喻(Metaphor)、拟人(Personification)、平行法(Parallelism)、头韵(Alliteration)、对比(Contrast)、矛盾修辞法(Oxymoron)、双关(Pun)、移情(Empathy)等。Hersmileisasbrightasthesun.Hersmileisbrightlikethesun.Simile—afigureofspeechcomparingtwounlikethings,oftenintroducedwiththewords“like”or“as”.Simile(明喻)Mymommaalwayssaid,“Lifeislikeaboxofchocolaes.Youneverknowwhatyou'regonnaget.”ForrestGump阿甘正传Aroomwithoutbooksislikeabodywithoutasoul.没有书的房间，如同没有灵魂的躯体。We'reliketwopeasinapod.我们就像豆荚里的两颗豌豆。Examplesofsimilefromthetextbooks1.Itseemedasiftheworldwasatanend.(M1U4）2.Ourlegsweresoheavyandcoldthattheyfeltlikeblocksofice.(M1U3)3.Thelakesshonelikeglassinthesettingsunandlookedwonderful.(M1U3)4.Brickscoveredthegroundlikeredautumnleaves.(M1U4)5.Thecountry,coveredwithcherrytreeflowers,looksasthoughitiscoveredwithpinksnow.(M3U1)6.Why,lookathim.Heeatslikeawolf.(M3U3)7.LongagoDrYuanhadadreamaboutriceplantsastallassorghum.Eachearofricewasasbigasanearofcornandeachgrainofricewasashugeasapeanut.(M4U2)Comparison①微风吹来，树叶摇动，灯光闪烁。Thewindblew,theleavesshookandthelightsflashed.Alightbreezeblew,swayingthetreebranchesandmakingtheraysoflightglimmeranddanceasiftherewasafairtaleworldhiddendeepwithin.②清清的泉水潺潺地流着。Theclearspringisflowing.Rippingcrystalsstreamsstretchedawayintothedistancefromthetoweringbluffs(悬崖)likethebeautifulstreamers(飘带)ofafairymaid.Theappilicationofsimile基本构成：本体+比喻词+喻体1.Myloveislikearedrose.2.Myloveisasbeautifulashislove.3.Thebabyislikehisfather.4.Thepenistoawriterwhatthegunistoafighter.5.Themanisastallasagiraffe.6.Heappearsasifhehadknownthetruth.7.Heranasfastaspossible.8.Everytimeyoufeellikesmoking,don'treachforacigarret.9.Icouldn'tmovemylegs.Itwasasiftheywerestucktothefloor.similesimilesimilesimile常见的比喻词：like,as,asif(though),AistoBwhatCistoDSomepatternsofsimile①“as”patternSheisastimidasamouse.她胆小如鼠。Hetreatshiskidastheappleoftheeye.他把他的孩子当掌上明珠。Thesnowwasasthickasablanket.雪厚得像毯子。Afatherrushedtohisson'sschool,onlytodiscoverthebuildingwasasflatasapancake.一位父亲冲进他儿子的学校，却发现那幢楼像一个薄饼一样平。Somepatternsofsimile②“what”patternReadingistothemindwhatfoodistothebody.读书与思想的关系就好比食物与健康的关系。Honestyistobusinessmanwhatwateristofish.诚实对商人就像水对鱼一样重要。Dreamsaretopeoplewhatwingsaretobirds.梦之于人，犹如翅膀之于鸟。Railwayistotransportationwhatbloodistoman'sbody.铁路对交通的重要性就如血液对人的重要性。Somepatternsofsimile③“asif”patternHepicksoutthelaceoftheshoeandeatsitasifitwerespaghetti.他挑出鞋带，像吃意大利面一样吃。Hetriescuttingandchewingthebottomoftheshoeasifitweretehfineststeak.他试着割咬鞋底，好像这是最好的牛排。ThewomanmadehimfetchandcarryjustasifhewasagreatNewfoundlanddog.这个女人叫他做这做那，简直把他当作一条纽芬兰的大狗。Somepatternsofsimile④“like”patternMymindgoesroundandroundliketheearth.我的心像地球一样转来转去Hewaslikeacatonhotbricksbeforehisdrivingtest.他在驾照考试前就像热锅上的蚂蚁。JennyandIwerelikepeasandcarrots.我和珍妮形影不离。Loveislikethewind,whichyoucan'tseebutcanfeel.爱就像风，你看不见却能感觉到。Shehungherheadlikeadyingflower.她垂下头来，像一朵垂死的花。“like”patternLivingwithoutanaimislike____________________.Thestarsinthenightskysparkledlike___________.Thewindhowledlike_____________.Helayunderthequiltinalongshapelike________,turningonhissidetofacethedoor.Searchingforonemaninthisbigcityislike_____________________________.sailingwithoutacompassdiamondsanangrylionabeanlookingforaneedleinahaystack请用明喻改写下列句子1.月亮一会钻进云里，一会儿又从云里钻出来。Themoongotintothecloudsforawhile,andthengotoutoftheclouds.Themoonwaslikeanaughtychild,nowintotheclouds,andthenoutoftheclouds.2.比赛马上就要开始了，小力的心情非常紧张。Thegamewasabouttostart.Xiaoliwasverynervous.Asthegamewasabouttostart,Xiaoli'sheartwaslikeabowonastring.3.微风吹过阳光照耀的湖面，又反射出点点金光。Thebreezewasblowingonthesunnylakeandreflectingalittlegoldenlight.Whenthebreezewasblowingoverthelake,itreflectedalittlegoldenlight,justlikethestarsshiningalloverthesky.