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翻译：风筝(鲁迅)对比(a)Kite(translation:alexcwlin/edit:adam.L)(b)TheKite(杨宪益、戴乃迭译)(c)Kite(刘士聪译)北京的冬季，地上还有积雪，灰黑色的秃树枝丫叉于晴朗的天空中，而远处有一二风筝浮动，在我是一种惊异和悲哀。(a)ItiswintertimeinBeijing.Thegroundiscoveredwiththicksnow.Leaflesstree-branchesingreyish-blackcolorreachintotheclearsunnysky.Acoupleofkitesfloatinghighintheairatdistancesaddlemewithafeelingofbewildermentandmelancholy.(b)APekingwinterdismaysanddepressesme:thethicksnowonthegroundandthebaretrees'ashenbranchesthrustinguptowardstheclearbluesky,whileinthedistanceoneortwoskiesarefloating.(c)When，inlatewinterinBeijing，therewasstillsnowonthegroundand,upintheair，anentanglementofdark-graybarebranchesagainstasunnysky，acoupleofkiteswerealreadyflutteringupanddowninthedistance-asightthatfilledmewithamazementandforlornness.***************************************************故乡的风筝时节，是春二月，倘听到沙沙的风轮声，仰头便能看见一个淡墨色的蟹风筝或嫩蓝色的蜈蚣风筝。(a)Thekite-flyingseasonofmyhometownisaroundFebruaryinspringtime.Ifyouhappentohearrustlingsoundofwind-wheels,lookupandyouwouldseeagrayish-blackcrab-shapedkiteoralight-bluecentipede-shapedkite.(b)Athome,thetimeforkitesisearlyspring.Whenyouhearthewhirrofawind-wheel,youraiseyourheadtoseeagreycrab-kiteorasoftbluecentipede-kite.(c)Inmyhometown，kiteswereflowninearlyspring.Whenyouheardthewhirringofwind-wheelsandlookedup，yousawadarkishcrab-kiteoroneresemblingacentipedeoflimpidblue.还有寂寞的瓦片风筝，没有风轮，又放得很低，伶仃地显出憔悴可怜的模样。(a)Thereisalsothesolitarytile-shapedkitewhichdoesn’thavewind-wheels.Helplesslyitfliesatlowaltitudewithaworn-outandpiteouslook.(b)Ortheremaybeasolitarytile-kite,withoutwindwheelandflowntoolow,lookingpatheticallylonelyandforlorn.(c)Therewereoneortwoothersintheshapeofold-fashionedtiles,withoutwheels.Theyflewatalowerlevel，lookinglonelyandshriveled，arousingasenseofcompassion.但此时地上的杨柳已经发芽，早的山桃也多吐蕾，和孩子们的天上的点缀相照应，打成一片春日的温和。(a)Atthistime,thefoliatingwillowsandbuddingwild-peachesonthegroundcomplementthosechildren’shigh-flyingadornmentstofillawarmspring’sday.(b)Bythistime,though,thewillowsonthegroundareputtingoutshoots,andtheearlymountainpeacheshavebudded.Setoffbythechildren’sfancyworkinthesky,togethertheymakeupthewarmthofspring.(c)Aroundthistimeoftheyear，poplarsandwillowsbegantosprout，andnewbudsappearedontheearlymountainpeaches，formingapicturecompletewiththeskydecoratedbythekidswiththeirkites，apicturethatgaveyouthefeelofthewarmthofspring.我现在在哪里呢？四面都还是严冬的肃杀，而久经诀别的故乡的久经逝去的春天，却就在这天空中荡漾了。(a)AndwhereamInow?Iamsurroundedbybittercoldinalldirections,butthenareminderofthelong-gonespringtimeofmyhometownisnowgoingupanddowninthesky.(b)WhereamInow?Allroundmedreadwinterreigns,whilethelong-departedspringofmylong-forgottenhomeisfloatinginthisnorthernsky.(c)But，wherewasInow？Standinginthemidstofthesevereanddesolatewinter，Ifeltthespringofmyhometownripplingintheair，thespringthathadbeenlonggone.***************************************************但我是向来不爱放风筝的，不但不爱，并且嫌恶它，因为我以为这是没出息孩子所做的玩艺。(a)Kite-flyingisnevermycupoftea.NotonlythatIdislikeit,IhateitwithapassionbecauseIalwaysthinkthatissomethinganunmotivatedkidwoulddo.(b)YetIneverlikedflyingkites.Farfromlikingkites,infact,Idetestedthemasplaythingsofgood-for-nothingchildren.(c)Ihadneverenjoyedflyingkitesand，further，Idetestedit，thinkingthatitwastheplayofkidsoflittlepromise.和我相反的是我的小兄弟，他那时大概十岁内外罢，多病，瘦得不堪，然而最喜欢风筝。(a)Mylittlebrotheristheopposite.Atthatcertaintimehewasaroundtenyearsold,sickallthetimeandskinnyasatwig.Helovedflyingkites.(b)Myyoungbrotherwasjustthereverse.Hemustthenhavebeenaboutten,oftenfellillandwasfearfullythin,buthisgreatestdelightwaskites.(c)Myyoungerbrother，however，abouttenyearsofagethen，weakandthin，frequentlytroubledwithsickness，wascrazyaboutkites.自己买不起，我又不许放，他只得张着小嘴，呆看着空中出神，有时竟至于小半日。(a)Hecouldn’taffordtobuyakite,andIwouldn’tallowhimtoflyone.Allhecoulddowastogazeattheskyinfascinationwithhismouthopen,andsometimesfordurationofalmosthalf-a-day.(b)Unabletobuyoneandforbiddenbymetoflyone,hewouldstandforhoursatatime,hissmalllipsparteinlonging,gazingraptlyatthesky.(c)Unabletoafforditanddeprivedoftheaccesstoitbythiselderbrotherofhis，hewouldstandthere，histinymouthopeninagape，watchingupward,sometimesforhoursrunning.远处的蟹风筝突然落下来了，他惊呼；两个瓦片风筝的缠绕解开了，他高兴得跳跃。他的这些，在我看来都是笑柄，可鄙的。(a)Whenacrab-shapedkitefromafarfelloffthesky,hewouldscreaminamazement.Whentwotile-shapedkitesbecamedisentangled,hewouldjumpupanddownforjoy.Inmyview,whathedidwaslaughableandcontemptuous.(b)Ifadistantcrablikesuddenlycamedown,hewouldutteracryofdismay;ifthestringsoftwotile-kitesbecamedisentangled,hewouldjumpandskipforjoy.Thisstruckmeasabsurdandcontemptible.(c)When，allofasudden，thecrab-kiteinthedistanceplummeted，hewouldgaspwithsurprise；whentwotile-kitesgottwistedandthentakenapart，hewouldjumpwithjoy.Tome，allthesespontaneitiesofhiswerecontemptibleanddespicable.***************************************************有一天，我忽然想起，似乎多日不很看见他了，但记得曾见他在后园拾枯竹。(a)OnedayIsuddenlyrealizedIhadn’tseenhimformanydaysbutIdidrememberseeinghimcollectfallenbambootwigsinthebackyard.(b)OnedayitoccurredtomeIhadnotseenmuchofhimlately,butIhadnoticedhimpickingupbamboosticksinthebackyard.(c)(Translationofthispartmissinginsource