FCE第九讲写作essay2

BEVERLY老师写作ESSAY2WritingEssays（1）Inpart2,youchooseoneofthreetasks.Youaregivenanessaytitleandsomenotes.Youhave40minutestodothispart.(thewritingpaperlasts1hour20minutes,soifyouspendmoretimeonthispart,youwillhavelesstimefortheotherpart.)ThewritingpaperisPaper2.Itlasts1hourand20minutes.Youdotwotasks.Part1EssaysYouwriteanessay.Thepurposeofanessayisforyoutodiscussasubject,expressyouropinionandgivereasonsforyouropinion.写作Essay1Readthequestioncarefullyandunderlinethekeywordstomakesurethatyouknowexactlywhattodo.2Answerthequestionexactly.3Dealwithallpointsbelowthequestion.4Includeyourownidea.Makesurethatyou：Essay写作结构第一段：基本介绍+你的观点第二段：题目给的第1个note+一个具体例子第三段：题目给的第2个note+一个具体例子第四段：你自己的一个观点+解释一下第五段：总结+升华开头段目的：引入话题+个人观点长度：2-3句30词内1.划关键词2.构思3.组织句子写作EssayDopeopledependtoomuchontechnologynowadays?NotesWriteabout:1communication2education3______(yourownidea)Writeyouressay.(Youshouldwrite140-190words.)初级：第一句：固定句型+填词/句1.Averycommontopicthatisbeingdiscussedis+词/whether+句子2.Currently,moreandmorepeoplebelievethat+句子3.MoreandmorepeoplereadnewsontheInternetsayingthat+句子4.Withthedevelopmentofeconomyandmoderntechnology,+句子1.AverycommontopicthatisbeingdiscussedisTechnology./whetherwedependontechnologytoomuchnowadays.2.Currently,moreandmorepeoplebelievethatwedependontechnologytoomuchnowadays.3.moreandmorepeoplereadnewsontheInternetsayingthatwedependontechnologytoomuchnowadays.4.Withthedevelopmentofeconomyandmoderntechnology,peopledependonthemtoomuchnowadays.写作Essay真题Test1初级：第二句：个人观点Inmyopinion,…Ithinkthat…Ifeelthat…Ibelievethat….Frommypointofview,…Frommyperspective,….肯定态度：主句+do/does+谓语+..Inmyopinion,peopledodependontechnologytoomuchtoday.MoreandmorepeoplereadnewsontheInternetsayingthatwedependontechnologytoomuchnowadays.Inmyopinion,peopledodependontechnologytoomuchnowadays.29words第一句+第二句中级：第一句：同义替换+细节证据第二句：个人观点MoreandmorepeoplereadnewsontheInternetsayingthatwedependontechnologytoomuchnowadays.Inmyopinion,peopledodependontechnologytoomuchnowadays.中级：第一句：同义替换+细节证据Moreandmorepeoplethinkthatwerelyontechnologytoomuchatpresent.Inmyopinion,peopledooveruseandtrusttechnologytoadisturbinglevel.中级：第一句：同义替换+细节证据Moreandmorepeoplethinkthatwerelyontechnologytoomuchatpresent.Wekeepcheckingourphoneeverywhereandtoooften,andwesolveallproblemsoncomputerandmachines.Inmyopinion,peopledooveruseandtrusttechnologytoadisturbinglevel.中级：第一句：同义替换+细节证据Moreandmorepeoplethinkthatwerelyontechnologytoomuchatpresent.Myparentsandmyfriendskeepcheckingtheirphoneseverythreeminutesonsubwayandwaytoschoolandwork,,andwehaveclasses,dobusinessesandevencookwithcomputersandmachines.Inmyopinion,peopledooveruseandtrusttechnologytoadisturbinglevel.高级：修辞：设问/选词/数据/避开模板Nomattercosmopolisorsmallvillage,nowitisacommonscenethatpeoplekeepcheckingtheirphoneseverythreeminutesontheirwaystoskyscrapersorcornfield,doingbusinessesorwashingdisheswithcomputersandmachines.Haven’tweoverusedandtrustedtechnologytoadisturbinglevelcurrently?高级：修辞：设问/选词/数据/避开模板ArecentstudyconductedbyHarvardUniversityshowsthat85%peopleusesmartdevicesandmachinesintheirdailylivesandwork.And70%ofthemadmitthattheywouldhavebigproblemsifallthetechnologywentdown.Haven’tweoverusedandtrustedtechnologytoadisturbinglevelcurrently?简单版Nowadaysnearlyeveryaspectoflifeisaffectedbytechnology.Computersareusedforcommunication,educationandentertainment,butdowedependonthemtoomuch?Dostatethetopicinyourfirstsentence,butuseyourownwords.Don'tstartbysaying‘Iagreewiththis’——youressayshouldpresentyourownargument.Dousequestionstoengagethereaderwiththetopic.主体段目的：平行展开论证长度：3-4句40词/段1.构思2.段落展开Dopeopledependtoomuchontechnologynowadays?NotesWriteabout:1communication2education3______(yourownidea)Writeyouressay.(Youshouldwrite140-190words.)第一步：完成yourownidea1.前面两点和题目有什么关系？组成两个句子。2.想一个词形成并列关系，组成一个句子Dopeopledependtoomuchontechnologynowadays?NotesWriteabout:1communication2education3______(yourownidea)Writeyouressay.(Youshouldwrite140-190words.)第一步：完成yourownidea人们依赖Communicationtechnology太多人们依赖Educationtechnology太多人们依赖____________technology太多平行角度政治经济文化教育法律环境科技社会衣-食-住-行-就业个人-集体-国家内部-外部写作Essay真题Test1写作Essay真题Test2写作Essay真题Test3段落展开Linker+中心句+逻辑+例子/数据FirstAlso/anotherInaddition/Finally原因because/since/as结果so/asaresult对比otherwise分情况讨论for…ForexampleForinstanceTake..AsanexampleAccordingtoastudy…ForIntermsofAboutInaspectofRegardingto写作Essay导致结果的InconsequenceConsequently,......whichmeansthat连词用来分开观点的Inadditionmoreoverfurthermorewhatismorethefurtherpointisthatbesidesfinally写作Essay给原因的...because/since...Becauseofthis,...Forthisreason,...Thatiswhy...Oneofthemainreasonsisthat...给结果的.Asareasult/consequence,...写作Essay对比关系HoweverOntheonehand,...Ontheotherhand,...Whereaswhiledespiteinspiteofalthougheventhough结尾Inconclusion,Toconclude,Tosumup,Tosummarise,写作Essay第三段Somepeopleareafraidthatifpeoplespendalltheirtimetalkingtoothersontheircomputers,theybecomeunabletomakerealrelationships.Theylivethroughcomputersormobilephones,andfeeluncomfortableiftheyarenotonline.Suchpeopleareclearlytoodependentontechnology,althougheasycommunicationhasadvantagesinthebusinessworld.Doincludesuppor