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-----receivingandgiving1.Getthemainideaandtheplotofgivenpassage.2.Predictthepossibleplotdevelopmentaccordingtogivensetences.3.Sharehowtoexpressfeelingsvividlyandendyourwritingdifferently.WHENandWHEREWHYWHOdidWHATtoWHOM?Readforbasicinformationplot情节setting背景Mainidea:Betweenspringandsummer,mymomgaveflowerstonursinghomeontheroadthroughthecountryside,becauseleavingflowersforothersmadeherfeelgood.Unluckily,ourcarbrokedown...Tip1:Wecangetthemainideawiththehelpof.5WquestionsReadforplots,feelings,ANDlanguagewriter’sfeelingsTimeline------------------------------------------------------------------------------writer’sbehaviorswriter’sbehaviorswriter’sbehaviorswriter’sbehaviorswriter’sfeelingswriter’sfeelingswriter’sfeelingsNogarage,nopassers-byReadforplots,feelingsandlanguagewriter’sfeelingsweredriving,alwaysunhappyimpatient,annoyed“Doyouknowsomeonethere?”curious,confused“Didyouleaveyourname?”heardthecarburstworriedhoplesssomewherebetweenspringandsummer,Suddenly，inthemiddleofnowhereBeforeshestartedthecar,Notlongafterwecontinueddriving,Suddenly，adj.actionseffectivedialoguessurroundingswriter’sbehaviorscried,skimmed,lookedback“What?”“Whatdidyoudowiththeflowers?”Tip2:Whilewriting,wecanexpressourinnerfeelingsbyadj.,actions,effectivedialoguesandsurroundings.rebellious(叛逆的）timesFeelinganalysisBeginningalwaysunhappyimpatient,annoyedcurious,confusedworried↑hopelessClimaxThewriterhas_________________withhismom.misunderstandingEnding?Para.1：Wewereworriedaboutwhatcouldbedone.1.Howwouldthewritershowtheirworries?2.Whatwouldtheydo?3.Howcouldpara.1beendedreasonably?Howcanwedescribeone’sworries?Para.2：Aswedrovealong,aflowershopcameintosightontheroadGrouptalkingfortheplotdevelopmentsTip3:Arrangethekeywordsproperlyintwoparagraphs.mom,driving,trip,flowers,car,road,receptionist,silent,name,repairGrouptalkingfortheplotdevelopments,especiallyfortheendingPara.2：Aswedrovealong,aflowershopcameintosightontheroad.1.Seeingaflowershop,whatwouldthewriterdo?2.Howwouldthewriterfeel?3.HowcouldPara.2beendedreasonably?Tip4:Thepassagecanbeendedvariouslyusing___________________________________________________________________.naturalending,feelingending,surroundingending,meaningfulending,etcthedevelopmentofthewritersfeeling?Para.1：Wewereworriedaboutwhatcouldbedone.1.Howwouldthewritershowtheirworries?2.Whatwouldtheydo?3.HowcouldPara.1beendedreasonably?Tip3:Arrangethekeywordsproperlyintwoparagraphs.mom,driving,trip,flowers,car,road,receptionist,silent,name,repairSelf--writingadj./actions/dialogues/similesurroundingsOurcarwasfixedPara.2：Aswedrovealong,aflowershopcameintosightontheroad.1.Seeingaflowershop,whatwouldthewriterdo?2.Howwouldthewriterfeel?3.HowcouldPara.2beendedreasonably?Tip4:Thepassagecanbeendedvariouslyusing___________________________________________________________________.naturalending,feelingending,surroundingending,meaningfulending,etcSelf—writingUsesomedescriptiveexpressionsExchangeandassessment评分时,应主要从以下四个方面考虑：(1)与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度(cohesion)(2)内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用情况;(Content&keywords)(3)应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性;(grammarandvocabulary)(4)上下文的连贯性。(Coherence)Para.1：Wewereworriedaboutwhatcouldbedone.Afterwhatseemedtobeages,underthehotburningson,Iscratchedmyhead,stampedmyfootandwalkedbackandforthhopelessly.Allofasudden,onemanwithhishandswavingatmomcameintoourview.“Heisthereceptionistfromthenursinghome.”Momexplainedtome.“Whyareyouhere?”Momaskedexcitedly.“Ijustintendedtothankyouforyourflowersformally.”Howluckywewere!Whatamazedmemostwasthathewasaretiredgarageman.Asaconsequence,hehadourcarrepairedinashortwhile.OnepossibleversionpolishpolishyourwritingParagraph2：Aswedrovealong,aflowershopcameintosightontheroad.Ipacedquicklyintotheflowershop,whereabunchofflowersglowing(绚丽夺目)redinfullbloomcaughtmyeyes.Havingwitnessedtheeffectofmymother'skindness,Idecidedtosendmomthesweetflowers.Soon,theheavenlyscentfilledthecaragain.Momtriedtohideherexcitement,butthewaterytearsfilledhereyes.Throughthistrip,Idiscoveredthat,despitemyoccasionalangertowardsher,Iactuallyfeltproudofher.Justatthatmoment,apleasantwindwasblowing,makingtheleavesoftreesswinginglightlyasiftobecheeringus.OnepossibleversionpolishyourwritingVariouswaystoexpressworriesadj.:actions:effectivedialogues:surroundings:simile:比喻Worriedanddepressed,Iwaswanderingalongtheroadaimlessly.Afterwhatseemedtobeages,Iscratchedmyhead,stampedmyfootandwalkedbackandforthhopelessly.“Whatifnooneiswillingtohelpus?Wouldwediefromthirsty?”Imurmuredinalowvoice.Theairwasthickandthehotsunwasburningus,Istoodthereclumsilywithnothingtodo.Deadlysilenceswallowedtheroadthoroughly,leavingnothingbuthopelessness.Iwaswalkingbackandforthlikeanantonahotpan.Differentexpressionsonendingsfeelingending:Justatthatmoment,arippleof(一阵)excitementbegantocrossmyface.surroundingending:Apleasantbreezewasblowing,makingtheleavesoftreesswinginglightlyasiftobecheeringforus.meaningfulending:Whatmomdidremindedmeofafamoussaying:Rosesgiven,fragranceinhand.Tip4:Thepassagecanbeendedvariouslyusing___________________________________________________________________.naturalendi