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11.WritingTaskTopics:…ProblemforCollegeStudentsTimeforhandingin:NextFriday2.Development:ageneralstatement——problem——solution1——solution2——evaluation(Therearesomepossibledifferencesinthepatternbutthebasicpartsareproblemsandsolutions.)3.UsefulExpressionsforProblem-Solution-EvaluationPattern:Problem:...isreallyaproblem;oneofthedifficultiesis...;thequestionis…Solution:tosolve.../thesolutionto...Evaluation:bydoing...youwill...;…playavitalrolein...;itiseffectiveto...;asaresult4.SampleJobProblemsforGraduatesCollegegraduatesfinditincreasinglydifficulttogetarewardingjob.Onereasonperhapsisthatmanycollegesanduniversitiesfailtoadapttheircoursestothedevelopmentofeconomy.Second,thereisanoversupplyofgraduatesincertainspecialties.Whatshouldbedonetosolvethisproblem?Tobeginwith,thecollegesshouldgetstudentsoutoftheivorytowerandhavetheircoursesmeettheneedsofindustryandbusinesssoastosuittheon-goingdevelopmentofthenationaleconomy.Second,thegovernmentshouldprovidecollegegraduateswithmoreopportunitiestodevelopnewskills.Thethirdsolution,Ithink,istoadoptstrongmeasuresofbirthcontrolbecausethegreaterthepopulation,thelesstheopportunityforeveryonetogetajob.作文模式Model1:Problem-solutionWriting12005年Directions:Writeanessayof160-200wordsbasedonthefollowingdrawing.Inyouressay,youshouldfirstdescribethedrawing,theninterpretitsmeaningandgiveyourcommentonit.1.养老“足球赛”ModelCompositionA“FootballMatch”ofTakingCareofParentsAsisillustratedinthecartoon,thefourchildrenareplayinga“footballmatch”,however,the“ball”istheiroldfather.Whiletheeldestsonkickshisfatherout,hisyoungerbrothersandsisterareservingas“goalkeepers”,tryingtokeeptheirfatheroutoftheir“goals”.Thereisnodenyingthatthispicturerevealsacommonyetseriousprobleminourcountry.Inthefirstplace,manyyoungpeopleareenjoyingacomfortablelife,buttheyregardtheirparentsasburdens.Inthesecondplace,theirparentshavegrownsophysicallyweakthattheycannotsupportthemselves.Iftheirchildrendon’ttakecareofthem,theywillbereducedtoutterpoverty.Lastbutnotleast,tobekindtoone’sparentsistheheightofvirtueinourtradition.AsfarasIamconcerned,weshoulddosomethingtopreventsuchanevilphenomenonfromhappeningagain.Tobeginwith,allthesocietyshouldcondemnsuchawrongdoingandthesechildrenshouldbepunishedbylaw.What’smore,everycitizenmustrealizeitisourdutytosupportourparentswhentheyareold.Onlywiththejointeffortscanwehopetosolvethis2problem.Writing2OurRightAttitudesTowardAnimalsYouressayshouldmeettherequirementsbelow:1)Describethecartoonanddeducethepurposeofthedrawerofthecartoon;2)Statethenegativeeffectsofeatingwildanimals;and3)Giveyoursuggestionastohowtosolvetheproblem.Asisdepictedinthecartoon,boththecatandsnakeareonthetable,withtearsintheireyes,waitingtobeeatenbyhumans.Throughthispicture,thedrawercondemnstheeatingofwildanimalsandcallsforoursympathyforandprotectionofthem.Eatingwildanimalsgivesrisetoalotofnegativeeffects.Inthefirstplace,asmanywildanimalscarryvirusesorparasites,whenweeatthem,thevirusesorparasitesenterourbodies,thuscausingalotofillnesses.Thesevereacuterespiratorysyndromeisacaseinpoint.Itwasreportedthatthevirusderivedfroma“delicious”animalandthediseasehasclaimedthousandsoflivesthroughouttheworldandbroughtgreatdamagestopeople’sproperties.Inthesecondplace,sinceanimalsareanindispensablepartofourenvironment,theextinctionofsomeanimalsmaydisturbthenaturalbalance.Lastbutnotleast,eatingwildanimalsiscruel.Afterall,wildanimalsareourclosefriends.Sinceeatinganimalscausessomanyharms,weshouldworktogethertoputanendtotheproblem.Ontheonehand,thegovernmentshouldmakestricterlawstoprohibitpeoplefromeatingwildanimals,justasourgovernmenthasbeendoing.Ontheotherhand,allthepeopleshouldrealizetheharmsofeatingwildanimalsandrefrainfromdoingso.Onlythroughthesemeasurescanwehopetosolvetheproblem.Writing3Thereisadiscussioninthenewspaperabouttheemploymentproblemsofcollegegraduates.Accordingtoarecentsurvey,manygraduateswillbeunabletofindajob.Youshouldwritealettertothenewspaperto1)Explainthestatisticsinthetable;2)Givethereasonsforthephenomenon,and3)Proposeyoursuggestionsastohowtosolvetheproblem.EmploymentProblemsofCollegeGraduatesAsisdemonstratedinthetable,moreandmorecollegegraduatesareoutofajobinourcountry,whichisaseriousproblemtooureconomicdevelopmentandsocialsecurityaswellasahindrancetoourbuildinga“harmonioussociety”.Itisestimatedthatin2005,therewillbe1,000,000unemployedgraduates,morethantwicethenumberin2002.Thereareseveralreasonsforthisphenomenon.Inthefirstplace,astheenrollmentofcollegestudentshasgrownbymorethan30%annuallysince1998,moreandmorestudentsarethrownintothelabormarket.However,ourannualGDPgrowthhasbeenabout8%.Therefore,thesupplyoflaborexceedsthedemand,henceashortageofpositions.Inthesecondplace,manygraduatesdonotwanttoworkinmedium-sizedandsmallcitiesortownswheretheyaremostneeded.Instead,toomanyofthemcrowdinbigcitieslikeBeijing,ShanghaiorGuangzhou.Lastbutnotleast,theknowledgeofmanystudentsisoutofdate.Asaresulttheycannotmeettherequirementsofthefactoriesandcompanies.Seriousastheproblemseems,wecancomeupwithsomemeasurestodealwithit.Onone3hand,thegovernmentshoulddev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