连俊霞国内考试部北京新东方学校考研写作攻略2020/11/16writing2书信写作满分策略•格式和语域恰当:一半分数拿到;•包含所有内容:再加一分;•使用正确语法结构和词汇:再加二分;•文字连贯、层次清晰:再加二分;•附加分:书写整齐语域:正式——使用礼貌表达,不用缩略语(对公)半正式—可以使用缩略和口语表达(对私2008)非正式(省略号)——考试不用2020/11/16writing3一、书信类应用文写作1.1注意事项•(英语一)Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter.Use“LiMing”instead.(英语二)Use“ZhangWei”instead.Donotwritetheaddress.•写作时允许在作文中使用提示语中出现过的关键词,但使用提示语中出现过的词组或句子将被扣分。•如影响交际,产生歧义或难以看懂,分数将降低一个档次。2020/11/16writing4一、书信类应用文写作1.2书信格式903ElmSt.Liberty,Ohio80701December18,2009Dr.WaltWhitmanChairman,DepartmentofPhysicsPennsylvaniaStateUniversityUniversityPark,Pa.16802DearDr.Whitman,Sincerelyyours,LiMing.称呼(顶头写),正文(空Dear),落款(靠右写)2020/11/16writing51.2书信格式1.2.1称呼格式•不知道对方姓名:ToWhomItMayConcern,DearSirorMadam,(一定男女搭配)•知道对方姓名,(对公)DearMr.Green,DearMrs.Bush,DearMissWang,DearMs.Li,(对私)DearBob,DearLucy,•熟人,题目中无姓名Dearfriend,DearBob/Tom,启示:称呼后面用逗号,首字母大写(or例外)2020/11/16writing61.2书信格式1.2.2落款格式ToWhomItMayConcern,Iamwritingto……Sincerelyyours,LiMing启示:Sincerelyyours,万能用LiMing/ZhangWei后面没有点.2020/11/16writing7一、书信类应用文写作1.3书信三点式(1)写作目的段——细化段——重申或者期待段总:8句;长句:3句左右(2)已考信函类别:辞职信(2005);申请信(2006);道歉信(2008);建议信(2007&2009);感谢信(2010英语二);推荐信(2011);祝贺信(2011英语二)2020/11/16writing81.3书信三点式1.3.1写作目的常用表达(1)直入主题Iamwritingto(informyouthat)…(2)自我介绍Asastudentofouruniversity/acitizen,Iamwritingto(informyouthat)…1.3.2细化段注意事项(1)包含所有内容(背景改写,题目要求)(2)层次清楚——first,second,…(3)两个左右复杂句2020/11/16writing91.3书信三点式1.3.3重申或期待段(1)表示感谢:Thankyouforyourtimeandconsideration.(2)重申主题:Iamsorryagainforalltheinconveniencecaused.Thankyouagainforyourhospitality.(3)表示期待:Iamlookingforwardtoyourearliestreply/hearingfromyousoon.Iamlookingforwardyourpropersolutiontothisproblem.2020/11/16writing10一、书信类应用文写作1.4书信写作步骤•审题——确定称呼,信件类别,内容要求•书写称呼与答题纸上•开始写作——内容全部覆盖(背景&要求)•不忘落款——Sincerelyyours,•检查2020/11/16writing112009年•Restrictionsontheuseofplasticbagshavenotbeensosuccessfulinsomeregions.“Whitepollution”isstillgoingon.Writealettertotheeditor(s)ofyourlocalnewspaperto•1)giveyouropinionsbrieflyand•2)maketwoorthreesuggestions•背景改写:TheuseofplasticbagshasbeenrestrictedsinceJune1,2008,buttheresultisnotthatgood/satisfying.Inotherwords,“WhitePollution”isnotstoppedradically.背景要求1要求2被动改写称呼建议信2020/11/16writing122009年书信框架DearEditors,/ToWhomItMayConcern,Asacitizen,Iamwritingtoexpressmyopinionabout“WhitePollution”.细化(题目背景改写,建议内容)Thankyouforyourtimeandconsideration.Iamlookingforwardtoyourearliestreply.Sincerelyyours,LiMing•34words.2020/11/16writing132009范文DearEditor,I'masincerereaderofyournewspaperandIlikeyourdiscussionofthesocialproblems.NowIwanttogivesomeopinionsofmyselfabouttheWhitePollution.Asweknow,regulationwasmadetosolvetheprobleminJune1stof2008.Theuseofplasticbagswasrestrictedinthesupermarketandmanyothershopsfreely.Atthebeginning,itwascarriedonwell,butnowIfoundplasticbagswereusedinsomesmallshopsforfreeorwithnopay.regular/loyalonforfreefindare背景改写2020/11/16writing142009年范文Iamwritingtotellyouthatweshouldsolvethisproblemsoonwiththehelpofyournewspaper.Youcouldmakesomeinvestigatorsaboutitandwritesomereportsofit,soastoappealtoallthepeople'sattentionsofoursociety.Sincerelyyours,LiMing•格式正确•覆盖所有内容•使用衔接手段•词汇与语法正确investigation.两点建议2020/11/16writing152011年(英语一)•Writealettertoafriendofyoursto1)recommendoneofyourfavoritemoviesand2)givereasonsforyourrecommendation.Yourshouldwriteabout100wordsonANSWERSHEET2.Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter.User“LiMing”instead.Donotwritertheaddress.(10points)2020/11/16writing162011年书信框架Dearfriend/Bob,Iamwritingtorecommendawonderfulmovietoyou——“ForrestGump”.Ibetyouwillloveit.…Ihopeyoulikeit,andlookforwardtoyourearlyreply.Sincerelyyours,LiMing36words2020/11/16writing172011年范文Dearfriend/Bob,Iamwritingtorecommendawonderfulmovietoyou——“ForrestGump”.Ibetyouwillloveit.Iwouldliketosharetheamazingfilmwithyouinthat:First,itsplotisgreatandmeaningful,especiallythepartthatForrestneverstopsdoingwhathelikesandachievesthefinalsuccess;目的亲近原因1:情节2020/11/16writing182011年范文…;second,totellthetruth,Iwasmovedbythemovietotearsbecauseofhismother’sselflesssacrificeforherboy,whichremindsmeofpracticingfilialpietytorepaymyparentsfortheirdevotiontomybirthandgrowth.Ihopeyoulikeit,andlookforwardtoyourearlyreply.Sincerelyyours,LiMing114words原因2:感人且教育定从期待2020/11/16writing192011年(英语二)•SupposeyourcousinLiMinghasjustbeenadmittedtoauniversity.Writehim/heraletterto(1)congratulatehim/her;and(2)Givehimsomeadviceforthecollegelife.Yourshouldwriteabout100wordsonANSWERSHEET2.Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter.User“ZhangWei”instead.Donotwritertheaddress.(10points)2020/11/16writing20201英语二书信框架DearLiMing,IamwritingtocongratulateyouonyourgraduationfromhighschoolandenteringPekingUniversity,oneofthetopuniversitiesinChina.…Congratulationstoyouagain.AndIwishyougoodluckinthepursuitofahigheracademicdegree.Sincerelyyours,47wordsZhangWei2020/11/16writing21范文DearLiMing,IamwritingtocongratulateyouonyourgraduationfromhighschoolandenteringPekingUniversity,oneofthetopuniversitiesinChina.YourfamilyandIaresoproudofyouforwhatyouhavegot,andyoudeserveallofthisonbasisofyourprevioushardwork.Furthermore,collegeisanewbeginningandachancetomak