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(一)LastweekmyparentsandItookatwo-daystriptoEmeiMountaininSichuan.Aseveryoneknows,it’sfamousmountainwithallkindsofplantsandanimals.Theweatherwasfine.Itwasaboutnoonwearrivedatthefootofthemountain.Thethreeofthemwereveryexcited.Asweclimbedthemountain,wefedmonkeys,visitingtemplesandtoldstories.OnthewayupIwasbusytakingpicturesincethescenerywassobeautiful.Thetimepassesquickly.Eveningcamedown.Wespentthenightinahotelatthetopofthemountain.Thefoodwasexpensiveandtheservicewasgood.IwassotiredthatIfellasleepatthemomentmyheadtouchedthepillow.（1）第一行：two-days改为two-day第二行：mountain前加a第三行：noon后加when第四行：them改为us第五行：visiting改为visited第六行：pictures；passed第七行：去down第八行：and改为but第九行：去at（二）Manyteachersworryabouttheeffectsoftelevisionwithyoungpeople.Accordingtostudies,manychildrenspendmoretimewatchingtelevisionthantheyspendinschool.Becausesomuchviewing,childrenmaynotbedevelopthehabitofreadandtheabilitytoenjoythemselves.Nooneworriesmuchabouttheradioprogramyoungpeoplelistento,althoughradioscanbeverynoise.Teachersalsowonderabouttheeffectsoftelevisioncommercials.Ononeyeartheaveragechildwillsee25,000televisioncommercials,allplannedandwrittenbygrown-upstomakechildrentowantthingsthattheydon'trealneed.（2）第一行：with改为on第二行：many改为some第三行：becauseof第四行：删去be；read改为reading第五行：programs第六行：noisy第七行：On改为In第八行：去掉want前的to；real改为really（三）I’mthecaptainofourschoolteamsowithmyfellowplayerswe’vewonseveralgames.Therewillanimportantgamenextmonth.Butoneofthebestplayerinourteamtoldmejustthenthathewouldn’tplaybasketballoncemore.Hisparentsaskedhimtospendinmoretimepreparingforthecollegeentranceexamination.Ifeelsorrytohim.Buthisparentsthinkgotocollegeismoreimportantthanplayingsportsandcollegewastheonlyplaceforasmartboylikehisson.Somyfriendhadnochoice.Hewantedtomaketheirparentshappy.(3)第一行：so改为and第二行：will后加be第三行：player改为players；then改为now第四行：once改为any；删去in第五行：to改为for第六行：go改为going；第七行：was改为is第八行：their改为his(四)WhenIfirstlearnedtowriteEnglish,Iranintomanydifficulties.ThemainproblemwasinthatIalwaysthoughtinChineseandtriedtotranslateanythingintoEnglish.Myteacheradvisedmetokeepmydiary.Ifollowedheradviceandshouldputdown100wordsorsoeachday.SoonIbegantoenjoytalktomyselfonpaperasIwaslearningtoexpressmeinsimpleEnglish.OnedayIwrotealittlestoryandshowedtomyteacher.Shelikeditverymuchandreadsittotheclass.Allsaidthestorywasagoodone.Theirwordwereagreatencouragementtome.(4)第一行：write后加in第二行：去掉第一个in第三行：anything改为everything第四行：my改为a；去掉should第五行：talk改为talking第六行：me改为myself第七行：showed后加it第八行：reads改为read；word改为words（五）DearRalph,I’manewcomerhereofasmalltown.Iwoulddescribemyselfasshyandquietly.Beforemyclassmates,itseemsalwaysdifficultformetodothingsaswellthem.I'msuretheywilllaughtomeandseemeasafool.SoIfeelhappyeveryday.Besides,Ihavefewfriends.Idon'tknowthattheydon'tliketotalkwithme.Sometimes,wetalkedtoeachotherverywellinclass,butafterclasswebecomestrangeratonce.Iamtryingtoimprovethesituationsinceitdoesn’tseemtowork.CanyoutellmeaboutwhatIshoulddo?Yours,XiaoWei(5)第一行：of改为from第二行：quietly改为quiet第三行：well后加as；to改为at第四行：happy改为unhappy/sad第五行：that改为why；talked改为talk第六行：stranger改为strangers第七行：since改为but第八行：去掉about（六）OnThursdayIwillhavetodecidewhatIwantmyselftodooveraweekend.IamthinkingofmakingatriptoLondon,andvisittheBritishMuseumandsomeparks.ButIhavespentlotmymoney,soIcannotevengooutoftown.Imaygotoafilm,oraconcert.Yes,aconcertcanbeveryexcited.Youcanwatchyourstarswhileenjoyingyourfavoritemusic.Sothen,aconcertcostsomuch.Imayjustlistentomusic,Ihavesomerecordsgivingtomeasbirthdaygifts.IfIlistentomyownrecords,therearenoneedtospendmoney.Allright.That’showI'mgoingtodo.(6)第一行：划掉myself；a改为the第二行：visit改为visiting第三行：my前加of第四行：excited改为exciting第五行：So改为But第六行：cost改为costs；giving改为given第七行：are改为is第八行：how改为what（七）DearSusan,I’mverygladtohearaboutyouarecomingtovisitmethenextFriday.Unfortunately,Iwon’tbeabletomeetyouattheairportalthoughIhaveclassesintheafternoon.Youwon’tfinddifficulttogettothecitycenter.Theairportbusleavesevery30minuteandwilltakeyourightlytotheFriendshipHotel.MyclasswillbeoverbythenorIwillpickyouupthere.Iwilltakeyoutogethertoahot-potrestaurantfordinnerandwe’lltalkwithourplanfortheweekendoverdinner.HavingapleasanttripandseeyouFriday.Yours,ZhangMing（7）第一行：去掉about；去掉the第二行：although改为because/as第三行：find后加it第四行：minute改为minutes；rightly改为right第五行：or改为and；去掉together；第六行：with改为about第七行：Having改为Have(八)YoucanfindallkindsinformationinjustafewminuteontheInternet.It’slikegoingtoahugelibrarywithouthavetowalkaroundtofindyourbooks.Recentlyeventhough,manypeoplehavebeendiscussingthedangersoftheInternet.TheyhavebeenreportsinAmericaaboutpeopletryingtostealpersonInformationsforbadpurposes.FindinginformationontheNetiseasily.Butnotallinformationaregoodtosociety.Forexample,youcanfindsuchinformationlikehowtokillpeople.Theproblemwillbecomemoreseriousinthefuture.（8）第一行：kinds改为kindsof；minute改为minutes第二行：have改为having第三行：去掉even第四行：They改为There；person改为personal第五行：informations改为information；easily改为easy第六行：are改为is第七行：what改为how（九）Nowadaysmillionsofpeopleofallagetakepleasureinahobbywhichisbothinterestedandfun.Andeveryyearmoreandmorepeoplestartasta