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Howtowritealetterforadvice如何写好建议信高考作文得分点分析1.内容分----72.结构分----63.词句分---64.卷面分---6卷面分---6卷面：1.字迹工整美观；2.不能涂改；1）一笔一画，不可连笔；2）单词与单词之间距离相等，单词的字母与字母之间距离也要相等。3）26个英文字母一定要写的饱满和匀称。养成打草稿的习惯和平时认真书写的习惯。内容分---6一般来说，要点要全，且比要求的字数多30-50字是比较好的，比如100词的作文应该写到130-150词。要求120词的就写到150-180词。怎么样才能做到呢？对关键信息，进行合理的拓展，使行文连贯。假如你是某英文报“PLEASETELLME”专栏的编辑Robert。某校高二年级学生Lucy因担心无法适应忙碌的高三生活而写信向你求助。请你用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1、对该同学存在的问题表示理解2、提出建议并给出理由注意：词数120左右（信的开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。第一步：审题养成重视审题的习惯。思考的问题样题分析第几人称？（person）文章的题材是什么？要写的文章主题是什么(topic)动作是什么时候发生的？(时态)(when)第二人称写一封信建议：如何解除对高三生活的担忧一般现在时开门见山，表明写作意图。在本段中，写信人应该先简单介绍自己，然后陈述事由，表明写信的目的及原因。委婉地提出建议及改进措施，或提出忠告。礼貌地总结并期盼对方的回复。theformofasuggestionletterGreeting,Body:1stpart:2ndpart:3rdpart:Complimentaryclose(结束语),SignaturethepurposesuggestionsaskthereceivertoconsiderthesuggestionsandtakethemDear…,Yourssincerely,AliceMajor建议的构思（拓展）⑴说明建议的内容(要点)；⑵提出具体建议的原因；⑶指出采纳建议的益处。注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。第二步：搜索相关词组或句型问题建议高二年级学生Lucy因担心无法适应忙碌的高三生活而写信向你求助1.保持自信和乐观。2.列好时间表3.积极去解决问题。原因：是实现目标的基础。益处：逐渐取得进步方法：遇困难求助师生建议的构思---委婉表达注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。表达建议常用句式：You’dbetterdosth…It’sbetterforyouto…Inmyopinion/AsfarasIamconcernedFrommypointofview…Iwouldliketosuggestthat…Foronething…foranother…ontheonehand…ontheotherhand…Firstly…secondly…thirdly…/First…then…laterTobegin/startwith…what’smore……lastbutnotleast…Inaword/Inconclusion…4）Translations.将要点的内容翻译成地道的英文句子，组句成篇（打草稿）5）检查，修改，誊写。Actually,itiscommonformoststudentstobeanxiousaboutthebusyandtoughschoollifeofSeniorThree,soyouneedn’tworrytoomuch.Myadviceisasfollows.形式主语句型and,so,or前面有逗号隔开，连接两个句子副词连词First,youshouldbeconfidentandoptimistic,Secondly,yououghttomakeproperschedulesforyourstudiesandlife..Thirdly,youneedtolearntosolveyourproblemsactively.Whenfacedwithdifficultiesinyourlife,youcanalwaysaskyourteachersorclassmatesforadvice,定语从句倒装状语从句定语从句副词=help用短语来代替单词Ihopethatthesesuggestionswillwork.AndIamdyingtoreceivingyourgoodnews./Ican'twaittohearfromyouagain./Don'thesitatetowritetomeaboutyourgreatprogress.=wantto用短语来代替单词=wantto用短语来代短语=tell用短语来代替单词如何算是一篇好文章？－覆盖了所有的要点－应用了较多的语法结构和词汇－有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。要点全词汇,句型（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）语言地道连接词如何做到词汇，句型的高级化和语法多样化infactasamatteroffactbesidesinadditioninmyopinionasfarasIamconcernedfirst/firstlyfirstofallsuddenlyallofasuddenhoweveronthecontraryhavetodosth.havenochoicebuttodosth.（1）should•Sboughttodosth.•Sbbesupposedtodosth.•Whynotdosth?•Itisbeneficialforyoutodosth.•IfIwereyou,Iwoulddosth.•Itishightimethatsbdidsth.（2）want•sbplantodosth.•sbwouldliketodosth.•sbcan’twaittodosth.•sbdesiretodosth.渴望做某事。•sbhasagreatdesiretodosth.（3）likesth•sbbefondofsth/doingsth.喜欢…•sbiscrazyaboutsth/doingsth.•sbfallinlovewithsth.sb爱上sth。（4）good•great/wonderful•excellent棒极了的，极好的•fantastic棒极了的，极好的•brilliant棒极了的，极好的•fabulous棒极了的，极好的•superb棒极了的，极好的•terrific棒极了的，极好的•meaningful有意义的•educational有教育意义的（5）beautiful•attractive吸引人的，迷人的•appealing*吸引人的，迷人的•fascinating*吸引人的，迷人的（6）difficult•challenging有挑战性的（7）important•vital重要的，必不可少的•significant*至关重要的•essential*必要的（8）we•Weteenagers….我们青少年…•Wemiddleschoolstudents…我们中学生…•WeEnglishlearners…我们英语学习者…（10）very•extremely极端地•surprisingly令人惊讶地（9）Inmyopinion,/Ithink…•Frommyperspective,…从我观点看来…•Frommypointofview,..从我观点看来…•AsfarasIamconcerned,…就我而言•Personally,…在我看来,…适当运用模板建议信开头常用句式：Iamveryhappytohearfromyou.Iamverygladtohearthatyouwanttoasksomeadvice/suggestionsabout..Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewson/concerning…Youhaveaskedformyadvicewithregardto/on…andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.Thankyoufortrustingme.It’smypleasuretogiveyousomesuggestions.结尾常用句式：Ihopethatmyopinions/suggestionsareofhelptoyou,andpleasefeelfreetocontactmeformorequestions.Iamlookingforwardstoyourconsiderationaboutmyproposals/suggestions/opinions.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementslater.Bestwishes(foryou).练习：假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写回信。要点：⑴参加中文学习班；⑵看中文书刊、电视；⑶学唱中文歌曲；⑷交中国朋友。注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；实战演练Dear________，(Iamveryhappytohearfromyou.)Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning/withregardto______________________.Firstofall,Thankyoufortrustingme.Meanwhile,It’smypleasuretogiveyousomesuggestions.Firstly,itwouldbebetterifyou________________Secondly,itwouldbeagoodideaforyouto________________________________Thirdly,youcanalsobenefitalotfrom____________________________.Finally,itisessentialthatyoushould___________________________.howtolearnChinesewellwatchTVandreadbooks,newspapersandmagazines.learningandsingingChinesesongsmakemorefriendswithChinesepeoplePetertakeChinesecourses.拓展：通过这样做，你不仅可以了解中国文化而且有更多的机会去提高汉语水平。倒装拓展：众所周知，歌曲可以使人放松，从而提高你对汉语的兴趣。非限制性定语从句/it拓展：你用中文和她们聊天越多，你的中文就说的越流利。Themore...thebetter...拓展：这是最传统也是最有效的学习汉语的方式之一。定语从句,whichisoneofthemosttraditionalandefficientwaysoflearningChineseBydoingthis,notonlycanyougetfamiliarwithChineseculture,butalsoyouwillhavemorechancestoimproveyourChinese.Asiswell-known,songscanberelaxingandthereforemaymakeitpossibleforyoutobecomemoreinterestedinlearningChinese.ThemoreyouchatwiththeminChinese,themorefluentyourChinesewillbecome.Inaword,I________________________(期待)yourconsiderationaboutsuggestions.Ihopethatmyopinions_________________(会帮助你)you.Bestwishes(fo