历年考研英语1大作文范文模板

2000年Directions:StudythefollowingtwopicturescarefullyandwriteanessaytoA.describethepictures,B.deducethepurposeofthedrawerofthepictures,andC.suggestcounter-measures.Youshouldwriteabout200wordsneatlyonANSWERSHEET2.(15points)ABriefHistoryofWorldCommercialFishingAsisshowninthepictures,wecanseeclearlythatwiththeincreaseofcommercialfishing,thenumberoffishessharplydecreased.Inonepicture,therewerevariouskindsoffishandonlyonefishing-boatin1900.Onthecontrary,in1995therewasonlyonefish,butmanyfishing-boats.Thepurposeofthispictureistoshowusthatdueattentionhastobepaidtothedecreaseofoceanresources.Owingtoover-fishing,thenumberoffisheshasobviouslydecreased.Ifweletthissituationgoasitis,wewon’tknowwherefishisinthefuture.Bythattime,ourenvironmentwillsufferagreatdestruction.Therefore,itisimperativeforustotakedrasticmeasures.Foronething,weshouldappealtoourauthoritiestomakestrictlawstocontrolcommercialfishing.Foranother,weshouldenhancetheawarenessofpeoplethattheoceanresourcesareveryvitaltous.Onlyinthiswaycanweprotectouroceanresources.Also,Ibelievethatwehumanbeingscanovercomethisdifficulty,andwewillhaveabrightfuture.历年考研英语（一）大作文写作范文及模板【评语】内容切题，包括提纲的全部要点；文章通顺，语言流畅，句式变化多样；用词面较宽；虽有个别不妥之处，但该生基本功较好，表达能力较强；长度符合要求。得分14分。（注意该年作文总分为15分。）2003年Directions:Studythefollowingsetofdrawingscarefullyandwriteanessayinwhichyoushould1)describethesetofdrawings,interpretitsmeaning,and2)pointoutitsimplicationsinourlife.Youshouldwriteabout200wordsneatlyontheANSWERSHEET.温室花朵经不起风雨（1）Asdepictedinthepictures,thefloweringreenhousecannotstandfortheseverestormsandmaybedeadinthenearfuture.Whatdoestheauthorreallywanttotellus?Inmyopinion,therealimplicationoftheauthoristhateveryonehastomeetdifficultiesintheirlifeexperiences,sowehavetomakeadequatepreparationsforthem.Thereisnodenyingthatamajorityofyoungpeople,especiallywhoareendoredbytheirrichparents,taketheirhappinessforgranted.Iamfullyconvincedthattheymayinevitablesufferfromfailuresintheirfuture.Forthesimplereasonisthattheyliketheflowersingreenhouse.Therefore,itisnecessaryforthoseparentstotakesomemeasurestocontrolthistrendwhichmayleadtotheirchildren’sfailure.ThebestwaytosolvethisproblemIthinkistogiveyoungpeopleopportunitiestodothingsindependently.Onlyinthiswaycanyoungpeopleconfrontwithdifficultiesanddealwiththemeasily.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iamgreatlyinfavoroftheideathatencouragingyounggenerationpracticeinhardenvironments.Becauseyoungpeoplecanbenefitalotfromtheirownexperiencesinhardtimesandearnenoughconfidencetofacetheirfuturechallenges.【评语】内容切题，句式有一定变化，表达清楚，语言错误少，但第一部分描述不够，因此降档，扣除4分，得分16分。（2）ItgoeswithoutsayingthatthedrawingsaimatrevealingacommonandseriousprobleminChina:howtoeducateandcultivatetheyoung.Let’stakeacloserlookatthedrawings.Inanidealcondition,theflowerblooms.Butwhenmovedoutofthegreenhouse,itperishesundertherainandstorm.Itisobviousthatthefloweringreenhousecan’twithstandwindandrains.NowadaystheyounggenerationinChina,liketheflowerinthegreenhouse,liveunderthefullprotectionfromtheirparents.Parentswanttoshowalltheirlovetotheirchildren.Theygivetheirchildrenallthebestthingstheycanaffordanddonotlettheirchildrendoanythingathome.Self-centerednessandarbitrarinesshavebecomeatraitoftheyounggeneration.Onceleavingtheirparents,manyyoungpeoplecannotmakealivingoftheirown.Theygetlostwhensteppingintothecomplexrealityandcannotfaceanyhardshipsanddifficulties.Childeducationhasbecomeoneofthemostpopulartopicsdiscussednotonlybyeducationalexperts,butalsobypeopleinallwalksoflife.Thefailureofchildeducationdoesmoreharmtothedevelopmentofoursocietyandourcivilizationthantothechildrenthemselves.Thus,it’shightimethatparents,educatorsandthegovernmentmadeconcertedeffortstoputanendtothissituation.【评语】内容切题，包含了题目要求的全部内容，表达清楚、连贯，句式多样，用词恰当，符合英语表达方式，得分20分。该作文之所以能得满分，主要因为切中题目，而且语言规范、行文通畅，语句富有变化，用词准确生动。2004年Directions:Studythefollowingdrawingcarefullyandwriteanessayinwhichyoushould1.describethedrawing,2.interpretitsmeaning,and3.supportyourviewwithexamples.Youshouldwriteabout200wordsneatlyonANSWERSHEETⅡ.(20points)终点又是新起点【16分档】Thecartoondepictsavividpictureinwhichanathlete,drippingsweat,isrushingtotheend.Obviously,hewinsthematch,butthisisnotthekeymessageconveyedbythepicture.Themoststrikingfeatureofthedrawingisthatthesamelineismarkedasboth“thestart”and“theend”,whichindicatesthatalthoughtheathletecametothefinish,anewraceiswaitingforhim.Theideaconveyedbythecartoonisapparent:theendisanewstart.Itiswidelyacceptedthatweshouldnotbesatisfiedwiththepresentachievement,fornowadaysnewchallengesandcompetitionneverstop.Themarketeconomyandcompetitivesocietydrivesmanypeoplestudyinghardforhigheracademicdegrees,someofthemevenseekingtheopportunitiestostudyabroad.Weshouldsparenoeffortsimprovingourselves,masterhightechnologyandprofessionalskills.Thenwecanmakeuseofittodevoteourselvestosociety.Takemyfatherasanexample.Hewasdeniedhighereducationforhistoricalreasons.Butbyself-studyhebecameatechnicianinafactory.Manypeoplethoughthewascontent.Butheneverstoppedstudying.Hetookcoursesoflawinhissparetime.Laterhebecamealawyer.“Thefinishingpointisjustanewstartingpoint”,hesaidtome.【18分档】A