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台州市第一中学周永鹏台州市区读后续写讲评课2016.10.25barbecuesunriseaseaofcloudstentwindmill风车sausage香肠Q1：WheredidIcamp?Q2：Inyouropinion,whatshouldbetakentomakeagoodcamping?1.anappropriateamountoffoodanddrinks2.warmclothestostayawayfromcoldness3.first-aidboxincaseofemergency4.acellphonetotakepicturesandcontact5.acompaninontotakecareofeachother......MyfirstcampingtripKuocangMountainJaneTomlakewalkedclimbedatadistancestreamtohergreatjoyhelicopteryellowblousewho(人物）：setting（场景）：event（事件）：Jane&Tomlakestreamwalkedclimbedhelicopteryellowblousetohergreatjoyatadistance？Predict:Classify:ReadtheunderlinedkeywordsintheforestormountaininneedofhelpReadthetimelineofthestoryTimelineOneweekendinJulyJaneroseatthebreakofdayItwasdaybreakwhenshewokeup.Para.5-7Para.8Para.1-4Day2Day1Day3Who:What:How:Why:ReadDay1Jane&TomcampovernightbyalakeintheforestanunpleasantsubjectcameupleftTomandwalkedawayalone(acouple)Q1：HowdidJanerestoreherstrength?ReadDay2Shewalkedalongthestream.BecauseofthetreesGoingtoanopenareatoflagthemusingyellowblouseShedrankandateafewberries.Q2：WhatdidJanetrytodotoreturntothelake?Q3：Whydidshefailtobenoticedbythehelicopters?Q4：Whatwasherthoughttomakehelicoptersnoticeher?OneweekendinJuly,JaneandherhusbandTomdrovetoalaketo______overnight.Onthewaytheyhada______,Janewasso_____thatshewalkedaway.Suddenly,shefoundherself______andhadtostayforthenight.Thenextday,sherestoredherstrengthandtriedtoreturntothelakeby_______alongthestream.Sheheardtwo__________butfailedtobe_______becauseofthetrees.Soshewenttoan_____areato_____themusingyellowblouseiftheycamebackagain.Summarizethemainplotbasedonpara.1to6campquarrelangrylostwalkinghelicoptersnoticedopenflag1.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,Janewassoangrythat...(para1)2.“Tom!”shecried.“Help!”(para3)3.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhim...(para4)4.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.(para5)5.Isthatforme?(para6)6.Butnomorehelicopterscamethatafternoon.(para7)angryReadthechangeofJane'sfeelingsscaredregretfuldisappointed？Q：WhatkindofpersonisJane?joyfulhopefulimplusive冲动的smartPara.7:Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Para.8:Itwasdaybreakwhenshewokeup.Inpara.7,IfJane&Tomstilldidn'tfindeachother,Inpara.7,IfJane&Tomfinallyfoundeachother,Analyzethe2leadingsentences&predictthedevelopmentPossibility1Possibility2sheprobablyspentanothernightintheforest.Inpara.8,Janewasfinallyrescued.shemayspendthesecondnightathome/inthehospital.Inpara.8,Janewokeupandtheysharedlovingwords.Para.7:Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Q1:HowdidJanefeel?stayedintheforestforanothernightQ2:Whatcouldshedo?disappointed/hopelessQ3:WhatwasTomprobablydoingatthattime?worriedaboutJaneanddidn'tgiveupsearchingMakeanoutlineofPara.7Possibility1missedTomandherfamilymorePara.8:Itwasdaybreakwhenshewokeup.Q1:WhatwouldJanedoaftershewokeup?HeorRescueworkersspottedJaneinthehelicopterandlandedtorescueher.Q2:DidTomfinallyfindJane?How?Shewenttotheopenareawaitingforthehelicopter.Q3:Whatwouldbetheirreactionwhenmeetingeachotheragain?Theymayhugeachotherandsharelovingwords.MakeanoutlineofPara.8Possibility1JaneTomlakewalkedclimbedatadistancestreamtohergreatjoyhelicopteryellowblousePara.7:Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.1.Janewasdisappointedandhopeless.2.ShehadtostayintheforestforanothernightandmissedTom.3.Tomwasveryworriedanddidn'tgiveupsearching.Para.8:Itwasdaybreakwhenshewokeup.1.Janestillwenttotheopenareawaitingforthehelicopter.2.TomspottedJaneinthehelicopterandlandedtorescueher.3.Theyhuggedeachotherandsharelovingwords.Chooseatleast5underlinedkeywordsforfurtheruseJanewasdisappointedandhopeless.ShehadtostayintheforestforanothernightandmissedTom.Tomwasveryworriedanddidn'tgiveupsearching.Tiredanddisappointed,Janefelthopelessandcouldn'thelpblamingherself.Thesenseoffearandthedarknesssurroundedher,makingherfeelevenmoreregretfulforherfoolishbehavior.Shehadnochoicebuttostopforanothernight,spendingthelongandlonelynight.AgustofcoldwindblewandshestartedtomissthewarmthofTom'shug.HerdreamwasallaboutTomandthesweetmemoriesoftheirfamilylife.AsforTom,theconcernforhiswifegrewwiththepassageoftime.Hewasinthehelicopter,searchingforJanewithallhisefforts.Thoughthesearchprovedfruitless,thedifficultywasnomatchforhisdeeploveandfirmdetermination.ExpandtheoutlineofPara.7intoapassagePara.7:Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Tiredanddisappointed,Janefelthopelessandcouldn'thelpblamingherself.Thesenseoffearandthedarknesssurroundedher,makingherfeelevenmoreregretfulforherfoolishbehavior.Shehadnochoicebuttostopforanothernight,spendingthelongandlonelynight.AgustofcoldwindblewandshestartedtomissthewarmthofTom'shug.HerdreamwasallaboutTomandthesweetmemoriesoftheirfamilylife.AsforTom,theconcernforhiswifegrewwiththepassageoftime.Hewasinthehelicopter,searchingforJanewithallhisefforts.Thoughthesearchprovedfruitless,thedifficultywasnomatchforhisdeeploveandfirmdetermination.ExpandtheoutlineofPara.7intoapassageJanestillwenttotheopenareawa