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Writeatopiccomposition——byusinganoutlineandlinkingwordsWhatcanwedoontheInternet?WhatbadthingsarethereontheInternet?HowdoyouusetheInternetinarightway?Wecan…Thereare…Inmyopinion,weshould….FreetalkDifferentstudentshavedifferentideasabouttheInternet.MoststudentsthinkthattheInternetisveryusefulinourlife.Firstofall,wecanlearnalotfromtheInternet.Wecanalsolistentomusicandenjoymoviesforfun.Besides,ourlifebecomesmoreconvenientwiththeInternet.However,someotherstudentsfeeldifferently.TherearelotsofunhealthypicturesormoviesontheInternet.Theymakestudentsloseinterestintheirstudy.Inmyopinion,weshouldstayawayfromtheunhealthywebsitesandmakegooduseoftheInternet.Onlyinthisway,itcanhelpusstudentsalot.MoststudentsthinkthattheInternetisveryusefulinourlife.Firstofall,wecanlearnalotfromtheInternet.Wecanalsolistentomusicandenjoymoviesforfun.Besides,theInternetmakesourlifemoreconvenient.However,someotherstudentsfeeldifferently.TherearelotsofunhealthypicturesormoviesontheInternet.Theymakestudentsloseinterestintheirstudy.Compare(比较)TopicOntheInternetBeginningBody正文EndingMoststudents…Keysentence2Keysentence1However,…Inmyopinion,Onlyinthisway,Firstofall…also…BesidesOutline(提纲)Differentpeoplehavedifferentideasabout….Supportingsentenceslearn…fromlistento…,enjoy…make…moreconvenientunhealthy…,make…lose…statawayfrom,makegooduseofhelp…alotDifferentstudentshavedifferentideasabouttheInternet.MoststudentsthinkthattheInternetisveryusefulinourlife.Firstofall,wecanlearnalotfromtheInternet.Wecanalsolistentomusicandenjoymoviesforfun.Besides,ourlifebecomesmoreconvenientwiththeInternet.However,someotherstudentsfeeldifferently.TherearelotsofunhealthypicturesormoviesontheInternet.Theymakestudentsloseinterestintheirstudy.Inmyopinion,weshouldstayawayfromtheunhealthywebsitesandmakegooduseoftheInternet.Onlyinthisway,itcanhelpusstudentsalot.Linkingwords(连接词)EndingBeginningCanyouretellthecompositionaccordingtotheoutline?Outline(提纲)Retell(复述)Writingstrategy:Itishelpfultomakeanoutlinebeforewriting.写作前制定提纲对写作是有帮助的。TopicOntheInternetBeginningBody正文EndingMoststudents…Keysentence2Keysentence1However,…Inmyopinion,Onlyinthisway,Firstofall…also…BesidesDifferentpeoplehavedifferentideasabout….Supportingsentenceslearn…fromlistento…,enjoy…make…moreconvenientunhealthy…,make…lose…statawayfrom,makegooduseofhelp…alotRecentlyweheldadiscussionaboutwhetherthestudentsshouldusemobilephonesatschoolornot.Someofusthinkmobilephonesshouldbeusedatschool.Firstofall,wecansurftheInternetforinformationweneed.Withmobilephones,wecan____playgamesforfuninourfreetime.__________,wecancallourparentseasily.________,someotherstudentsdon’tthinkso.Somestudentssendmessagestotheirfriendsonmobilephonesinclass.It’sbadfortheirstudy._______________,wecanusetheschoolpublicphonesifnecessary.________,keepingamobilephonecostsmoney.Inmyopinion,it’snotagoodideatousemobilephonesatschool.Ifwedothat,wewillconcentratemoreonourmobilephonesthanourstudies.Completethecompositionwiththelinkingwordsgiven.Practice1What’smoreHoweveralsoOntheotherhandBesidesFirstofall…also…What’smoreRecentlyweheldadiscussionaboutwhetherthestudentsshouldusemobilephonesatschoolornot.Someofusthinkmobilephonesshouldbeusedatschool.Firstofall,wecansurftheInternetforinformationweneed.Withmobilephones,wecanalsoplaygamesforfuninourfreetime.What’smore,wecancallourparentseasily.However,someotherstudentsdon’tthinkso.Somestudentssendmessagesonmobilephonesinclass.Ontheotherhand,wecanusetheschoolpublicphonesifnecessary.Besides,keepingamobilephonecostsmoney.Inmyopinion,it’snotagoodideatousemobilephonesatschool.Ifwedothat,wewillconcentratemoreonourmobilephonesthanourstudies.Practice2Makeanoutlineforthecomposition.TopicOnmobilephonesBeginningBody正文EndingSomeofus…Keysentence2Keysentence1However,Inmyopinion,it’snotagoodidea…Ifwedothat,…Besides,…whetherthestudentsshoulduse….SupportingsentencessurftheInternetplaygamescall…easilysendmessagesuse…OntheonehandOntheotherhandcostmoney班长在主题班会课上组织大家讨论“九年级学生是否可以看电视？”，请你根据表格内容写一篇英文发言稿，陈述同学们的观点及理由，并附上你的观点及理由。WriteTopic:CanstudentsinGradeNinewatchTV?Body正文Ending()Beginning…,weheldadiscussionaboutifwe….Activity1:WriteanoutlineCanstudentsinGradeNinewatchTV?同学们的观点及理由赞成反对感到放松(feelrelaxed)浪费时间；(awasteoftime)获得知识(learnalot)影响学习；(haveabadinfluenceon)开阔视野(openupone’seyes)影响视力；(bebadfor)你的观点及理由…WriteWritingsuggestion2:Whileyouarewritingthecomposition,usesomelinkingwordscorrectlytomakeitmorefluent.Inourthemeclassmeeting,weheldadiscussionifwestudentsinGrade9canwatchTV.Someofusthinkthat__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Activity2:WriteacompositionHomeworkShareyourcompositionwithyourclassmatesandtrytoimproveit!Inourthemeclassmeeting,weheldadiscussionaboutifwestudentsinGrade9canwatchTV.SomeofusthinkthatwecanwatchTVathomealthoughweareinGradeNine.WatchingTVcanmakeusrelaxedafter