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Unit4Wildlifeprotection写作园地如何写劝说他人的建议信[写作指南]劝说他人的建议信是信件的一种，写信人就某一方面的问题提出建议，并试图让对方接受。在写这类作文时，要注意以下几点：1.劝说他人的建议信包括：写信的目的；提出自己的建议或看法；叙述理由，试图让对方接受。2.信件要简明扼要地阐述写信的目的，提出建议时语气要委婉、礼貌；叙述理由时要合理。[写作模板]Dear...，Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning..../Iwouldliketosuggestthat...Inmyopinion,youshould....First....Second....Finally....Ihopeyouwillfindthesuggestionspractical/useful/helpful.Yours，________(写信人名字)[常用句式]1.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning....我写信想表达我关于……的看法。2.Youhaveaskedmeforsomeadviceon...andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.你向我征求有关……的建议，我尽力提一些建议。3.Regardingyourproblemabout...I'dliketogivesomeadvice.关于你……的问题，我想提一些建议。4.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialtoexpressmyviewsconcerning...我认为说出我关于……的看法会有好处的。5.Iwouldliketosuggestthat....我想建议……6.IfIwereyou,Iwould....如果我是你的话，我会……7.AsfarasIamconcerned....就我而言……8.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionsuseful/helpful/practical.我希望你会发现这些建议有用/有帮助/实用。9.I'mwillingtodiscussthematterwithyouwheneveryouneedhelp.无论你什么时候需要帮助，我都愿意和你讨论这件事情。10.Ibelieveyouwilltakemysuggestionsintoaccount/consideration.我相信你会考虑我的建议。[感悟范文]假如你是李华，上周日去动物园，看到游客对动物乱扔石子，甚至往一头大熊头上泼水，对此你感到非常气愤。现在请你用英语就此事给某报社编辑写封信，并提出你的建议；请求该报帮助呼吁人们保护和爱护动物。要求：词数120个左右。[范文]DearEditor，HereIamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyexperienceinthezoolastSunday.Ifeelterriblysorryandashamedofwhatpeopledidtotheanimals.Thereweremanyanimalskeptinthezooanditseemedthattheywerenotbeingtreatedwell.Isawmanyvisitorsthrowsomestonesatthemwithoutmercyandthatsomevisitorsevenpouredwaterontoabigbear'shead,whichaffecteditbadly.Somepeoplejustlookedandburstintolaughter,butnoonethoughtthosewerewrong.Whatshouldwedotoprotectthemfrombeingbadlytreated?Firstly,weshouldmakepeopleknowanimalsareourfriendsandthattheyareimportanttous.Secondly,anyonewhotreatsanimalsbadlyshouldbefined.Lastly,ifpeoplecan'tstopdoingso,mysuggestionisthattheseanimalsbesetfreeintonature.Ihopeyoucanhelpeducatepeopletoloveandrespectanimals.Thankyou.Yoursfaithfully，LiHua技法讨论英文建议信常用句型Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsabout...Mysuggestionsareasfollows.Whatabout...?/Howabout...?Itismypleasuretoofferyousomeadviceon...Pleasetakegoodconsiderationofmyadvice.Thankyou.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestions/proposalspractical.IfyoucouldtakewhatIsuggestseriously,youwould...黄金表达1．词汇：①大笑______________②重要性______________③保护……免受______________④影响______________⑤忠诚地______________⑥仁慈______________burstintolaughterimportanceprotect...fromaffectfaithfullymercy2．句型：①有许多动物在动物园里被喂养。示例：Therearemanykindsofplantsgrowninthezoo.(过去分词短语作后置定语)仿写：________________________________________________________________________②任何虐待动物的人应该被罚款。示例：Anyonewhobreaksthelawshouldbepunished.(who引导的定语从句)仿写：________________________________________________________________________③一些游客甚至往一头大熊头上泼水，这对它影响很坏。示例：Hespokehighlyofhisroleintheplay，whichmadeothersunhappy.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)仿写：________________________________________________________________________Thereweremanyanimalskeptinthezoo.Anyonewhotreatsanimalsbadlyshouldbefined.Somevisitorsevenpouredwaterontoabigbear'shead,whichaffecteditbadly.亮点分析1．人称：第一人称。2．时态：过去时、现在时和将来时。3．结构：①写明写信的目的及你的感受；②描写你的所见所闻；③给出你的建议；④请求该报帮助。[类文演练]假如你是李华，请根据下表内容给中国野生动物保护协会CWCA(ChinaWildlifeConservationAssociation)的会长写一封100个词左右的建议信。内容如下：问题1990年藏羚羊的数量大约为100万只，现在只剩不到10万只，数量急剧减少原因为了获取藏羚羊的皮毛，牟取暴利(makegreatprofits)，非法捕杀藏羚羊的现象仍然时有发生建议利用贵协会的影响力加大对藏羚羊保护的宣传(publicize)力度；增加用于藏羚羊保护的资金；建议贵协会派出一些志愿者来协助保护藏羚羊联想词汇1．保护藏羚羊__________________________2．非法捕杀__________________________3．皮毛______________________________4．……的数量__________________________5．从……减少到……_________________________6．采取措施__________________________protecttheTibetanantelopeshuntandkillillegallyfurhenumberofdecreasefrom...to...takemeasures/steps连词成句1．据经常性的报道，为了获取藏羚羊的皮毛，很多藏羚羊正在遭到非法捕杀。ItisoftenreportedthattoomanyTibetanantelopes__________________________illegallyfortheirfur.2．通过贩卖它们的皮毛，非法捕猎者能获取高额利润。________________________，theillegalhunterscanmakegreatprofits.arebeinghuntedandkilledBysellingthefur3．1990年藏羚羊的数量大约为100万只，现在只剩不到10万只，数量急剧减少。ThenumberoftheTibetanantelopes__________________rapidly________about1,000,000in1990________lessthan100,000atpresent.4．我们应该加大对保护藏羚羊重要性的宣传。(publicize)We____________________________________protectingtheTibetanantelopes.isdecreasingshouldpublicizetheimportanceoffromto连句成章________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion：DearPresident，I'mwritingtogivesomesuggestionstofurtherprotecttheTibetanantelopes.Asisoftenreported,toomanyTibetanantelopesarebeinghuntedandkilledillegallyfortheirfur.Bysellingthefur,theillegalhunterscanmakegreatprofits;asaresult,thenumberoftheTibetanantelopesisdecreasingrapidlyfromabout1,000,000in1990tolessthan100,000atpresent.Immediatemeasuresmustbetakentosolvethepresentsituation.First,theimportanceofprotectingtheTibetanantelopesshouldbepublicizedthroughyourassociation.Second,wouldyouprovidemoremoneyfortheconservationoftheTibetanantelopes?Lastbutnotleast,IsuggestthatsomevolunteersbesenttheretohelpprotecttheTibetanantelopes.ThesearemysuggestionsandIhopetheycouldmeansomethingforabetterfutureoftheTibetanantelopes.Lookingforwardtoyourreply